I'll Take That Male Second (Female Wears a Book)

My eyes, my eyes, what if I'm blind? What should I do? It's so disgusting, I really want to vomit

I personally think that the most exciting part of this book is the chapters that are free to read. The whole book can be divided into three stages: before the heroine enters school, after entering grades 1-4, and after the Goblet of Fire, the Death Eater stage. The first stage is also the most attractive to me. Here, the clown-like Lockhart in the original work is brought to life. Because of the addition of the heroine, the originally cool Lockhart has gradually become more responsible. I really like the interaction between the heroine and Lockhart at this time. The joyful father-daughter team is really so loving and heartwarming~ It is at this stage that the foreshadowing of the two heroines' life experiences was laid, ① why they were resurrected and what happened before they died; ② where does the heroine's magic power come from, and why does the vampire heroine protect the heroine so much. The second stage enters Hogwarts. Because it has the original plot as a basis, although this part is not that original, it is still readable. It also gradually reveals the first two foreshadowings, especially the entanglement between the heroine and Voldemort when she was a child. It's just that after the first foreshadowing was revealed, I stopped caring about it. I felt that it would be better if I could continue writing. The third stage is my personal least favorite. The heroine has to join the Death Eaters camp and leave school because of her unbreakable bond with Voldemort. This is a purely original plot with no original work to refer to, and it exposes some weaknesses in the author's wife's writing. The plot setting is very sparse, and some aspects feel unreasonable; for example, the love and sacrifice of the heroine's father for her are very poignant, but they are carried lightly; Peter Pettigrew's position suddenly changed to helping the heroine to kill Death Eaters. In the previous chapter, he still captured the image of the heroine's pigtails, but why did the change happen so suddenly without much introduction? There are many more like this... I didn't want to give up and ended up skipping through it, which didn't affect the plot~

? ! ! The water of West Lake, my tears TAT

Damn, are you still updating? I want to see the follow-up. I hope you won't abandon the article

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Update soon. Uh-huh. It's so beautiful. I can't get enough of it.

Sister-in-law, are you serious about those things you don't eat?

Wow, you are so appetizing.

Come on, teacher! Still looking forward to this article! Looking forward to Louie's story too! [Come on][Come on]

Teacher, you finally updated

Oh, I haven't seen how it's locked yet [crying]

I think I've seen it in Tieba. It's longer than this. I wonder if it will be completely moved here.

He hasn't grown up yet, so dating is probably not as fun for him as it would be if he found a "boyfriend" like Nana Ming. Hahahahaha

I've finished reading. Can't I read the chapter if it's locked?