I thought it would continue like this, with the sun shining on every inch of the land. Finally, it left me and the sun slowly dissipated, but I learned to catch it. From feeling inferior and withdrawn to embracing the world, these are the marks of our love. (The heroine's loneliness is that she keeps a distance from the people around her in her heart. She may be friends with them, but she doesn't have a heart-to-heart relationship with them.)
The author is a novice, so you can give your opinions tactfully, but please don't use too harsh words, because your words may make the author sad for a long time.
Intention: growth