
Senior, Please Give Me More Advice.
学长,请多指教
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Great author! Why is it that after you finished writing I Want to Cultivate Immortality, the next book you planned to write was still a romance! (You should be crying and rolling at the top of your lungs here) This is unfair to pure love! I beg you to open that "Mediocre" book! (Crying and rolling again hoarsely. Jpg)
Looks good! ! ! But I still regret that Shen Yuchu's line seems to be unexplored. It's obvious that he has a crush on the heroine, so there's no follow-up.
So awesome! The writing is really good! Mi Feidi and Qi Yun knew each other long before the Apocalypse. At that time, Qi Yun was the agent of Heaven, and Mi Feidi was the patron saint chosen by Heaven. But later Mi Feidi disappeared and had gone astray when she returned. Qi Yun had no way to save her and could only watch her go to destruction step by step. Judging from the vast text, the original Qi Yun was cold and ruthless, and had great power. He was in a position where he could talk to Heaven on an equal footing. Of course, Mi Feidi should also be there, but she was still in her infancy before she disappeared, and her conversation with Qi Yun also showed that she did not know her identity. However, Fei Yuan, who returned, should have known about it, so she bargained with Tiandao, and Tiandao agreed. Also before, at the discussion meeting, Ji Xian said that Tiandao was partial to Fei Yuan. I personally feel that Heaven and the Guardian are the result of two-way choices, so it is natural for Heaven to have a preference for Feiyuan. However, I think Tiandao has a preference for Mi Feidi, and a preference for Feiyuan mixed with guilt. Because Tiandao had personally admitted his powerlessness and sadness. Having said this, I had another thought. Qi Yun originally had no emotions, but later he gradually developed emotions. Qi Yun is the agent of Tiandao, and Qiyun will also affect Tiandao, so Tiandao will say that he feels sad, which is an emotion that Tiandao, who is incapable of understanding emotions, should not have. Feiyuan is Mi Feidi who went astray. She told Mi Feidi that she hoped she would not become Feiyuan, because Feiyuan's existence was a mistake. The big timeline is still very clear. Shortly after Feiyuan finished speaking, she died, and her regret was that Qi Yun refused to see her. In connection with the extra content, Qi Yun is not unwilling to see him, but he is unable to see him. After Fei Yuan went to Tianxi Mountain, he began to change. He was approaching death and regaining his sanity. Because she felt that Qi Yun would not like her being so crazy, so Qi Yun refused to see her. Feiyuan is both good and evil. Some people are afraid of her, but some people like her. I'm afraid because of her massacre for no reason, but I like her... Probably because Feiyuan is really charming. Feiyuan is the great devil, but she is also the savior. She slaughtered all the creatures in the forest, and then Heaven struck her with 211 thunderbolts, which gave her a feeling of deep love and deep responsibility. Because not everyone cannot be saved, Qingge was still alive from before the Apocalypse to the Apocalypse 3444, when the illusion about Feiyuan was opened, which also proves this. Feiyuan's soul finally died, which was the result of his willingness to die after awakening, but Qi Yun was unwilling to accept this result. Once both ends of the scale are smashed, the balance can be restored. Qi Yun gave up his identity, cultivation, talent, and memory. These are just a rough outline on the bright side, but from the current point of view, the big picture is quite big. Qi Yun may have paid other prices, or maybe not. More than three thousand years later, Mi Feidi was reborn, and Qi Yun reawakened, giving both of them a chance to come back. If it was marked as the first life before, then this should be the second life. Feiyuan hoped that Mi Feidi would never become her, but Mi Feidi eventually became Feiyuan. As written earlier, in the story of the previous life, Qi Yun died, and Mi Feidi's cultivation level skyrocketed, and Mi Feidi turned black and turned into Fei Yuan. There are still many plots in the middle that have not been written yet. After that, Mi Feidi said, if you don't come to me, then I will come to you. Qi Yun is dead, Mi Feidi is alive. But it was Qi Yun who appeared in front of people later, which inevitably made people think that Mi Feidi resurrected Qi Yun. After the death of the spirit race, the souls are scattered and cannot enter the reincarnation. Feiyuan was in a similar situation back then. Qi Yun paid a huge price to resurrect Fei Yuan. So what should Mi Feidi pay if she wants to resurrect Qi Yun? As mentioned before, in Apocalypse 3513, Fan Jixian no longer had any old friends. In Apocalypse 3581, Fan Jixian met Qi Yun, Qi Yun who was supposed to be dead. But this Qi Yun was cold and heartless, and he didn't know Fan Jixian either. In the beginning, Qi Yun had no emotions, but in college life, Qi Yun was quite gentle. In short, this kind of Qi Yun was very abnormal, and there was no way he could regress. And at the beginning, Qi Yun was Ji Xian's former friend. Once, it means that he is not now. Qi Yun was originally from the God Clan and later from the Spirit Clan. He was once the leader of the Spirit Clan, Ling Zun. Later, Qi Yun became the Demon Lord. He was not recognized by the demon clan and was disqualified, but he still secured his position. Guess something went wrong with Qi Yun's resurrection. Qi Yun is not the original Qi Yun. She doesn't know Fan Jixian, and Fan Jixian doesn't think she is her friend. Then Fan Jixian was reborn after his death. At this time, he could be marked as the third life. "Qi Yun" used unknown methods to pass part of his memory to the real Qi Yun. In the first life, Mi Feidi went astray, and Qi Yun witnessed his death, be. In the second life, Qi Yun died, Mi Feidi became Fei Yuan, and finally Fei Yuan died, Qi Yun (?) Was resurrected, be. The third life is the timeline of the main text. It must be he in this life! I really like Dada's articles. I wrote about a tragedy. It's not some misunderstanding or conflict between the CPs, but a larger, irresistible external cause. This external cause must be the invasion of another world. In the first life, a sudden space-time rift swept away Mi Feidi. After that, the sky was in chaos. In the second life, as mentioned in the introduction, the Dark Realm invaded, and Mingkong finally defeated Mingkong. A tragic victory is a victory achieved at a huge cost. Finally, I confess at the end that I really like DaDa's novels! The plot is good, the writing is good, and the logic is very strong. The feeling when you accidentally discover some small details that can be corroborated with the ongoing main plot is amazing! All details are taken seriously and not perfunctory at all, and the article does not contain many troublesome logical loopholes. Please continue to work hard! I will keep chasing it!
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Wow, I really feel the charm of Xiao Zheng in this chapter! ! !