They all say that their writing from many years ago is very humiliating, and I really agree with this. Five years have passed since the completion, and the writing style of the past is unsightly. After much deliberation, I finally decided to write another article and keep the original text. Today, when homeschooling is regarded as a renaissance, I still want to revise this unpopular article, probably for sentimental reasons. I have modified some awkward sentences and unreasonable plots, but the original feeling of the text is no longer there. I am also trying my best to overcome some of my current narrative habits, and I hope everyone can see the slight progress I have made in my writing.