[No more writing about my English.
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Two years ago, when Ayane knocked on the door of Hawks Office for the first time, she had no idea what kind of nightmare she was about to face.
The boss himself is a young man with a bit of a middle school syndrome. He flies around every day without seeing anyone because of his pair of wings, leaving her as a wage earner to work hard to clean up his mess, negotiate with industry bosses, stay up late to catch up on reports, and even worry about his mental health and marital status.
Today, Ayane is also seriously considering the possibility of changing jobs.
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1. Cp Hawks, the heroine is an ordinary and excellent good person, not too suave and not too strong.
2. The background follows the original plot and timeline, with later magical changes
3. OOC, no logic, a lot of private settings, waiting to be slapped in the face at any time
4. Generate electricity for love. If you like to read comments, please leave more comments! (Storm cries)
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Reader comments
Teacher, will you come back? I'm going to cry (ToT)
This book is open in advance and is about interstellar beast control. The heroine will travel and grow on various planets. If adults are interested, you can check out the column.
The one who is still unmoved in the face of such Zen is this [Like] tribute to the legendary patient Wang Dongzhi
Give Datang a little Jian San shock
! I asked why Qu Jing was able to get the identity card of a core character like Dr. Crazy. It turned out that it was not because the game was unbalanced, but because all the original characters had left, and all players were equal fill-ins.
(I feel that Xiao Gu's character before and after is a little blurry. At first, I imagined an eighteen-year-old Bai Yueguang (outside), free and easy, outstanding, gentle and youthful in appearance. He has participated in tens of thousands of games, an unfathomable and easy-going top guild executive, and a logical boss (inside).
But judging from the current dialogue, he seems to be more like a character with a real personality and even a slightly down-to-earth character. So if what you really want is this effect, why do you say "tens of thousands of games" (? To be honest, 500 games is already a lot.
Even if we assume that one game lasts three days, 500 games means five years of life and death without even having time to breathe... 10,000 Games, hundreds of years of life-and-death games filled with bullets and bullets, can people really retain such distinct and normal human emotions? Even if he was facing Su Tu, he would no longer have such excited and outgoing emotions. Being able to avoid turning into a machine that is indifferent to everything, a paranoid cultist supported solely by obsession, and a self-destruction machine that can break down at any time is already the limit of the protagonist's halo, right?
Su Tu's almost uncontrollable feeling of luck and concern when he and Gu Qing reunited were really amazing! ! ! (But there is nothing after that?! Although Teacher Su always has that calm expression no matter how turbulent his heart is, can there really not be fleeting psychological activities and micro-interactions!!!!!!!!! [Pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart]) It is not to make sugar, but to make readers feel that Gu Qing is really important to Su Tu. He is not an acquaintance with some friendship, but unique.
(There is another thing that should not be a bug but is a bit strange [pink heart]: I understand that the live broadcast hall does not have VIP seats, guild boxes and other settings. All players regardless of guild or level are crowded into a live broadcast hall to watch new players. There are many people in the live broadcast hall and it is very confusing. Although everyone will consciously assign stations according to guild power and personal strength, it is not too clear-cut. Ordinary players can still jump to join in the fun and flatter the new high players. It was a hodgepodge of public places with no privacy or security. In this case, the senior officials of Zifeiyu directly started chatting about the news about Su Tu... At first, there was a vacuum belt around the vice president, and then Lu Zi came over. The scene was chaotic for a while, and there were ordinary players everywhere... Even if the sound is not loud, it doesn't matter if it is heard, but this is Infinite Flow, and the cautious habits developed by the bosses in the dungeon (?
I can feel that this is to let the main characters show their faces and reveal some important background information, but it always feels a bit deliberate and a bit out of touch with the bosses [Shut up] Like the loophole in time, which is very, very amazing, and has a dangerous and unknown color, maybe it will be more impactful if it is not repeated in a short time? The first time it was mentioned in Su Tu's subconscious, it was really shocking. This kind of shock may need to be maintained with a sense of mystery. (Personally, I think infinite flow is more dangerous and chaotic.)
Raise your paws, raise your paws, Second Young Master - Ye Hanqiong [Spreading Flowers]
Can you please update it? It looks great!
The writing is great. [Let Me Kangkang] follows one branch and one "target". Then different branches have different endings, or the branches are parallel. Finally, it is an open ending or one with a main cp.
Very nice article, the author would like to ask for more updates [crying]
In fact, Zhu Zong is like an uncle, hahahaha, a big wolf dog! Good to eat
Don't abuse me, madam
The sword tastes very strong, but it looks good. I like it very much! ! !
Ahhhh! Huihui will update it soon~~~~I can't get enough of it.
Little Renxi is so cute, Ed Nei is such a tsundere, haha, I'm so awesome!
The dream machine must have an anti-addiction mechanism. After all, it is different from playing video games. You can't eat, drink or go to the toilet when you fall asleep.
Teacher, will you come back? I'm going to cry (ToT)
This book is open in advance and is about interstellar beast control. The heroine will travel and grow on various planets. If adults are interested, you can check out the column.
The one who is still unmoved in the face of such Zen is this [Like] tribute to the legendary patient Wang Dongzhi
Give Datang a little Jian San shock
! I asked why Qu Jing was able to get the identity card of a core character like Dr. Crazy. It turned out that it was not because the game was unbalanced, but because all the original characters had left, and all players were equal fill-ins. (I feel that Xiao Gu's character before and after is a little blurry. At first, I imagined an eighteen-year-old Bai Yueguang (outside), free and easy, outstanding, gentle and youthful in appearance. He has participated in tens of thousands of games, an unfathomable and easy-going top guild executive, and a logical boss (inside). But judging from the current dialogue, he seems to be more like a character with a real personality and even a slightly down-to-earth character. So if what you really want is this effect, why do you say "tens of thousands of games" (? To be honest, 500 games is already a lot. Even if we assume that one game lasts three days, 500 games means five years of life and death without even having time to breathe... 10,000 Games, hundreds of years of life-and-death games filled with bullets and bullets, can people really retain such distinct and normal human emotions? Even if he was facing Su Tu, he would no longer have such excited and outgoing emotions. Being able to avoid turning into a machine that is indifferent to everything, a paranoid cultist supported solely by obsession, and a self-destruction machine that can break down at any time is already the limit of the protagonist's halo, right? Su Tu's almost uncontrollable feeling of luck and concern when he and Gu Qing reunited were really amazing! ! ! (But there is nothing after that?! Although Teacher Su always has that calm expression no matter how turbulent his heart is, can there really not be fleeting psychological activities and micro-interactions!!!!!!!!! [Pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart][pink heart]) It is not to make sugar, but to make readers feel that Gu Qing is really important to Su Tu. He is not an acquaintance with some friendship, but unique. (There is another thing that should not be a bug but is a bit strange [pink heart]: I understand that the live broadcast hall does not have VIP seats, guild boxes and other settings. All players regardless of guild or level are crowded into a live broadcast hall to watch new players. There are many people in the live broadcast hall and it is very confusing. Although everyone will consciously assign stations according to guild power and personal strength, it is not too clear-cut. Ordinary players can still jump to join in the fun and flatter the new high players. It was a hodgepodge of public places with no privacy or security. In this case, the senior officials of Zifeiyu directly started chatting about the news about Su Tu... At first, there was a vacuum belt around the vice president, and then Lu Zi came over. The scene was chaotic for a while, and there were ordinary players everywhere... Even if the sound is not loud, it doesn't matter if it is heard, but this is Infinite Flow, and the cautious habits developed by the bosses in the dungeon (? I can feel that this is to let the main characters show their faces and reveal some important background information, but it always feels a bit deliberate and a bit out of touch with the bosses [Shut up] Like the loophole in time, which is very, very amazing, and has a dangerous and unknown color, maybe it will be more impactful if it is not repeated in a short time? The first time it was mentioned in Su Tu's subconscious, it was really shocking. This kind of shock may need to be maintained with a sense of mystery. (Personally, I think infinite flow is more dangerous and chaotic.)
Raise your paws, raise your paws, Second Young Master - Ye Hanqiong [Spreading Flowers]
Can you please update it? It looks great!
The writing is great. [Let Me Kangkang] follows one branch and one "target". Then different branches have different endings, or the branches are parallel. Finally, it is an open ending or one with a main cp.
Very nice article, the author would like to ask for more updates [crying]
In fact, Zhu Zong is like an uncle, hahahaha, a big wolf dog! Good to eat
Don't abuse me, madam
The sword tastes very strong, but it looks good. I like it very much! ! !
Ahhhh! Huihui will update it soon~~~~I can't get enough of it. Little Renxi is so cute, Ed Nei is such a tsundere, haha, I'm so awesome!
The dream machine must have an anti-addiction mechanism. After all, it is different from playing video games. You can't eat, drink or go to the toilet when you fall asleep.
Come on q(≧▽≦q)