2020.03.08 I deliberately arranged to look back for more than half a year and found a lot of problems.
Although this pit was opened to practice character dialogue, the purpose was achieved, and the visual output of character interaction was not bad... But it was too careless about the beginning and the end, and the rhythm of the plot unfolding was too bad.
If you want to revise this article, you need to make drastic changes starting from Chapter 6, and then basically scrap the outline and start over.
Writing a novel is really a delicate job worth pondering.
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Roman is an ordinary middle school student.
Even if she is surrounded by her deskmate who vomits blood every day but is both civil and military, petite and cute sisters but whose stomachs are like black holes, netizens who are full of hate but never blow up their accounts, seniors who are cultivating immortality all day long but have thick hair... Etc., Etc., She still believes in it.
Until one day, a cool and cool mixed-race handsome guy transferred to her class, and when he introduced himself, he made an unknown declaration: "My hobby is swimming in gold coin pools."
Roman: Haha, I don't think it's strange at all.
Then, Roman, who witnessed with his own eyes the changes in the situation between his deskmate and his new classmates, who were fighting openly and secretly for themselves every day, said:...
Please use these inhuman means to save the world!
Why should I, an innocent ordinary student, be forced to bear the heavy title of being a beauty and a disaster!
Please let me go!
Wen Ruo & Anton: No, you are mine!
"The words of bamboo, wood, gold, and jade show the vastness of water." The sun and the moon grow old in the human heart, and the stone fire generates light again. The hairy feathers see white soil, and the sweetness and bitterness enter the fighting formula. Longzi is self-reliant and has strong mountains and rivers.
? ? ? : Roman, do you understand your mission?
——The world view is an imaginary modern one. Details such as the story background and school subjects will be slightly changed based on reality. I'm not sure what everyone's point of view is, so I'll explain it in advance.