I didn't expect that there would really be little angels watching... After the exam is completed at the end of May, daily updates will gradually resume
After just taking a nap at home, Chen tide opened his eyes and came to a world that did not belong to him, and was bound to a "supernatural live broadcast" system.
All the teammates I met were big guys. The eldest brother of the Li family of the northern sect and the youngest son of the Qi family of the southern sect are both among the best among the young Celestial Masters.
There is only one younger son of the Ying family, who is known to be a loser.
When they met the female ghost, the heavenly masters drew their swords, took out spells, summoned spirits, and carried out a whole set of preparations. The barrage was busy screaming like crazy.
Chen tide blocked Ying Shu behind his back and rushed forward with a left hook - female ghost, dead.
All the heavenly masters:...
Barrage:......
Chen tide's face was expressionless: What on earth are you dawdling about?
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Ying Shu has been looking for Chen tide for many years.
Now that he has finally found it, he wants to tie the person to him and tell him to never leave him again.
Or he can just be a follower (*＾ー＾)
He looks like a loser, but he's actually a hidden giant. His attack and power levels are off the charts, and he catches monsters in unusual ways.
Reader comments
The author will update it soon
Madam, are you still updating?
I have been watching Danmei for seven or eight years, and the reviews may be quite venomous. I hope you won't hate me for this.
First of all, the writing style of Dada is very good, but I think that when writing about Danmei, you must first establish the attacker and the recipient, that is, you feel that such a person exists in your mind, and then describe the character based on the personality. Because after reading it, I felt that Gong's character was unclear and I didn't know why he was so flirtatious.
I don't think there's anything wrong with the plot, it's still very engaging.
But in terms of characterization, if you want to write the kind of flirtatious Gong, you may not be strong enough in writing, and the interaction between the attacker and the receiver is a bit awkward. It just feels awkward and flirty, because I see that I still don't have a specific character design for Gong in my mind.
Of course, the theme of Shou's muscle memory can be expanded and written. I think it is quite interesting and becomes one of Shou's character traits.
Finally, I hope to continue my efforts and become an author who pays equal attention to emotion and plot.
The author will update it soon
Madam, are you still updating?
I have been watching Danmei for seven or eight years, and the reviews may be quite venomous. I hope you won't hate me for this. First of all, the writing style of Dada is very good, but I think that when writing about Danmei, you must first establish the attacker and the recipient, that is, you feel that such a person exists in your mind, and then describe the character based on the personality. Because after reading it, I felt that Gong's character was unclear and I didn't know why he was so flirtatious. I don't think there's anything wrong with the plot, it's still very engaging. But in terms of characterization, if you want to write the kind of flirtatious Gong, you may not be strong enough in writing, and the interaction between the attacker and the receiver is a bit awkward. It just feels awkward and flirty, because I see that I still don't have a specific character design for Gong in my mind. Of course, the theme of Shou's muscle memory can be expanded and written. I think it is quite interesting and becomes one of Shou's character traits. Finally, I hope to continue my efforts and become an author who pays equal attention to emotion and plot.
Where is the wife? Come back soon?
Hurry up and transform into a code machine!