In one sentence, this article is for Kwai, and the CP is Han Kwai x Lily.
I would like to dedicate this document to Han Kui, the loveless character in "The Love of Roses".
～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～. Announcement.～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～
I try my best to update every day. If it stops, it means that Three Dimensions is busy with something, so please forgive me.
I have almost put the outline together and expect to finish it by the end of the year.
Everyone is welcome to update.
Above.
2015.08.21
Reader comments
Did the author give up after not coming back for so long?
I'm here waiting for you to come back ~ waiting for you to come back ~
After being pushed to death, she realized that she was just a cannon fodder to foil the heroine.
After resurrecting her life, in order to get rid of her tragic fate, she began to fight in the last days, and was about to escape the life of cannon fodder...
Note: The heroine is strong, neither a noob nor a virgin.
Suggestion: Start from Chapter 24, there is not much written in the front
The nuclear warhead that doted on the copywriter was sucked in, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...
I also like this mv and have always wanted to continue it~! ! ! Great praise, the author will update soon!
Aisang, I didn't expect you to be such an Aisang T_T
It's absolutely fine that the author is from the Eighth Party, but can you stop wearing the skin of the Thirteenth Party?
Support as always~~ In fact, there is nothing wrong with setting the worldview to be large, so that we can continue to imagine the areas you have not finished writing. If the worldview is too small, there will be no room for us to use it. . . Celebrate the completion~
Here comes the ink-stained Shuo Shu of Thousand Cities
Review of "Tenant Relations" by Dan Sheng
Emma... Kneel down to the author. The mice flying around have become flying mice recently. I just flew back to Dalian from Shanghai and learned that I would fly to Guilin. Then I stayed in Guilin for five or six days in the hometown of the third sister, where food is extremely scarce. I finally found time to write the author's review. I am so tired...
Enough talking, let's start masturbating.
[What did Shuo Shu say]
Dan Sheng is a regular customer of the shop and has always been fond of Qiancheng Shop. In fact, Mouse himself also likes Dan Sheng's writing style very much. He keeps staring at Dan Sheng with his little tortoise-like eyes, always wanting to make eye contact, eye contact, eye contact... (This can be considered Shuo Shu's style of confession...)
The mice have gained weight recently, probably because they broke their promise and gained weight. A few days ago, I said that I would finish reading all the articles of my good gay friend Dan Sheng and see how many bugs would appear. As a result, this delay lasted for a month, a whole month. If I were you, Dan Sheng, I would immediately rush to the door of such a person who breaks his promise... And hang himself. (Why hang yourself!)
Because I finished watching it as soon as I got it, it took me a month to review it. As a result, the plot was a bit confusing, so I obediently watched it again after I got home.
Dan Sheng has always been an author who likes to follow a realistic style. The words in the article are all about the protagonist's tangled inner world, which will cause the reader to immediately calm down and be slowly attracted by the author's words. But as I said, Dan Sheng's writing is too quiet, like an old man who has experienced many vicissitudes of life recalling the past. Many people think that the entanglement with reality is not as attractive as the hilarious writing next door that takes a brisk route.
It excludes many people who don't like this style of writing, but those who can read it carefully will definitely like the author's words.
[What did Wenwen say]
Like "Relationship between Virtual Reality", "Farewell Without Saying Goodbye" and "Little Uncle", I found that the author is particularly good at describing the kind of small sufferers and small attacks who seem not to be delicate but are actually extremely sensitive in their hearts. The two protagonists become the same bedfellows after they get together, and miss each other after they leave. The biggest obstacle to being together is family disputes, and the biggest obstacle to leaving is falling deeply in love...
Emma, it's so confusing.
The article tells the story of a "charterer" who has no parents at home, and meets a "rich second generation" whose mother has died and who doesn't want his father in the family. The charterer cares about the rich second generation, and the rich second generation hates the charterer. The charterer gives the rich second generation a house to live in, and the rich second generation. I slept with the landlord, but the landlord didn't know the rich second generation's family background. The rich second generation left the landlord because of his family. They separated for ten years and abstained from sex for ten years. When they met, there was no lively fire, but the rich second generation was entangled, and the landlord was entangled. Tangled up in family background, entangled in the truth, entangled in the house, entangled in the mistress who was silently watching, entangled in work, entangled in neighbors, entangled in gifts from the elderly, entangled in my father who was not clever, entangled in the pain in my heart, entangled in the sadness of my lover... (What a long tongue twister)
Damn, living is so tiring.
But fortunately, the author made this article very clear in a mere 100,000 words. At least the mouse didn't get confused.
But overall, after reading it, it was not until the two protagonists were together at the end that people breathed a sigh of relief. Looking back, I imagined that most of the tangled things were settled. The solution seemed to be natural, but it was a bit far-fetched. We'll talk about this later. Let's first analyze the composition of the protagonist.
[Xiao Shou, the old Beijing with its prosperous roots]
I personally like Xiao Shou's way of speaking very much. I don't know if the Beijing accent is enough, but the Northeast flavor is quite strong. Different from the outside world's evaluation of the "arrogance" of Beijingers, our little boy is an otaku at heart. He held on to the few houses at home and refused to let go, but in the end he was forced to move to another place by the gossipy women in the neighborhood.
... Xiao Gong is so rich!
I don't know if Lu Sen bought this house in the Sixth Ring Road?
Xu Chang has a problem, he doesn't understand the style, he doesn't understand the style very much, which makes Lu Sen helpless every time and makes the readers dumbfounded. However, the author's treatment of this man reflects his sensitivity a little too much, which makes people recall that his actions are a bit unflattering. For a man, he would fight back after being beaten, but this guy burst into tears the first time he was beaten by a little attacker, the second time he went crazy and fought and was seriously injured, and the third time he just found a place to hide. People watching always felt that this man was living a miserable life.
In addition, he obviously had no reaction in front of the candlelight dinner and the new house and made all kinds of complaints, but when Grandma Lu Sen gave him the Jade Guanyin, he was so sensitive that he became a hedgehog, pricking anyone who touched him. In terms of handling this, I personally suggest that you can moderate it a little. For example, you don't have to be ignorant about romantic matters, but you are awkward and embarrassed to say them. This can also reflect the person's melancholy nature.
[Xiao Gong, the rich second generation who is always cheated by his father]
Lu Sen, a second-generation rich man, a studio teacher and group manager, and the villain representative of the China Cheating Association. Not only has he never cheated on his father, but he has been cheated on his career by his father for twenty years. He has been persevering through thick and thin. Before he met his father again, he was a hard-working son of a single parent. After his half-brother became a father-in-law, he became a professional son who listened to his father's instructions. His stepmother doesn't want to see him, his father looks down on him, his grandmother's family treats him as a poor creature, and there is only one nanny in the family who loves him the most. If the mouse were him, I would run away from home too.
In fact, I personally think that Xiao Gong is still well done. The author has much less polish on him than Xiao Shou, and he is much clearer. But the only thing that I can't bear is that this old man actually committed domestic violence... Looking back, I don't know whether Xiaoshou should complain to the Women's Federation or go to the neighborhood committee if he is wronged.
Hidden scene
In the delicate and tangled writing style of this article, there are many unreflective characters and things. However, the mouse has to admire the author's writing style here, because if this kind of thing were placed in other articles, it would become a light comedy. But looking at the author's article, Mouse didn't notice anything was wrong. After thinking about it, he realized that it was a bit strange.
The people around Xiao Gong can be said to have the most flaws, starting with the stepmother who never showed her face. This aunt married his father and gave birth to a son who died young. Then she realized that she was the unlucky mistress and saw all the stupid and unpleasant children in her husband's ex-wife's house.
Although it is unpleasant to happen to anyone, a decent family must be a decent family. Even if you don't like it, you can't even avoid this child while eating.
In addition, I don't know what Lu Sen is about me. No matter how bad a bad wife is, I can't just ignore her after abandoning her. As a man, it's too shameful to do this. From the article, it seems that the Lu family is not a family that can swallow such a sigh of relief. Will their daughter not care about such a thing? At least it's okay to bring him back from the countryside. Now that my grandson is back, it hurts like a treasure. His mother is not dead when his son comes back. Can't he take good care of him? Does he have to die to achieve his miserable life?
We are all defeated by reality... Damn it, author, you are definitely too lazy to write!
Another weird thing is Li Min's neighbor. Li Min herself is a young girl who smokes, drinks, plays cards and plays with men. She finally got married but she still married her son. Well, there aren't many flaws in this one. What has more flaws is her weird parents.
The old couple worked hard to force their girl into Xu Chang's hands, and even threatened him with the fact that he was gay. I was puzzled. Even if I knew what my girl was, I couldn't just push her into the fire pit. Are there any parents like that? Sister Dan Sheng, can you rename this article "Children on the run from the clutches of cheating parents"?
[BUG that is not a BUG]
Those weird things above are considered bugs... Right? There are also some unfinished plots that are intertwined throughout the article. For example, Xiao Gong's cousin or someone came to take care of his stepmother, and he noticed something was wrong. When Mouse saw this, he was excited, wondering if there was going to be the high-intelligence intrigue that Mouse likes most. But Xiao Gong told Han's father, and Han's father ignored him... And it ended like that... It ended like that! ! !
In addition, I am very curious about whether Lu Sen's uncle has found a wife, whether Zhu Rong (I forgot his name) and Ge Hong (I still forgot his name, don't blame the master and the Taoist priest) are together, and whether there is any follow-up development for the master-disciple pair in the painter...
I looked back at the word count. Well, one hundred thousand words... I seemed to know something.
In addition, let's talk about Father Han. His behavior is very contradictory. You can discuss it in depth with Dan Sheng when you have time. I won't go into it here. Anyway, if he changes his words, everything will have to be changed, so I won't mention it now.
[Tips for authors]
Mouse doesn't like to comment on copywriting and covers, and I won't comment on it today (then why are you talking about it, just to make up the word count!) But I want to talk about the author's writing issues.
I have read several of the author's articles, and overall they all seem to have a slight start to the end. The early plot is quite fascinating, and the middle stage is also good, but the later it gets, the more messy it becomes. The development of events will always lead to situations such as escape, injury, quarrels, and crying. In such a plot, the protagonist is tired and the reader is a little confused. In addition, the author's story development connection is a little rough, and the ending is always a bit unfinished. Many plots end before they are fully resolved.
I don't believe that Han's father will just give up, and I don't believe that Xu Chang can never go back to those houses or return to his original home.
Also, where was the poor place with rhubarb that Xu Chang escaped to... Why didn't I notice these places...
Okay, let's talk about this first~ Mouse didn't praise Dan Sheng much this time, because they are all good friends, so some polite words are unnecessary, but I still want to say this at the end:
It's really pretty~
Get out of the way! So annoying!
Where is the update! ! ! ! No updates, no happiness! ! ! Not happy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Said, you are too slow/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
I love this story. If a girl really got together with Damon, it would be like this.
Waiting for the cp ending~
It's pretty good, but I'm a little bit weak and my IQ is a bit low.
When I was a senior in high school, I promised you to watch it after graduation.
Now that I have repeated my studies for one year and graduated, I can no longer find you who told me to study hard and finish this article after the college entrance examination.
Overall, this is a very warm story, which makes people more and more hopeful just like the not-so-warm sun in winter. The most valuable thing is that this story is not divorced from reality like ordinary fan fiction, but is covered with a dream color that is not out of reach from a realistic perspective. Well... From my personal point of view, although there are no big ups and downs, it still has an indescribable charm. What is attractive may not be the storyline, but the real heart. Finally, keep up the good work! My ten-thousand-year-old diver has come out for fun!
Did the author give up after not coming back for so long?
I'm here waiting for you to come back ~ waiting for you to come back ~
After being pushed to death, she realized that she was just a cannon fodder to foil the heroine. After resurrecting her life, in order to get rid of her tragic fate, she began to fight in the last days, and was about to escape the life of cannon fodder... Note: The heroine is strong, neither a noob nor a virgin. Suggestion: Start from Chapter 24, there is not much written in the front
The nuclear warhead that doted on the copywriter was sucked in, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo...
I also like this mv and have always wanted to continue it~! ! ! Great praise, the author will update soon!
Aisang, I didn't expect you to be such an Aisang T_T
It's absolutely fine that the author is from the Eighth Party, but can you stop wearing the skin of the Thirteenth Party?
Support as always~~ In fact, there is nothing wrong with setting the worldview to be large, so that we can continue to imagine the areas you have not finished writing. If the worldview is too small, there will be no room for us to use it. . . Celebrate the completion~
Here comes the ink-stained Shuo Shu of Thousand Cities Review of "Tenant Relations" by Dan Sheng Emma... Kneel down to the author. The mice flying around have become flying mice recently. I just flew back to Dalian from Shanghai and learned that I would fly to Guilin. Then I stayed in Guilin for five or six days in the hometown of the third sister, where food is extremely scarce. I finally found time to write the author's review. I am so tired... Enough talking, let's start masturbating. [What did Shuo Shu say] Dan Sheng is a regular customer of the shop and has always been fond of Qiancheng Shop. In fact, Mouse himself also likes Dan Sheng's writing style very much. He keeps staring at Dan Sheng with his little tortoise-like eyes, always wanting to make eye contact, eye contact, eye contact... (This can be considered Shuo Shu's style of confession...) The mice have gained weight recently, probably because they broke their promise and gained weight. A few days ago, I said that I would finish reading all the articles of my good gay friend Dan Sheng and see how many bugs would appear. As a result, this delay lasted for a month, a whole month. If I were you, Dan Sheng, I would immediately rush to the door of such a person who breaks his promise... And hang himself. (Why hang yourself!) Because I finished watching it as soon as I got it, it took me a month to review it. As a result, the plot was a bit confusing, so I obediently watched it again after I got home. Dan Sheng has always been an author who likes to follow a realistic style. The words in the article are all about the protagonist's tangled inner world, which will cause the reader to immediately calm down and be slowly attracted by the author's words. But as I said, Dan Sheng's writing is too quiet, like an old man who has experienced many vicissitudes of life recalling the past. Many people think that the entanglement with reality is not as attractive as the hilarious writing next door that takes a brisk route. It excludes many people who don't like this style of writing, but those who can read it carefully will definitely like the author's words. [What did Wenwen say] Like "Relationship between Virtual Reality", "Farewell Without Saying Goodbye" and "Little Uncle", I found that the author is particularly good at describing the kind of small sufferers and small attacks who seem not to be delicate but are actually extremely sensitive in their hearts. The two protagonists become the same bedfellows after they get together, and miss each other after they leave. The biggest obstacle to being together is family disputes, and the biggest obstacle to leaving is falling deeply in love... Emma, it's so confusing. The article tells the story of a "charterer" who has no parents at home, and meets a "rich second generation" whose mother has died and who doesn't want his father in the family. The charterer cares about the rich second generation, and the rich second generation hates the charterer. The charterer gives the rich second generation a house to live in, and the rich second generation. I slept with the landlord, but the landlord didn't know the rich second generation's family background. The rich second generation left the landlord because of his family. They separated for ten years and abstained from sex for ten years. When they met, there was no lively fire, but the rich second generation was entangled, and the landlord was entangled. Tangled up in family background, entangled in the truth, entangled in the house, entangled in the mistress who was silently watching, entangled in work, entangled in neighbors, entangled in gifts from the elderly, entangled in my father who was not clever, entangled in the pain in my heart, entangled in the sadness of my lover... (What a long tongue twister) Damn, living is so tiring. But fortunately, the author made this article very clear in a mere 100,000 words. At least the mouse didn't get confused. But overall, after reading it, it was not until the two protagonists were together at the end that people breathed a sigh of relief. Looking back, I imagined that most of the tangled things were settled. The solution seemed to be natural, but it was a bit far-fetched. We'll talk about this later. Let's first analyze the composition of the protagonist. [Xiao Shou, the old Beijing with its prosperous roots] I personally like Xiao Shou's way of speaking very much. I don't know if the Beijing accent is enough, but the Northeast flavor is quite strong. Different from the outside world's evaluation of the "arrogance" of Beijingers, our little boy is an otaku at heart. He held on to the few houses at home and refused to let go, but in the end he was forced to move to another place by the gossipy women in the neighborhood. ... Xiao Gong is so rich! I don't know if Lu Sen bought this house in the Sixth Ring Road? Xu Chang has a problem, he doesn't understand the style, he doesn't understand the style very much, which makes Lu Sen helpless every time and makes the readers dumbfounded. However, the author's treatment of this man reflects his sensitivity a little too much, which makes people recall that his actions are a bit unflattering. For a man, he would fight back after being beaten, but this guy burst into tears the first time he was beaten by a little attacker, the second time he went crazy and fought and was seriously injured, and the third time he just found a place to hide. People watching always felt that this man was living a miserable life. In addition, he obviously had no reaction in front of the candlelight dinner and the new house and made all kinds of complaints, but when Grandma Lu Sen gave him the Jade Guanyin, he was so sensitive that he became a hedgehog, pricking anyone who touched him. In terms of handling this, I personally suggest that you can moderate it a little. For example, you don't have to be ignorant about romantic matters, but you are awkward and embarrassed to say them. This can also reflect the person's melancholy nature. [Xiao Gong, the rich second generation who is always cheated by his father] Lu Sen, a second-generation rich man, a studio teacher and group manager, and the villain representative of the China Cheating Association. Not only has he never cheated on his father, but he has been cheated on his career by his father for twenty years. He has been persevering through thick and thin. Before he met his father again, he was a hard-working son of a single parent. After his half-brother became a father-in-law, he became a professional son who listened to his father's instructions. His stepmother doesn't want to see him, his father looks down on him, his grandmother's family treats him as a poor creature, and there is only one nanny in the family who loves him the most. If the mouse were him, I would run away from home too. In fact, I personally think that Xiao Gong is still well done. The author has much less polish on him than Xiao Shou, and he is much clearer. But the only thing that I can't bear is that this old man actually committed domestic violence... Looking back, I don't know whether Xiaoshou should complain to the Women's Federation or go to the neighborhood committee if he is wronged. Hidden scene In the delicate and tangled writing style of this article, there are many unreflective characters and things. However, the mouse has to admire the author's writing style here, because if this kind of thing were placed in other articles, it would become a light comedy. But looking at the author's article, Mouse didn't notice anything was wrong. After thinking about it, he realized that it was a bit strange. The people around Xiao Gong can be said to have the most flaws, starting with the stepmother who never showed her face. This aunt married his father and gave birth to a son who died young. Then she realized that she was the unlucky mistress and saw all the stupid and unpleasant children in her husband's ex-wife's house. Although it is unpleasant to happen to anyone, a decent family must be a decent family. Even if you don't like it, you can't even avoid this child while eating. In addition, I don't know what Lu Sen is about me. No matter how bad a bad wife is, I can't just ignore her after abandoning her. As a man, it's too shameful to do this. From the article, it seems that the Lu family is not a family that can swallow such a sigh of relief. Will their daughter not care about such a thing? At least it's okay to bring him back from the countryside. Now that my grandson is back, it hurts like a treasure. His mother is not dead when his son comes back. Can't he take good care of him? Does he have to die to achieve his miserable life? We are all defeated by reality... Damn it, author, you are definitely too lazy to write! Another weird thing is Li Min's neighbor. Li Min herself is a young girl who smokes, drinks, plays cards and plays with men. She finally got married but she still married her son. Well, there aren't many flaws in this one. What has more flaws is her weird parents. The old couple worked hard to force their girl into Xu Chang's hands, and even threatened him with the fact that he was gay. I was puzzled. Even if I knew what my girl was, I couldn't just push her into the fire pit. Are there any parents like that? Sister Dan Sheng, can you rename this article "Children on the run from the clutches of cheating parents"? [BUG that is not a BUG] Those weird things above are considered bugs... Right? There are also some unfinished plots that are intertwined throughout the article. For example, Xiao Gong's cousin or someone came to take care of his stepmother, and he noticed something was wrong. When Mouse saw this, he was excited, wondering if there was going to be the high-intelligence intrigue that Mouse likes most. But Xiao Gong told Han's father, and Han's father ignored him... And it ended like that... It ended like that! ! ! In addition, I am very curious about whether Lu Sen's uncle has found a wife, whether Zhu Rong (I forgot his name) and Ge Hong (I still forgot his name, don't blame the master and the Taoist priest) are together, and whether there is any follow-up development for the master-disciple pair in the painter... I looked back at the word count. Well, one hundred thousand words... I seemed to know something. In addition, let's talk about Father Han. His behavior is very contradictory. You can discuss it in depth with Dan Sheng when you have time. I won't go into it here. Anyway, if he changes his words, everything will have to be changed, so I won't mention it now. [Tips for authors] Mouse doesn't like to comment on copywriting and covers, and I won't comment on it today (then why are you talking about it, just to make up the word count!) But I want to talk about the author's writing issues. I have read several of the author's articles, and overall they all seem to have a slight start to the end. The early plot is quite fascinating, and the middle stage is also good, but the later it gets, the more messy it becomes. The development of events will always lead to situations such as escape, injury, quarrels, and crying. In such a plot, the protagonist is tired and the reader is a little confused. In addition, the author's story development connection is a little rough, and the ending is always a bit unfinished. Many plots end before they are fully resolved. I don't believe that Han's father will just give up, and I don't believe that Xu Chang can never go back to those houses or return to his original home. Also, where was the poor place with rhubarb that Xu Chang escaped to... Why didn't I notice these places... Okay, let's talk about this first~ Mouse didn't praise Dan Sheng much this time, because they are all good friends, so some polite words are unnecessary, but I still want to say this at the end: It's really pretty~
Get out of the way! So annoying!
Where is the update! ! ! ! No updates, no happiness! ! ! Not happy! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
Said, you are too slow/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
I love this story. If a girl really got together with Damon, it would be like this.
Waiting for the cp ending~
It's pretty good, but I'm a little bit weak and my IQ is a bit low.
When I was a senior in high school, I promised you to watch it after graduation. Now that I have repeated my studies for one year and graduated, I can no longer find you who told me to study hard and finish this article after the college entrance examination.
Overall, this is a very warm story, which makes people more and more hopeful just like the not-so-warm sun in winter. The most valuable thing is that this story is not divorced from reality like ordinary fan fiction, but is covered with a dream color that is not out of reach from a realistic perspective. Well... From my personal point of view, although there are no big ups and downs, it still has an indescribable charm. What is attractive may not be the storyline, but the real heart. Finally, keep up the good work! My ten-thousand-year-old diver has come out for fun!