Ordinary copywriting:
There are always many unexplained supernatural mysteries in the world.
They are strange and strange.
They crisscross all space, they intersect all time.
They once lived parallel to us, and they also once condensed with us at a point on the intersection line.
One accidental mistake cost his life.
So, please be careful at all times, maybe they are around you...
Now, did you notice it?
2B copywriting:
Yu Yi Netherworld? The flowers on the other side are shining brightly.
Yu Yi Netherworld? The water of Forgotten River is dark and yellow.
Yu Yi Netherworld? But there are thousands of lines on the stack.
Yu Yi Netherworld? There are still different ways to view the world of ghosts.
Yu Yi Netherworld? Don't be afraid to return home.
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Reader comments
Teacher Wen is so pitiful, more pitiful than anyone else
Why not update it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? What a pity~! It's obviously well written.
Support points, sorry, a few suggestions 0 0
First of all, what you wrote is very much like a running account, and then there is a lack of description of the environment, psychology, demeanor, etc.
There are too few rhetorical devices. The character's personality is not well described, and many inappropriate wordings cause flaws in the article, so please continue to work hard.
(PS: It is best not to use PS in the article...)
Picking the nose
It turns out to be a side story
I was still thinking that I couldn't understand it...
There are not many Snow Whites, but there are too many who are willing to be dwarfs.
Come and watch the fairies fight~
Well, I personally don't like this kind of subject very much.
Ah~~~~I saw Ping Xie's new article~I support it without hesitation~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Is it really a dragon? ~~
My computer was sent for repair yesterday, and I just saw the new article today
Xiaonian is really annoying. Fortunately, the baby in Ming'er's belly is fine, otherwise Sisi would not have spared her lightly~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I knew that Duanmuxi would definitely violate the rules of the system and continue to like Huo Yifan
Get up early in the morning to see
Sabat will be unhappy now that he has another little brother.
Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers.
Teacher Wen is so pitiful, more pitiful than anyone else
Why not update it? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? What a pity~! It's obviously well written.
Support points, sorry, a few suggestions 0 0 First of all, what you wrote is very much like a running account, and then there is a lack of description of the environment, psychology, demeanor, etc. There are too few rhetorical devices. The character's personality is not well described, and many inappropriate wordings cause flaws in the article, so please continue to work hard. (PS: It is best not to use PS in the article...)
Picking the nose It turns out to be a side story I was still thinking that I couldn't understand it...
There are not many Snow Whites, but there are too many who are willing to be dwarfs.
Come and watch the fairies fight~
Well, I personally don't like this kind of subject very much.
Ah~~~~I saw Ping Xie's new article~I support it without hesitation~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Is it really a dragon? ~~
My computer was sent for repair yesterday, and I just saw the new article today Xiaonian is really annoying. Fortunately, the baby in Ming'er's belly is fine, otherwise Sisi would not have spared her lightly~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
I knew that Duanmuxi would definitely violate the rules of the system and continue to like Huo Yifan
Get up early in the morning to see
Sabat will be unhappy now that he has another little brother.
Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers. Press the claws to sprinkle flowers.
Show affection or something, don't be too awesome