(The author has withdrawn from the fandom, so it is finished)
I write a scumbag against a fan on a whim, but I understand better.
The writing is extremely cruel! Black attention!
Conception:
Reader comments
I have read it all. The author's writing is good and I can see that the words he uses are carefully considered. The story is pretty good too. What's a pity is that the writing power is a bit lacking, the narrative structure is a bit loose, and things are not explained clearly. Many places that can be expanded are just mentioned in one stroke. It all depends on the reader's understanding and cannot withstand careful scrutiny. I don't know if it's because not many people saw it, but the ending was too rushed. I hope the author can work hard and come back to revise the article when he becomes an adult. After all, I quite like the story.
Come on, I prefer to read new articles, it feels like I am developing a system. [Purple Sugar][Purple Sugar] I will keep chasing you. I hope you can keep chasing for updates. No matter how long it takes, I will always wait for your updates. []
You've been a teacher for so many years, why don't you change it?
I have read it all. The author's writing is good and I can see that the words he uses are carefully considered. The story is pretty good too. What's a pity is that the writing power is a bit lacking, the narrative structure is a bit loose, and things are not explained clearly. Many places that can be expanded are just mentioned in one stroke. It all depends on the reader's understanding and cannot withstand careful scrutiny. I don't know if it's because not many people saw it, but the ending was too rushed. I hope the author can work hard and come back to revise the article when he becomes an adult. After all, I quite like the story.
Come on, I prefer to read new articles, it feels like I am developing a system. [Purple Sugar][Purple Sugar] I will keep chasing you. I hope you can keep chasing for updates. No matter how long it takes, I will always wait for your updates. []
You've been a teacher for so many years, why don't you change it?
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