Experimental essay, writing Harry Potter in the style of A Song of Ice and Fire.
"A Modern Wizard's Romance of Chivalty"
*Original heroine × Sirius
"-It was the best of times, it was the worst of times; it was an age of wisdom, it was an age of foolishness; it was a time of trust, it was a time of doubt; it was a season of light, it was a season of darkness; it was the spring of hope, it was the winter of despair. People have everything in front of them, people have nothing in front of them. People are on the road to heaven, people are heading to the gates of hell."
Purpose: Become a hero or die, there is no other choice.
Reader comments
I didn't know what to say for a while after reading it. The author's writing is very good, and I felt like I was reading a story written by a Western author. When I opened it and saw the beginning of the first chapter, I knew I should read it with my heart down. If you don't read this story attentively, it will be difficult to understand the mystery.
I personally don't read much Western works, so I don't know how to write A Song of Ice and Fire. This feeling of stringing together stories from different characters' perspectives is amazing, especially when I was looking at the catalog. Some names appeared once or twice... The feeling that their lives were gently revealed in front of me, and then ended there, is indescribable.
(The following contains spoilers, it is not recommended to read before reading the full text)
The article mentioned more than once that Nina's children grew up in the love of their parents. Sirius was both envious and disgusted by this, but after truly fully displaying the role of father, I couldn't help but think about love. Too many people have children because of love when they are young. There are too few people like James Lily who really love their children. When my colleagues mentioned that this daughter destroyed his future during the hunt, I thought, "Okay, what have I done?" This kind of responsibility must be shouldered. But later it was discovered that he was actually the father of the heroine... Will there be complaints after a seemingly happy love? Although I understand that people cannot be perfect and emotionally stable all the time, maybe I should have seen more clues from the previous slap and the meeting in the castle.
I also want to say that I like the three-dimensionality of the characters very much. The strengths and weaknesses of the characters are vividly displayed.
James' companionship and help to Nina as a friend, and his bullying of Eli, are written on both sides, a reliable but immature young man. Lucius, this article shows how smart Lucius is (laughs)
Tom's chapter was amazing too. I hate the villain very much. In the original film, he felt like a monster to me. I didn't expect that he could still have a peaceful conversation with the heroine as an "old friend". He looks like a person here.
Then Remus. Oh, I have to say that the sense of proportion is very good. In my impression, Remus is always gentle, empathetic, reliable, and affectionate. I know his strengths and weaknesses, and he has low self-esteem because of his status... But he usually appears with a perfect character. This article mentions a little bit of his dark side, but it's not offensive, and it's something I haven't thought of at all. After reading it I felt like I was a little closer to him.
Title, A Knight's Tale. In modern times when knights are no longer needed, they usually appear in fairy tales. Fairy tales, heroism, chaotic times, a group of young people, dreams... Sirius is like a qualified knight, and Nina is also a knight herself, giving me such a feeling.
Finally, there is the ending. The foreshadowing of the family line makes me less surprised by the ending. The direction of the love line, aside from the plot of losing magic, is largely due to the influence of the family on Nina, which led to "that day was the last time we met". I don't feel rushed, because in that era, this was normal. The more precarious the moment, the more possibilities there would be... Some may be good, everyone survived the darkness and welcomed the light, and some were burned out. This is a story with regrets, but you can see the stars twinkling.
The curtain came to an end. Although flowers should be scattered, I don't know if they were sparks or blood flowers... Her uncle gave her a gun, and she learned powerful magic. She couldn't become a Swamp Knight not because she was a girl, but because she had something else she wanted more.
Although I want to beat up the stupid dog, but considering that his talent is limited and he will live an invincible and miserable life, then forget it.
Harry hasn't been born yet, and Nina can't see it, but Lily will die soon, and nothing has changed.
The postscript mentioned that as a parent, there is no need to feel guilty. This statement made me let out a sigh of relief.
Speaking of which, writing a ship might not be so easy to get reviewed!
Sprinkle flowers for my wife again! This time it's really exciting! Prepare for a long review and start working hard for the unfounded foundation
Ahhhhh, you actually spit on my daughter
Harry: Lift my heart up and put it down again, you are so cruel jpg
I came here from another article by cyclohexane. (I won't tell you which article it is in order not to be unreasonable, but your pen name is easy to lose horse 2333.) When I first read it, I liked the other article better because the other article was more exciting.
When I knew that this article was going to be written in POV, I thought it would become messy, because this writing method does require solid writing skills and a lot of knowledge accumulation.
But when I read it carefully, I was completely carried away by the text. It may not have the same grand background and world view setting as Martin, but every small plot is an indispensable part of the whole, promoting the story; every character is shaped like the protagonist, rich and full, with flesh and blood.
Take Eli, for example. I personally don't like this character very much, but I can understand him somewhat. From this point of view, a character can make readers love or hate him, which is enough to see cyclohexane.
Of success.
"They are just a tiny bit in the long run," cyclohexane wrote.
Then my favorite character is of course Nishtar. I don't know why the part where I met Tom reminded me of Carson McCullers' Prodigy Bianzen… (maybe it was an illusion) and the part "I just love him" made me cry. If the abuse starts, I will cover my face2333
Finally, cyclohexane you are the best!
I also want the lucky draw (?) For ps's little book! I can't stand it
"A Modern Wizard's Knight's Tale" is another story that begins in the rain. Nishtar, whose identity as the protagonist has been revealed in the copy, did not appear, but her father described her appearance: thick auburn curly hair, honey-colored skin; just based on the appearance brought by Arab descent, "Modern Wizards" may become a heresy among HP fans. Nishtar, a Gryffindor girl who was addicted to the fantasy of knights when she was a child, was raised by a happy family and a talented father until she was sixteen years old. She was smart and beautiful. Her original life originally extended to the end of imaginable happiness. Who would have thought that she would eventually fall into a fire.
The perspective changed and we arrived at Hogwarts. Following Lily from one compartment of the train to another, because it was a non-life-like scene, the images and tones of HP movies were involuntarily brought to my mind. The dilapidated but not downtrodden atmosphere of the magical world was mixed with the youthful vitality of the male and female students in the car. Of course, there is Nishtar, a particularly wild girl who talks about tattoos in the first chapter of her appearance. She is obviously popular with girls, but her popularity with the opposite sex seems not to be bad either. The way Lily shakes her head when she breaks up with Snape in her own mind is really well written. She plays a very important role in the whole story, neither to set off nor to promote anything. She is one of the people the wife wants to unfold the picture of her life.
Suddenly Nishtar's childhood was over. The preparation for her life has been completed. The adolescent daughter and her control-freak father have parted ways - the key word that the wife gave Egbert in the postscript is twist - in fact, they do not necessarily part ways. Although she is angry and disappointed because it is difficult to accept the disillusionment of her father's majestic image, Nishtar seems to have swallowed this disillusionment whole. Her father is gone, but there is another father deep in her heart, like a statue that has been preserved but has no protective power. She just [wants] it to be there.
James and Nishtar, James and Sirius, James and Lily, and Lily and Nishtar, the picture of them together is what makes the whole article not suffocating and unable to take a second breath [as long as you don't think about the future of James and Lily]. When little James and little Nina talk, one moment makes people feel like they are ordinary children, and the next moment there is a warmth beyond ordinary.
Sirius's Perspective - The Wife does not write about the cold and noble Sirius, the indifferent and aloof Sirius, the male god Sirius, and writes about a bad boy, a real bad boy, the kind who deserves to be beaten, but also stupid, bearish and stupid at the end. Sirius, who once hated Nishtar, actually didn't understand her later, at least he couldn't understand her completely and her "hunger of heart". I think it's not like he didn't long for the love of his parents, but later he seemed to forget about it, or it was like there was a sieve in his heart that filtered out all this. Being able to be relieved about this may be a talent that Nishtar does not have. But the answer that Sirius gave after Nishtar learned about Snotlout's experience - he mentioned this paragraph and wrote it - a perfect answer, I never thought that a stupid boy could say such human words! I secretly speculate that the love he gives is the love that Nishtar wants. Although he is not Nina's type (laughs), it is a pity that it is not enough to attract Nishtar.
Still about Sirius and Nishtar. In the chapter also named "Answer" by his wife, Sirius gave a perfect answer: Nishtar inspired the good side of his personality; and Nina's answer to herself was that it had nothing to do with good or evil, but just loved him. It's really a pity that their last meeting ended on such an unhappy note, although this is probably an over-the-top topic for a stupid dog. Will the good parts of Nishtar disappear with her death, or can they stay?
There are two chapters from Remus' perspective. In fact, Remus and Eli are both pities. Remus can't get what he wants; Eli, the wife said he knows what he wants very clearly, but I always feel that he has the reckless blindness of a teenager who has not faded away. This is not to detract from his heroic actions, but his short life is really a pity. It is obvious that his temporary shortcomings can be healed by time. Unlike Remus, his pity seemed unshakable. James and Sirius gave him so much, so he gave up a lot for it. If I want to praise my wife's writing about Remus, I have to quote the entire chapter, so it's better to stop here [sigh due to poor writing skills].
Egbert is also an important figure. My wife won't let me call him a scumbag, saying he's just a control freak! But why would he say those words to Nishtar, while pretending to be the non-existent Brennus. I think he must know subconsciously that he will be exposed in the end. He doesn't care about his daughter's disillusionment. What he cares about is not her mood - although he cares about his daughter, daughter, daughter. When he was Brennus, he came across as a helpless scumbag, and it wouldn't hurt to sit down and have a drink together. Change back to Egbert - if Sirius finally dug out the carrion of Nina's heart, what about Egbert, he made Nina lose her sense of pain.
Simply sending the protagonist into the abyss of destiny that readers cannot reach on their own is not the strongest point. Being able to balance it with the fireworks in life and the dark but not desperate emotions is what I personally think is the best thing about "Modern Wizards". I really like Zhan Li written by my wife. It is warm and soft, mixed with the anxiety of daily necessities, but it makes people believe that this pair will definitely make it to the end. Lucius and Voldemort each have a chapter from a single-person perspective. The chapters about these two villains [Does Lucius count?] Are actually a bit more relaxing. No one can escape life, but numbness and superman are still their unique talents. During the reading process, empathizing with them will not be so heavy. Snape also takes up a lot of space. My wife's writing about Snape made me wonder, is the word "extenuating circumstances" meaningless, or is it a bit unfashionable? Death Eaters and the Order despised each other. Many of the Death Eaters, such as Snape, did not so much like what the Death Eaters could give them as Gryffindor could not give them what they wanted. But what was it worth if he left a scar on Nishtar's face? Not worth a single sigh.
I personally feel that the cinematic narrative is constantly improving in this article. Starting from Chapter 14, or rather without clear boundaries, the words become images and sounds, smells and lights one by one. On the one hand, the plot takes a turn for the worse, and we can guess that it will end in tragedy, but we never expected that Nishtar will lose everything in the end, including his family, chivalry, and everything he can stand for. Sirius left a sweet brush in her life, and then the pen left her picture. Friends, lovers, and comrades are all sealed in the exposed film reels. They are no longer important and can be destroyed. All of them met with misfortune in the end - died, or were about to die. There is no doubt that war is the fundamental reason. But in this small circle, no one can escape, no matter whether they are genius, noble, mediocre, clever or despicable.
Return to Nishtar. She is full of contradictions between her sexual beauty and rational mind, her masculinity and her delicate femininity, her individual heroism and her attachment to her family. It's no surprise what happens to her. Some people love her and some hate her. While reading, feeling her constant whereabouts, I always felt heartbroken and sad for her. But when the ending came, I just covered it up, as if I had lost all feeling. Not pity, not regret, nothing.
The best book review is definitely my wife's own postscript. Everyone should read the postscript! Memorize the entire text and use it as a reference when writing reviews. Let me be a brick in the comments, waiting for those who come after me to pile on me. If there are more and more comments, my wife will write them down, and then I can continue to have excellent food. What a virtuous cycle this is!
For Severus, he really couldn't understand Lily and Potter in his life. No matter how hard you try, you can't overcome the impossible hurdle. Compared with the life that is determined by birth such as mixed race, it seems that what kind of friends will last until the end is more determined by fate.
Speaking of carpetiem, the same goes for Nina and the others. In a normal life, one sees aging approaching the people around him, while abnormal infarction wanders around oneself all the time. Nina is such a good girl, she makes the dog better, and gives him love and love to others around her, but she herself seems to feel like she is falling. I can never go back to being a little girl, back home.
I feel that although Remus can occasionally be yin and yang with the innocent side of the heroine, but in most cases, from the perspective of a friend, he doesn't seem to want her to face the final collapse of her life (and the heroine who curses is really cute)
Lily and James' confessions about gifts and eventual pregnancy are so heartwarming, but it's so sad to be alone in seeking relief from the toil of housework [rather than relief from it]. Nina is such a good friend! By the way, I also want to watch the young lady kiss for a minute...
When I was twenty, I was really scared and anxious. I failed the postgraduate entrance examination. I was confused between World War II and work. I left the ivory tower all of a sudden.
Shock! Laofu is so high...
I didn't want to say it, but I said [poor Eli] as soon as I opened my mouth. I can read quickly and well, but there are too many things on my mind and I don't know what I want, the glory of a hero or the favor of an older girl of the same grade.
Sirius, on the verge of being beaten by James, jumped away. The first step to get Nina is to get her to grow younger!
After all the hard work, I came out of the cage [review] Liao to make a supplementary comment. A smart dog and a good dog, but Eli failed to get praise from Nina in the end... Eli's lop ears. Jpg. People are cruel, so who are the cruel ones? Nina is so pitiful
After realizing that my father had pretended to be this person, I looked back at the family words he said when the two of them were hunting before, and it was really amazing.
I did feel the feeling of A Song of Ice and Fire when I watched it, but I have only read the side story of A Song of Ice and Fire, about a knight with an oak shield. I still remember that in a knight duel, the protagonist exhaled and looked at the young knight who had been supporting him. He sighed and his head rolled off the helmet.
Everything in the fire now, everyone seems to be burning, hysterical in the flames, shooting magic spells everywhere - Regulus always seems to be related to water, her depressed fantasies seem to be slowly suffocated in the water, and eventually become mottled fantasies due to potions and difficulty breathing.
[Crying] Damn it, why did I just read this teacher's writing now? This writing style is too thin.
Beautiful! I really like everyone's characters in this article! Come on, madam!
Will my daughter always have a scar from now on? (Sad
Oh my god, it's so well written.
For a moment, I couldn't say anything else except that it was so good, so good, so good (crying) I'll write a long review for my wife tomorrow.
Sigh, the ending is a bit rushed, but the flaws are not outweighed. What a wonderful work!
A hearty reading, I think the most touching thing is in the words "Without her, the trajectory will not change. Nina appears like a raging fire, and disappears like a wind blowing out."
I love this story so much. It's so well written.
Severus' POV feels like an autistic child who has gone astray (???) And is eager to prove his worth.
It was your boy who did it!
This 20-year-old waste sheds tears
Is it over? I'm always worried that I can't see it.
I'm really tired of the review, and it's no use contacting customer service. I want to see the follow-up review.
I didn't know what to say for a while after reading it. The author's writing is very good, and I felt like I was reading a story written by a Western author. When I opened it and saw the beginning of the first chapter, I knew I should read it with my heart down. If you don't read this story attentively, it will be difficult to understand the mystery. I personally don't read much Western works, so I don't know how to write A Song of Ice and Fire. This feeling of stringing together stories from different characters' perspectives is amazing, especially when I was looking at the catalog. Some names appeared once or twice... The feeling that their lives were gently revealed in front of me, and then ended there, is indescribable. (The following contains spoilers, it is not recommended to read before reading the full text) The article mentioned more than once that Nina's children grew up in the love of their parents. Sirius was both envious and disgusted by this, but after truly fully displaying the role of father, I couldn't help but think about love. Too many people have children because of love when they are young. There are too few people like James Lily who really love their children. When my colleagues mentioned that this daughter destroyed his future during the hunt, I thought, "Okay, what have I done?" This kind of responsibility must be shouldered. But later it was discovered that he was actually the father of the heroine... Will there be complaints after a seemingly happy love? Although I understand that people cannot be perfect and emotionally stable all the time, maybe I should have seen more clues from the previous slap and the meeting in the castle. I also want to say that I like the three-dimensionality of the characters very much. The strengths and weaknesses of the characters are vividly displayed. James' companionship and help to Nina as a friend, and his bullying of Eli, are written on both sides, a reliable but immature young man. Lucius, this article shows how smart Lucius is (laughs) Tom's chapter was amazing too. I hate the villain very much. In the original film, he felt like a monster to me. I didn't expect that he could still have a peaceful conversation with the heroine as an "old friend". He looks like a person here. Then Remus. Oh, I have to say that the sense of proportion is very good. In my impression, Remus is always gentle, empathetic, reliable, and affectionate. I know his strengths and weaknesses, and he has low self-esteem because of his status... But he usually appears with a perfect character. This article mentions a little bit of his dark side, but it's not offensive, and it's something I haven't thought of at all. After reading it I felt like I was a little closer to him. Title, A Knight's Tale. In modern times when knights are no longer needed, they usually appear in fairy tales. Fairy tales, heroism, chaotic times, a group of young people, dreams... Sirius is like a qualified knight, and Nina is also a knight herself, giving me such a feeling. Finally, there is the ending. The foreshadowing of the family line makes me less surprised by the ending. The direction of the love line, aside from the plot of losing magic, is largely due to the influence of the family on Nina, which led to "that day was the last time we met". I don't feel rushed, because in that era, this was normal. The more precarious the moment, the more possibilities there would be... Some may be good, everyone survived the darkness and welcomed the light, and some were burned out. This is a story with regrets, but you can see the stars twinkling.
The curtain came to an end. Although flowers should be scattered, I don't know if they were sparks or blood flowers... Her uncle gave her a gun, and she learned powerful magic. She couldn't become a Swamp Knight not because she was a girl, but because she had something else she wanted more. Although I want to beat up the stupid dog, but considering that his talent is limited and he will live an invincible and miserable life, then forget it. Harry hasn't been born yet, and Nina can't see it, but Lily will die soon, and nothing has changed. The postscript mentioned that as a parent, there is no need to feel guilty. This statement made me let out a sigh of relief. Speaking of which, writing a ship might not be so easy to get reviewed! Sprinkle flowers for my wife again! This time it's really exciting! Prepare for a long review and start working hard for the unfounded foundation
Ahhhhh, you actually spit on my daughter
Harry: Lift my heart up and put it down again, you are so cruel jpg
I came here from another article by cyclohexane. (I won't tell you which article it is in order not to be unreasonable, but your pen name is easy to lose horse 2333.) When I first read it, I liked the other article better because the other article was more exciting. When I knew that this article was going to be written in POV, I thought it would become messy, because this writing method does require solid writing skills and a lot of knowledge accumulation. But when I read it carefully, I was completely carried away by the text. It may not have the same grand background and world view setting as Martin, but every small plot is an indispensable part of the whole, promoting the story; every character is shaped like the protagonist, rich and full, with flesh and blood. Take Eli, for example. I personally don't like this character very much, but I can understand him somewhat. From this point of view, a character can make readers love or hate him, which is enough to see cyclohexane. Of success. "They are just a tiny bit in the long run," cyclohexane wrote. Then my favorite character is of course Nishtar. I don't know why the part where I met Tom reminded me of Carson McCullers' Prodigy Bianzen… (maybe it was an illusion) and the part "I just love him" made me cry. If the abuse starts, I will cover my face2333 Finally, cyclohexane you are the best! I also want the lucky draw (?) For ps's little book! I can't stand it
"A Modern Wizard's Knight's Tale" is another story that begins in the rain. Nishtar, whose identity as the protagonist has been revealed in the copy, did not appear, but her father described her appearance: thick auburn curly hair, honey-colored skin; just based on the appearance brought by Arab descent, "Modern Wizards" may become a heresy among HP fans. Nishtar, a Gryffindor girl who was addicted to the fantasy of knights when she was a child, was raised by a happy family and a talented father until she was sixteen years old. She was smart and beautiful. Her original life originally extended to the end of imaginable happiness. Who would have thought that she would eventually fall into a fire. The perspective changed and we arrived at Hogwarts. Following Lily from one compartment of the train to another, because it was a non-life-like scene, the images and tones of HP movies were involuntarily brought to my mind. The dilapidated but not downtrodden atmosphere of the magical world was mixed with the youthful vitality of the male and female students in the car. Of course, there is Nishtar, a particularly wild girl who talks about tattoos in the first chapter of her appearance. She is obviously popular with girls, but her popularity with the opposite sex seems not to be bad either. The way Lily shakes her head when she breaks up with Snape in her own mind is really well written. She plays a very important role in the whole story, neither to set off nor to promote anything. She is one of the people the wife wants to unfold the picture of her life. Suddenly Nishtar's childhood was over. The preparation for her life has been completed. The adolescent daughter and her control-freak father have parted ways - the key word that the wife gave Egbert in the postscript is twist - in fact, they do not necessarily part ways. Although she is angry and disappointed because it is difficult to accept the disillusionment of her father's majestic image, Nishtar seems to have swallowed this disillusionment whole. Her father is gone, but there is another father deep in her heart, like a statue that has been preserved but has no protective power. She just [wants] it to be there. James and Nishtar, James and Sirius, James and Lily, and Lily and Nishtar, the picture of them together is what makes the whole article not suffocating and unable to take a second breath [as long as you don't think about the future of James and Lily]. When little James and little Nina talk, one moment makes people feel like they are ordinary children, and the next moment there is a warmth beyond ordinary. Sirius's Perspective - The Wife does not write about the cold and noble Sirius, the indifferent and aloof Sirius, the male god Sirius, and writes about a bad boy, a real bad boy, the kind who deserves to be beaten, but also stupid, bearish and stupid at the end. Sirius, who once hated Nishtar, actually didn't understand her later, at least he couldn't understand her completely and her "hunger of heart". I think it's not like he didn't long for the love of his parents, but later he seemed to forget about it, or it was like there was a sieve in his heart that filtered out all this. Being able to be relieved about this may be a talent that Nishtar does not have. But the answer that Sirius gave after Nishtar learned about Snotlout's experience - he mentioned this paragraph and wrote it - a perfect answer, I never thought that a stupid boy could say such human words! I secretly speculate that the love he gives is the love that Nishtar wants. Although he is not Nina's type (laughs), it is a pity that it is not enough to attract Nishtar. Still about Sirius and Nishtar. In the chapter also named "Answer" by his wife, Sirius gave a perfect answer: Nishtar inspired the good side of his personality; and Nina's answer to herself was that it had nothing to do with good or evil, but just loved him. It's really a pity that their last meeting ended on such an unhappy note, although this is probably an over-the-top topic for a stupid dog. Will the good parts of Nishtar disappear with her death, or can they stay? There are two chapters from Remus' perspective. In fact, Remus and Eli are both pities. Remus can't get what he wants; Eli, the wife said he knows what he wants very clearly, but I always feel that he has the reckless blindness of a teenager who has not faded away. This is not to detract from his heroic actions, but his short life is really a pity. It is obvious that his temporary shortcomings can be healed by time. Unlike Remus, his pity seemed unshakable. James and Sirius gave him so much, so he gave up a lot for it. If I want to praise my wife's writing about Remus, I have to quote the entire chapter, so it's better to stop here [sigh due to poor writing skills]. Egbert is also an important figure. My wife won't let me call him a scumbag, saying he's just a control freak! But why would he say those words to Nishtar, while pretending to be the non-existent Brennus. I think he must know subconsciously that he will be exposed in the end. He doesn't care about his daughter's disillusionment. What he cares about is not her mood - although he cares about his daughter, daughter, daughter. When he was Brennus, he came across as a helpless scumbag, and it wouldn't hurt to sit down and have a drink together. Change back to Egbert - if Sirius finally dug out the carrion of Nina's heart, what about Egbert, he made Nina lose her sense of pain. Simply sending the protagonist into the abyss of destiny that readers cannot reach on their own is not the strongest point. Being able to balance it with the fireworks in life and the dark but not desperate emotions is what I personally think is the best thing about "Modern Wizards". I really like Zhan Li written by my wife. It is warm and soft, mixed with the anxiety of daily necessities, but it makes people believe that this pair will definitely make it to the end. Lucius and Voldemort each have a chapter from a single-person perspective. The chapters about these two villains [Does Lucius count?] Are actually a bit more relaxing. No one can escape life, but numbness and superman are still their unique talents. During the reading process, empathizing with them will not be so heavy. Snape also takes up a lot of space. My wife's writing about Snape made me wonder, is the word "extenuating circumstances" meaningless, or is it a bit unfashionable? Death Eaters and the Order despised each other. Many of the Death Eaters, such as Snape, did not so much like what the Death Eaters could give them as Gryffindor could not give them what they wanted. But what was it worth if he left a scar on Nishtar's face? Not worth a single sigh. I personally feel that the cinematic narrative is constantly improving in this article. Starting from Chapter 14, or rather without clear boundaries, the words become images and sounds, smells and lights one by one. On the one hand, the plot takes a turn for the worse, and we can guess that it will end in tragedy, but we never expected that Nishtar will lose everything in the end, including his family, chivalry, and everything he can stand for. Sirius left a sweet brush in her life, and then the pen left her picture. Friends, lovers, and comrades are all sealed in the exposed film reels. They are no longer important and can be destroyed. All of them met with misfortune in the end - died, or were about to die. There is no doubt that war is the fundamental reason. But in this small circle, no one can escape, no matter whether they are genius, noble, mediocre, clever or despicable. Return to Nishtar. She is full of contradictions between her sexual beauty and rational mind, her masculinity and her delicate femininity, her individual heroism and her attachment to her family. It's no surprise what happens to her. Some people love her and some hate her. While reading, feeling her constant whereabouts, I always felt heartbroken and sad for her. But when the ending came, I just covered it up, as if I had lost all feeling. Not pity, not regret, nothing. The best book review is definitely my wife's own postscript. Everyone should read the postscript! Memorize the entire text and use it as a reference when writing reviews. Let me be a brick in the comments, waiting for those who come after me to pile on me. If there are more and more comments, my wife will write them down, and then I can continue to have excellent food. What a virtuous cycle this is!
For Severus, he really couldn't understand Lily and Potter in his life. No matter how hard you try, you can't overcome the impossible hurdle. Compared with the life that is determined by birth such as mixed race, it seems that what kind of friends will last until the end is more determined by fate.
Speaking of carpetiem, the same goes for Nina and the others. In a normal life, one sees aging approaching the people around him, while abnormal infarction wanders around oneself all the time. Nina is such a good girl, she makes the dog better, and gives him love and love to others around her, but she herself seems to feel like she is falling. I can never go back to being a little girl, back home.
I feel that although Remus can occasionally be yin and yang with the innocent side of the heroine, but in most cases, from the perspective of a friend, he doesn't seem to want her to face the final collapse of her life (and the heroine who curses is really cute)
Lily and James' confessions about gifts and eventual pregnancy are so heartwarming, but it's so sad to be alone in seeking relief from the toil of housework [rather than relief from it]. Nina is such a good friend! By the way, I also want to watch the young lady kiss for a minute...
When I was twenty, I was really scared and anxious. I failed the postgraduate entrance examination. I was confused between World War II and work. I left the ivory tower all of a sudden.
Shock! Laofu is so high...
I didn't want to say it, but I said [poor Eli] as soon as I opened my mouth. I can read quickly and well, but there are too many things on my mind and I don't know what I want, the glory of a hero or the favor of an older girl of the same grade.
Sirius, on the verge of being beaten by James, jumped away. The first step to get Nina is to get her to grow younger!
After all the hard work, I came out of the cage [review] Liao to make a supplementary comment. A smart dog and a good dog, but Eli failed to get praise from Nina in the end... Eli's lop ears. Jpg. People are cruel, so who are the cruel ones? Nina is so pitiful
After realizing that my father had pretended to be this person, I looked back at the family words he said when the two of them were hunting before, and it was really amazing.
I did feel the feeling of A Song of Ice and Fire when I watched it, but I have only read the side story of A Song of Ice and Fire, about a knight with an oak shield. I still remember that in a knight duel, the protagonist exhaled and looked at the young knight who had been supporting him. He sighed and his head rolled off the helmet. Everything in the fire now, everyone seems to be burning, hysterical in the flames, shooting magic spells everywhere - Regulus always seems to be related to water, her depressed fantasies seem to be slowly suffocated in the water, and eventually become mottled fantasies due to potions and difficulty breathing.
[Crying] Damn it, why did I just read this teacher's writing now? This writing style is too thin.
Beautiful! I really like everyone's characters in this article! Come on, madam!
Will my daughter always have a scar from now on? (Sad
Oh my god, it's so well written.
For a moment, I couldn't say anything else except that it was so good, so good, so good (crying) I'll write a long review for my wife tomorrow.
Sigh, the ending is a bit rushed, but the flaws are not outweighed. What a wonderful work!
A hearty reading, I think the most touching thing is in the words "Without her, the trajectory will not change. Nina appears like a raging fire, and disappears like a wind blowing out."
I love this story so much. It's so well written.
Severus' POV feels like an autistic child who has gone astray (???) And is eager to prove his worth.
It was your boy who did it!
This 20-year-old waste sheds tears
Is it over? I'm always worried that I can't see it.
I'm really tired of the review, and it's no use contacting customer service. I want to see the follow-up review.