Copywriting 1
When he was three years old, Liu Mu contracted an infectious disease, resulting in lameness and disability.
When he was in kindergarten, Xiao Liumu walked into the classroom anxiously. The children in the class surrounded him, sang to him, danced for him, drew pictures for him, and said that he was an angel descended to the world.
Although Xiao Liu Mu didn't say much, the smile on his face was extremely happy.
In elementary school, when Liu Mu was walking home, a naughty child deliberately pushed him into a muddy pond. Liu Mu stubbornly got up and went to beat him, but due to lack of physical fitness, he received a solid beating.
After that, Liu Mu put away his smile and treated others with indifference
In junior high school, no one would push him. They would only look at him with sympathy. Even if he was ranked first in grades, he would not be able to change his fate of being disabled.
Among them, including Rong Hua
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Copywriting 2
On the first day of school, a scholar-level figure came to Class 13 of Senior High School.
There are rumors that Liu Mu and Rong Hua were roommates in junior high school and they played well together.
The classmate asked Liu Mu, but the answer he got was a cold and distant answer - I am not familiar with her.
A classmate asked Rong Hua. Rong Hua was learning how to apply eyeliner in the seat. She was doing it violently in front of the mirror. When she heard the question, she asked lightly: "Who is Liu Mu?"
Intention: In the most hurried and youthful age, love learning, love life, and love deep love.
Reader comments
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I collected your novels before, but I hadn't added them to V at that time. I think you have the ability to write. Your wording is very serious and rigorous, there are no grammatical errors, and your writing skills are solid. It can also be seen that the author has a serious writing attitude. You should carefully revise and correct each chapter before publishing it. To be honest, the current writing environment is not very good, entertainment is fast, and the novels on JJ are now like an assembly line. When a certain style of writing becomes popular, it will be followed by a large number of popular articles. There are also a lot of fluffy articles with no content, a lot of typos, and it hurts the eyes. However, people nowadays read articles at 2x the speed of watching videos, and it is difficult to calm down and take a closer look. Moreover, JJ's website has become more and more detailed in recent years. Many good articles have no exposure at all. Sometimes readers do not know that this article exists. Therefore, I think the "failure" of your article is due to many factors. The objective environment cannot be changed, and complaining will not help. We can only adjust our mentality and constantly improve our writing style. When I was in college, I registered as an author out of my love for Danmei. Over the years, I wrote several novels one after another. The income was pretty good, but I didn't have the perseverance to persevere. After graduation, I got a formal job and became lazy, so I just read novels. During this process, I can clearly feel the changes in the atmosphere of the entire writing circle. It is consistent with the atmosphere of our Chinese society as a whole. Times are changing, especially several popular D After the AN film and television series came out, a lot of people flooded into this circle, and various methods of "how to make new articles become million-dollar hits" emerged in endlessly (you can search for them on Bilibili). Under the commercial model of those people, the same novel suddenly stood out and appeared on major lists. If you follow it, you will find that many articles have not changed at all. They are always there. The higher the exposure, the higher the click-through rate points and so on, and the more people will buy. In this case, pure authors who rely on love and full of enthusiasm can't do it at all. Your responsibility and editor actually don't care at all. Just like those low-level starlets in the entertainment industry, those capitals don't care about your life or death at all, and it doesn't matter if you don't like others. If you want to get high exposure for your articles, you may have to follow some other methods. However, this is tantamount to breaking your bones and knees, making the author unable to stand up again. In the future, he will probably lose his passion for writing, which is not worth the gain (those who engage in routines will not, because they do not write out of love), so don't be impatient, don't be sad, you are actually very good, and your writing skills are very strong, but your style has not catered to the current market. First, live your own real life well. In fact, we writers who rely on love to generate electricity have a big flaw. We are too "self-righteous" and live too much in our own world. Please be more worldly, more philistine, live a down-to-earth life, observe, integrate into the real world, observe the various situations in the world, get out of the barriers in your heart, get in touch with various human natures that collide, and then adjust your direction and start again. You actually write better than many other authors. Mutual encouragement.
Update quickly, update quickly (? ˙O˙)?
Collect masterpieces. Ren Huayu came to visit with "The Revenge of the Golden Boy"!
Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers.
Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers Spread the flowers
My suggestion is great, how about two updates a day, sisters, do you agree?😝
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