The novel is based on the characters in the classic "A Dream of Red Mansions". It tells the story of Lin Daiyu's resurrection from the dead and Jia Baoyu's running away from home. By chance, the two of them learned martial arts and became a generation of heroes. They performed chivalrous acts of justice, eliminated harm in the name of justice, and upheld social justice. During this period, the story also focused on the touching love story of Jia Baoyu and Lin Daiyu.
Reader comments
It is recommended that each paragraph be separated by one line for easier reading. Another note: In fact, the writing style is not bad, but I feel that the whole article focuses on specific descriptions, and the plot emotion and sense of substitution are not strong. If there is no clear perspective, you can start directly from the scene of Daiyu's rebirth, which is more novel and suspenseful, and add flashbacks or interludes to explain. For online novels, if the opening is too cumbersome and formal, it will easily make readers lose interest. ——For reference only, come on!
Although it's inappropriate to think this way, I really thought of that famous emoticon: "You are a maid, don't you feel sorry for yourself, but also feel sorry for your well-dressed and well-fed master?"
Well, actually, the writing is okay. The writing is not bad either. That's right, author, you have to pay attention to paragraphing. If there are too many words in a paragraph, it will look very difficult and uncomfortable. Leave a little more space
It is recommended that each paragraph be separated by one line for easier reading. Another note: In fact, the writing style is not bad, but I feel that the whole article focuses on specific descriptions, and the plot emotion and sense of substitution are not strong. If there is no clear perspective, you can start directly from the scene of Daiyu's rebirth, which is more novel and suspenseful, and add flashbacks or interludes to explain. For online novels, if the opening is too cumbersome and formal, it will easily make readers lose interest. ——For reference only, come on!
Although it's inappropriate to think this way, I really thought of that famous emoticon: "You are a maid, don't you feel sorry for yourself, but also feel sorry for your well-dressed and well-fed master?"
Well, actually, the writing is okay. The writing is not bad either. That's right, author, you have to pay attention to paragraphing. If there are too many words in a paragraph, it will look very difficult and uncomfortable. Leave a little more space
This is too cold!