Copywriting one:
Qin Shen put his head on Yuan Qian's neck, his voice trembling, "Qian Qian, I know you can't live with me anymore, but I can't let you go. Forgive my selfishness, can you give us a chance, wait for yourself, and wait for me?"
Copy 2: To Yuan Qian, Qin Shen is an oasis in the desert, a light in the darkness, and a charcoal fire in the ice and snow. Yuan Qian is grateful to him. Yuan Qian originally thought she was only grateful, but when he said he was tired, Yuan Qian was afraid that he would no longer want her. Fortunately, he was reluctant to give it up. Fortunately, she still had the chance to wait. Fortunately, they still had a lifetime.
What kind of copywriting, as you write it, it goes astray! Stop reading the copy
Intention: