Gu Shishi, a master of traditional Chinese painting, transformed into the cannon fodder female supporting character in a dog-blood novel.
The cannon fodder heroine was miscarried as a child and was found by the Gu family. Within a few days of good life, she was forced to become a substitute and sent to the room of the big villain, the eldest son of the Huo family, who was said to be a devil and cruel to his wife.
On the first day after wearing the clothes, Gu Shishi faced the fate of tragic death...
But she unexpectedly started a counterattack!
——The more things the villain gives her, the longer she will live and the more golden fingers she will have!
System:
Dip! Get a limited edition silk scarf! HP +13 minutes and 3 seconds!
Dip! Get a bottle of twenty-year-old wine! HP +46 minutes and 14 seconds!
Dip! Enjoy a three-star Michelin meal! Get permanently acne-free skin!
Gu Shishi: ... She must have this villain!
One day, Devil Huo came home and found Master Gu secretly looking at him secretly.
He frowned and handed her a bank card: "Take the flowers, don't bother me!"
Master Gu took it with a smile.
Devil Huo: Oh, you are a vulgar and money-grubbing woman!
Two years later.
Devil Huo: Wife~
Gu Shishi, who was concentrating on taking care of the baby, threw the picture over: Be good, go and play by yourself!
Devil Huo:...
A certain collector: Mr. Huo, can I part with this painting? I'll pay 10 million!
Devil Huo: Get out of here, mine!
The purpose of this article: Su Shuang! Welcome to the pit!
[Pre-released article "I Correct Homework in the World of Immortal Cultivation", favorite collection~]
Lin Ranran was rewriting a composition for her little niece at home, and once she slipped into a novel about cultivating immortals, she became a cannon fodder female supporting role.
According to the plot of the novel, her sect is in decline, her combat power is weak, and she will soon be destroyed by other sects.
After Lin Ranran came through, her eyes darkened.
But unexpectedly, when the villain elder came to provoke him——
A homework correction column suddenly appeared in front of me.
[Please rate this sentence.
Villain Elder: "Hand over your useless leader, or I will kill all your elite disciples now."
Lin Ranran was stunned and immediately started to operate.
1. The punctuation is wrong, the ending should be an exclamation mark to express the intense emotion;
2. There is a contradiction between 'useless' and 'elite'. If the leader is useless, how can the disciples be elite? It is more reasonable to change it to 'inner disciple';
3. The sentences are not concise enough to express the momentum.
Lin Ranran wrote in the correction column: 60 points.
[Correction successful - the opponent's combat power is reduced to 60%]
Lin Ranran: "!"
I saw the villain elder grinning ferociously, bursting out with the peak strength of Yuanying that destroyed the world, and restrained Master Lin Ranran, who was in the early stage of Yuanying in front of him. However, in the blink of an eye, his state... Crazily regressed.
The late Nascent Soul, the middle Nascent Soul, the early Nascent Soul, just entering the Nascent Soul!
Villain: "!"
Master Lin Ranran: "!"
Lin Ranran retreated silently, hiding his merit and fame.
But who would have thought that her master would speak again, "God bless me, Huading Sect!"
[Please rate this sentence.
Lin Ranran tried the operation again.
——The sentences are concise, the momentum is outstanding, and the paper is neat and tidy, plus five points.
[Correction successful - Master Changshan Taoist combat power increased to 105%]
Lin Ranran: "!"
Huading Sect has since risen.
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The great demon red fox Mo Yun swore to avenge the annihilation of his clan to the Banbu God. Hearing that the Huading Sect was prosperous and that his sword was invincible, he immediately hid the reddish fox tail and worshiped him overnight.
"Sister, please teach me the supreme swordsmanship!"
But in front of me is a white dress fluttering, dyed with a hint of plum fragrance.
With her white and bright wrist, she handed him a blue-book volume called "The Three Character Classic".
"!"
"Junior brother, read with me - if you don't learn, it's not appropriate. If you don't learn when you are young, what will you do as an old person?"
"!!"
Purpose: Promote Chinese traditional painting culture
