Why do you want the male protagonist to touch the woman's waist? I suddenly feel that Gao Jie is not worthy of reading this article.
恩，要新开同人么？会看看的
Well, let me give the author a brief summary...
The first kind of protagonist appears and saves Yi Ping. Well, the beginning is very good and quite satisfactory... The heroine gives people the impression that she is hot on the outside and cold on the inside. Although her appearance is mistaken for gentleness, she is actually cold at heart. The author expresses it well...
At the beginning of the second chapter, Qin Mu officially appeared, and the camera began to follow Yiping...
Then from Chapter 3 to Chapter 10, it is completely the confrontation between Yi Ping, He Shuhuan and Mr. Qin. The heroine is pulled by Qin Mu to make soy sauce beside her. Apart from her inner complaints, from Chapter 2 to Chapter 10, you can count on your fingers everything the heroine has said...
The turning point in Chapter 11 and Chapter 12 reveals that the male protagonist is Qin Mu, and then applies JJ's rich family template, that is, the elder brother is actually adopted and has always loved his younger sister. This setting is a bit cliché, but at least it is a story surrounding the female protagonist. At least there is finally a plot related to the female protagonist...
Then starting from Chapter 13, I was really speechless. If the previous story was about the heroine doing soy sauce, then after Chapter 13, the heroine didn't even do soy sauce, and the heroine actually disappeared! ! She actually disappeared! ! It's so amazing! !
The story after Chapter 12 (actually including the story before Chapter 12) has always revolved around the perspectives of Yiping and He Shuhuan. Even the description of Yiping's psychological activities and Qin Mu's behavior are more detailed than the protagonist...
I ask the author to clearly recognize that you are writing a fanfic, and that you have your own protagonist. Look at your search keywords and the protagonist is Qin Shu. There is nothing like Qin Muyiping or He Shuhuan...
I have written 50,000 words in this article, and the protagonist has not yet been clarified. This is no longer a question of taste or slow heat. Please think clearly about what you want to write and express before writing...
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Okay, it's okay to ignore the above, I won't give negative points...
In fact, this article is quite good. My only opinion is that the title is inappropriate. In fact, it would be perfect if the title were changed to "[Deep Love] Young Master of the Qin Family" or "[Deep Love] Brain-Dead Lu Yiping"...
Why is the eldest lady called Cheng Qingxuan?
Write slowly and slowly. It's okay. I was also in pain when I was writing my graduation thesis. Sometimes I would stay up all night just to revise the thesis. I can understand you.
Why do you want the male protagonist to touch the woman's waist? I suddenly feel that Gao Jie is not worthy of reading this article.
恩，要新开同人么？会看看的
Well, let me give the author a brief summary... The first kind of protagonist appears and saves Yi Ping. Well, the beginning is very good and quite satisfactory... The heroine gives people the impression that she is hot on the outside and cold on the inside. Although her appearance is mistaken for gentleness, she is actually cold at heart. The author expresses it well... At the beginning of the second chapter, Qin Mu officially appeared, and the camera began to follow Yiping... Then from Chapter 3 to Chapter 10, it is completely the confrontation between Yi Ping, He Shuhuan and Mr. Qin. The heroine is pulled by Qin Mu to make soy sauce beside her. Apart from her inner complaints, from Chapter 2 to Chapter 10, you can count on your fingers everything the heroine has said... The turning point in Chapter 11 and Chapter 12 reveals that the male protagonist is Qin Mu, and then applies JJ's rich family template, that is, the elder brother is actually adopted and has always loved his younger sister. This setting is a bit cliché, but at least it is a story surrounding the female protagonist. At least there is finally a plot related to the female protagonist... Then starting from Chapter 13, I was really speechless. If the previous story was about the heroine doing soy sauce, then after Chapter 13, the heroine didn't even do soy sauce, and the heroine actually disappeared! ! She actually disappeared! ! It's so amazing! ! The story after Chapter 12 (actually including the story before Chapter 12) has always revolved around the perspectives of Yiping and He Shuhuan. Even the description of Yiping's psychological activities and Qin Mu's behavior are more detailed than the protagonist... I ask the author to clearly recognize that you are writing a fanfic, and that you have your own protagonist. Look at your search keywords and the protagonist is Qin Shu. There is nothing like Qin Muyiping or He Shuhuan... I have written 50,000 words in this article, and the protagonist has not yet been clarified. This is no longer a question of taste or slow heat. Please think clearly about what you want to write and express before writing... ---------------------------------------- Okay, it's okay to ignore the above, I won't give negative points... In fact, this article is quite good. My only opinion is that the title is inappropriate. In fact, it would be perfect if the title were changed to "[Deep Love] Young Master of the Qin Family" or "[Deep Love] Brain-Dead Lu Yiping"...
Why is the eldest lady called Cheng Qingxuan?
Write slowly and slowly. It's okay. I was also in pain when I was writing my graduation thesis. Sometimes I would stay up all night just to revise the thesis. I can understand you.