As the captain of the GDL team, Levi devoted his best years to the GDL team from the age of 18 to 25, from the time he formed the team to being taken over by the club due to lack of funds and then kicked out.
The betrayal of his seven-year teammate caught him off guard and made him feel something.
His younger brother died, his father died, his mother became seriously ill, and his life was in pieces.
And then... Back in time! !
Levi: Playing games? No! I won't fight! It is impossible to play games in this life. ╭(╯^╰)╮
Passerby A: Who helped me win this game! Five hundred! ! [○｀Д｀○]
Levi: Let me go! !
Levi: Playing a game? No! I won't fight! It is impossible to play a game in this life. ╭(╯^╰)╮
Brother: Two hundred thousand ducks for the champion! I drip pot pot! There is no hope for this, so let's set a small goal first and strive for third place! (*$.$*)!
Levi: You said you didn't have a substitute, so I'm just here to provide a substitute! (＞ Dishes＜)
Levi: Play professionally? No! I won't fight! It is impossible to play professionally in this life╭(╯^╰)╮
The hot blue man who plays a supporting role but steals the spotlight from the protagonist: Wei, you are Sariel from WOG who came into my life. I would like to transform into Azrael and be by your side forever. (*0▽0*)
He didn't know if he regretted it in his previous life, but he regretted it very much at the beginning of his new life. However, when the road is placed before him again, and he will definitely not hurt others if he steps on it, it should be that fate has set a must-choice question for the God of Death!
In short, he is just a poor captain who was betrayed by his teammates in his previous life. After being reborn, he vowed not to play games or enter the professional world, but he was tricked by all kinds of tricks and continued to run further and further on the path he vowed to follow.
The main character is unreasonably powerful.
It doesn't cost anything if it's not sweet or pleasant.
All the ridiculous logic settings were eaten by my own mother.
Weiwei will be a little dull in the early stage, but after settling down, the sun will be very small.
Protect our little Weiwei sun! ! !
Gentle (indifferent) Calm (powerful) Commanding (captain) Attack
conception:
Reader comments
Maru La, the little robot is going to die.
It's the second brush... Is it possible to see a follow-up in this life? This book originally brought me into playing P5. Teacher, I miss you so much. I want to see the follow-up TT between Wangmei, Xiao and Lian.
Hey, this is how you see me, it's so true
Congratulations on your holiday [laughing] I have two weeks until my holiday [Glasses]
Finish spreading flowers? (/ε＼*) Give you flowers
It looks good. I love it and want to see more. Please update quickly [poor]
Once killed, I can't stand it anymore
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Oh my God, two good babies [Star Eyes]
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Finished spreading flowers spreading flowers!
Damn, you finally updated [Spreading Flowers], can you update more? Not enough [covering face and peeking]
I'm from the forum, so I just saw this, and here are just a few suggestions based on my personal taste:
First of all, there is the problem of copywriting. The copywriting explains the basic situation of the mainland, but there is relatively little description of the protagonist's setting. The overall setting is also relatively ordinary and has weak appeal to readers.
Secondly, the sentences are not concise enough. Using too many long sentences makes it difficult for readers to read and makes it difficult to grasp the key points. Each dialogue section is also too long and a bit unnatural. The description of the character's appearance also needs to be carefully considered, as it is a bit cliche and takes up a lot of space. Using too many ellipses shows that the author is not strong enough.
Third, don't rush to cram all the settings into the first few chapters, you can slowly add them later.
The author can go to Bishui to learn more, and I believe he will write better. I rarely read this type of subject matter, and the comments are superficial. Please forgive me if I am offended.
Maomaozai is so cute that it makes you roll and purr
Maru La, the little robot is going to die.
It's the second brush... Is it possible to see a follow-up in this life? This book originally brought me into playing P5. Teacher, I miss you so much. I want to see the follow-up TT between Wangmei, Xiao and Lian.
Hey, this is how you see me, it's so true
Congratulations on your holiday [laughing] I have two weeks until my holiday [Glasses]
Finish spreading flowers? (/ε＼*) Give you flowers
It looks good. I love it and want to see more. Please update quickly [poor]
Once killed, I can't stand it anymore
This one is so pretty and so sweet!
Oh my God, two good babies [Star Eyes]
Big update, not enough to see [dog head] [dog head] [dog head]
One word! Cool! ! ! ! Hahahahahahaha
Is this the end of this book? There will be another one! Madam, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go, go!
Finished spreading flowers spreading flowers!
Damn, you finally updated [Spreading Flowers], can you update more? Not enough [covering face and peeking]
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I'm from the forum, so I just saw this, and here are just a few suggestions based on my personal taste: First of all, there is the problem of copywriting. The copywriting explains the basic situation of the mainland, but there is relatively little description of the protagonist's setting. The overall setting is also relatively ordinary and has weak appeal to readers. Secondly, the sentences are not concise enough. Using too many long sentences makes it difficult for readers to read and makes it difficult to grasp the key points. Each dialogue section is also too long and a bit unnatural. The description of the character's appearance also needs to be carefully considered, as it is a bit cliche and takes up a lot of space. Using too many ellipses shows that the author is not strong enough. Third, don't rush to cram all the settings into the first few chapters, you can slowly add them later. The author can go to Bishui to learn more, and I believe he will write better. I rarely read this type of subject matter, and the comments are superficial. Please forgive me if I am offended.
Maomaozai is so cute that it makes you roll and purr