Is it God's game, or does it have another agenda? Why do we come to a different world and still kill each other?
If you want to know, you have to survive first
Try your best
The hunter version of battle royale, neither a nymphomaniac nor a omnipotent, but the protagonist is very strong
The copywriter is incompetent.
Reader comments
23333Poor Yang Cong23333
Xczzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I didn't expect to see the Marshal's quote. . . . Bubble
Go, I'm the first one to be shot again
Wang Yang, you are here! ! Can the game be far behind? Is Wang Xiang really the spirit behind everything?
It's 2016 and we are still here
Very good! ! ! All you have to do is make anime
PS: Those who have never been to Comic Con are eager to see it
I had nothing to do today. I was strolling along the Jinjiang River as usual. I suddenly came across an article called "One Knife Transforms the Breeze", which had a martial arts flavor. I clicked on it and took a look. Haha, it turned out to be a newly registered author. Normally, I rarely read newly registered authors, but seeing that he had posted so many chapters, he was very energetic, so I started reading it. Unexpectedly, I was attracted after reading it.
First of all, I think this article has the style of Uncle Gu Long. Most people who can write in this style are probably fans of Uncle Gu. It feels fresh and refined, without any unnecessary nonsense. I really like this concise style. In just a few words, a person's personality and temperament can be vividly and exquisitely reflected.
Then there is the author's layout. This article is very different from other time-travel articles written by girls in Jinjiang. It has a sense of vicissitudes and always seems to be conveying a message to us - the perception and experience of life. I guess the author is a man. The writing is very suspenseful and pays great attention to details. The logic is very strong. It seems that this is a book that has been carefully laid out. It is just waiting for the author to add flesh and blood to the whole book.
Third, the writing skills. The author does not use gorgeous descriptions and rhetoric to describe what a woman or man looks like, nor does he describe the environment in detail. However, he has a strong sense of picture, which makes me feel like I am watching a martial arts drama. The appearance of men and women relies entirely on language and movement to reflect their characters, giving readers a lot of room for imagination. The environment is also vividly reflected in simple narratives, which is still a relatively high level.
Fourth, my own style. Although the first part reminded me of Gu Long, later on the author gradually broke away from this phenomenon and slowly showed his own style. I personally think it is more interesting to combine the two.
Fifth, I prefer Ao Jian in the article. Crazy Sword always reminds me of a slovenly and down-and-out image. I can't like it. The heroine, there is only one Nian Nian at the moment, and the rest are not very impressive. Nian Nian is also an image of a good family woman. I don't know how the author will write about her in the future. Haha, I hope this image can be more detailed, fuller, and more touching.
Let's talk about something else. I don't really like traditional martial arts. I find it long and difficult to read, but I still like Uncle Gu's martial arts. His stories are never sloppy, his language is concise but the artistic conception is elegant. The characters are also relatively distinct. My favorites are Hua Manlou and Ximen Chuixue, haha. Not only are these two people very extreme in character, but also because the emotions he writes are very, very touching. I hope the author of this article can write the subsequent "love" in a tactful and moving way. The more women, the better, they just go around and flirt with each other, nor does every woman have to stick to the male protagonist when she sees him.
The author said that he will write a lot of emotional dramas in the future, so I am really looking forward to seeing how the author who can write with such logic and style expresses his "emotions".
Okay, let me write it here first, because the author's article should be said to be exciting and has just begun. It is very successful at the beginning. I hope it will get better and better in the future. In addition, please be sure to work hard to update. I will always pay attention to you. The writers are all strong people. No matter whether it is good or not, at least one thing is more successful than many others, and that is their hard work and long-term persistence, which makes me in awe.
This is the second long review I have contributed... I hope it can bring great encouragement to the author. Come on!
Presumably many beauties will come to Xiaojing to settle accounts. .
Sofa~~~
It's been a long time since I've been this kind of taking advantage of you.
The marriage was about to happen, and the heroine was also destined to be married. However, she was hooked on a great monk, and marrying him was so uneasy. Monk, don't you think you're being obedient?
Is it okay to return to secular life and get married?
23333Poor Yang Cong23333
Xczzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
I didn't expect to see the Marshal's quote. . . . Bubble
Go, I'm the first one to be shot again
Wang Yang, you are here! ! Can the game be far behind? Is Wang Xiang really the spirit behind everything?
It's 2016 and we are still here
Very good! ! ! All you have to do is make anime PS: Those who have never been to Comic Con are eager to see it
I had nothing to do today. I was strolling along the Jinjiang River as usual. I suddenly came across an article called "One Knife Transforms the Breeze", which had a martial arts flavor. I clicked on it and took a look. Haha, it turned out to be a newly registered author. Normally, I rarely read newly registered authors, but seeing that he had posted so many chapters, he was very energetic, so I started reading it. Unexpectedly, I was attracted after reading it. First of all, I think this article has the style of Uncle Gu Long. Most people who can write in this style are probably fans of Uncle Gu. It feels fresh and refined, without any unnecessary nonsense. I really like this concise style. In just a few words, a person's personality and temperament can be vividly and exquisitely reflected. Then there is the author's layout. This article is very different from other time-travel articles written by girls in Jinjiang. It has a sense of vicissitudes and always seems to be conveying a message to us - the perception and experience of life. I guess the author is a man. The writing is very suspenseful and pays great attention to details. The logic is very strong. It seems that this is a book that has been carefully laid out. It is just waiting for the author to add flesh and blood to the whole book. Third, the writing skills. The author does not use gorgeous descriptions and rhetoric to describe what a woman or man looks like, nor does he describe the environment in detail. However, he has a strong sense of picture, which makes me feel like I am watching a martial arts drama. The appearance of men and women relies entirely on language and movement to reflect their characters, giving readers a lot of room for imagination. The environment is also vividly reflected in simple narratives, which is still a relatively high level. Fourth, my own style. Although the first part reminded me of Gu Long, later on the author gradually broke away from this phenomenon and slowly showed his own style. I personally think it is more interesting to combine the two. Fifth, I prefer Ao Jian in the article. Crazy Sword always reminds me of a slovenly and down-and-out image. I can't like it. The heroine, there is only one Nian Nian at the moment, and the rest are not very impressive. Nian Nian is also an image of a good family woman. I don't know how the author will write about her in the future. Haha, I hope this image can be more detailed, fuller, and more touching. Let's talk about something else. I don't really like traditional martial arts. I find it long and difficult to read, but I still like Uncle Gu's martial arts. His stories are never sloppy, his language is concise but the artistic conception is elegant. The characters are also relatively distinct. My favorites are Hua Manlou and Ximen Chuixue, haha. Not only are these two people very extreme in character, but also because the emotions he writes are very, very touching. I hope the author of this article can write the subsequent "love" in a tactful and moving way. The more women, the better, they just go around and flirt with each other, nor does every woman have to stick to the male protagonist when she sees him. The author said that he will write a lot of emotional dramas in the future, so I am really looking forward to seeing how the author who can write with such logic and style expresses his "emotions". Okay, let me write it here first, because the author's article should be said to be exciting and has just begun. It is very successful at the beginning. I hope it will get better and better in the future. In addition, please be sure to work hard to update. I will always pay attention to you. The writers are all strong people. No matter whether it is good or not, at least one thing is more successful than many others, and that is their hard work and long-term persistence, which makes me in awe. This is the second long review I have contributed... I hope it can bring great encouragement to the author. Come on!
Presumably many beauties will come to Xiaojing to settle accounts. .
Sofa~~~ It's been a long time since I've been this kind of taking advantage of you. The marriage was about to happen, and the heroine was also destined to be married. However, she was hooked on a great monk, and marrying him was so uneasy. Monk, don't you think you're being obedient? Is it okay to return to secular life and get married?