She always held the ring in her hand.
Ring of Hades.
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Xiaoyan, it seems that I am also the first to leave a message. It is not Liu's courtesy to come and go. Regarding fandom and time travel, Xiaoyan may consider inverting the story, that is, writing the part that you love most about the story in your mind and the part with the greatest dramatic conflict, but don't jump too far. Posting is a conflict, such as directly PKing Akatsuki or Tailed Beast, and then explaining the time-travel issue in Naruto's memories or detailed descriptions. If you like, you can make it more complicated and confusing ~ just explain it in a straight and clear way without starting. In terms of writing, pay attention to the variability of words, such as the pronoun "he", you can use the other party, the masked man but you can see the lazy smile under the mask, etc., I am a fan of Kaka, the expanded writing can highlight Naruto's hair and eyes, Kaka's casualness, replace some of the characters with characters There are many straightforward explanations, etc. Xiaoyan is going to rebuild the world, and I look forward to it~ Xiaoliu feels that you are a very delicate person with emotional feelings through your evaluation of my article. You can be considered sentimental~ In this way, pay attention to the control of your own preferences when writing, and you can't be stingy with words if you don't like someone~ (*^^*)
I really like this article!
However, when I saw that the author of this chapter had something to say, I couldn't help but sign up for the vest and come up to say something. The author really put his heart into writing! And he's so talented! ! All the gods in Greek mythology are so clearly understood.
Xiaoyan, it seems that I am also the first to leave a message. It is not Liu's courtesy to come and go. Regarding fandom and time travel, Xiaoyan may consider inverting the story, that is, writing the part that you love most about the story in your mind and the part with the greatest dramatic conflict, but don't jump too far. Posting is a conflict, such as directly PKing Akatsuki or Tailed Beast, and then explaining the time-travel issue in Naruto's memories or detailed descriptions. If you like, you can make it more complicated and confusing ~ just explain it in a straight and clear way without starting. In terms of writing, pay attention to the variability of words, such as the pronoun "he", you can use the other party, the masked man but you can see the lazy smile under the mask, etc., I am a fan of Kaka, the expanded writing can highlight Naruto's hair and eyes, Kaka's casualness, replace some of the characters with characters There are many straightforward explanations, etc. Xiaoyan is going to rebuild the world, and I look forward to it~ Xiaoliu feels that you are a very delicate person with emotional feelings through your evaluation of my article. You can be considered sentimental~ In this way, pay attention to the control of your own preferences when writing, and you can't be stingy with words if you don't like someone~ (*^^*)
I really like this article! However, when I saw that the author of this chapter had something to say, I couldn't help but sign up for the vest and come up to say something. The author really put his heart into writing! And he's so talented! ! All the gods in Greek mythology are so clearly understood.