(One quarter rotten + one half otaku + one quarter noob)
Maybe there is laughter, maybe there is sadness... Everything is still unknown... I have the physique of Alice inexplicably. The development of things is different from the plot in my memory, but some of them are the same...
[I ignored this article for a long time, and after thinking about it again and again, I decided to define this article as the end. Because the later idea was to end here... Why do so many people say that we are unfinished? Q mouth Q]
[Because my increasingly crumbling soul will never be pure again, so I won't be able to continue this article. = = Please ignore the noobs' part.]
[Xia Ke, just think I'm sorry and please don't hack my computer! ! ! >A
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Why don't you feel tired? . Why don't you feel tired? . . . Extra. . . . Strong demand for extras. .
Okita is also a short-lived child... Ayao will be merciful... A husband must not be bullied...
After saving her, Shu Chan turned back into a daughter...?
You're so domineering, Captain! Last time she was the queen, this time she's the top one, why are they both so weird?
Xiaomo, I'm here. Already collected?
Dear~
The patriarch of the Miao nationality turned out to be a cute uncle, very cute, but the lady was a bit cruel and left the old man at home...
Ouch~ With such loving parents, isn't that child also very loving?
By the way, people want to be thirteen, you understand... Gah~
The author's narrative style and some plots are somewhat similar to "Little Cockroach", but the writing is not as clean and neat as "Little Cockroach". It can be seen that the author only intends to write a warm little article. The number of words in each chapter is very small, and the total number of words is probably not many. The author will probably let the dragon transform into a human at the end, or let the mentor reveal his identity to surprise the magician, but the use of Eastern dragons and Western magic in this plot is somewhat wasteful. Because Western magic and Eastern dragons are two very big settings. It can have wild plots and imagination. But in the end, the article only focused on owners and pets, and it felt like watching a famous general enjoying the cool air in his backyard every day. My feeling is, why write about a generation of famous generals enjoying the cool weather? In fact, those who sell tofu and vegetables can also enjoy the coolness at home. Of course, that's not to say it's not possible, I just feel like such a good setting is not used. For example, if you use the fireball technique to defeat a dragon, you can actually defeat it with the soles of slippers. However, there may be a finishing touch in the end. After all, the article is not finished yet, and it is too early to make a final decision now. The ending of a short story is very important, and I look forward to an ending that will make people's eyes shine. I hope the author can delve deeper into the background of Western magic and create a more beautiful world.
I am your very loyal reader. If you don't read pirated articles, just buy V and refresh them regularly. I never think that the author has the obligation to actively update or let readers lead the plot. But I hope that the author can empathize with the readers' expectations and keep his word. Maybe he can't write because of many things, but if you come up and say it, everyone will understand. A few words will not waste the author's time, but it will save people a lot of questions and peace of mind.
So in fact, it was the real Yukino Chisara who became mute, and the original Yukino Orika (clone) has been playing the role of Yukino Chisara... No wonder there is a scene where Chisara (Orika) recalls Heath
Luo Da worked hard. She leaned over and asked for a touch.
As a member of the new senior high school party, I came here to be cute and cover my face the day before school started. My moral integrity has been lost.
That's why I said = Senior year party members are the most annoying, huh
This chapter really hits our cuteness point.
Mr. Lailu, you have ruthlessly led your disciple into a trap. For this, I have the highest respect (I collapsed again = =)
So the reason for getting married is not so simple! ! ! Luo Da, you tricked me again! ! ! ! I said it before just because my child said it and burst into tears, which made me sad for a while. The result? It's gratifying, it's gratifying.
The maternal halo on these two bodies almost blinded me. Is it really okay to be so bright?
Then. . . . . I got excited just looking at it. What are these two people going to do? They were so ordinary at first, and then they confessed their feelings to each other and started to shine? OMG
I feel like I need to calm down, no way! ! ! So cute! ! ! Miyatan is also super cute. I really want to hug her.
I'm excited again. . . . . Speaking of the host of the wedding, didn't the little universe in Teresa's heart explode? I was also very happy to watch the interaction with Di Shen, laughing. (Theresa-sama won't take Claire away, maybe...)
Then the two beautiful goddesses had such a pious wedding, scattering flowers (I really didn't want to steal Miyatan's job, really)
The writing is good and the characters are not out of shape.
I want to watch the extra episode
I want to watch Xiaojiu's extra episode
I like this light writing style, very comfortable and charming
So um
this is
The ending?
It turns out that you,
It sucks
.... I thought the ending would be interesting.
Well, it seems that everyone has the same opinion on this ending. I am speechless. . .
This can't be considered a tail end at all, right? !
Dad, I am a reader of Oogway Dolls. I hope to write the story of Feitan and Xuan in the future. Um... Is it okay? (Star Eyes)
It seems that I saw it a long time ago. I was about to take the college entrance examination and left many of the articles behind. Now let me review it.
I kind of hate Chrollo = = and Pike, although I have never had a good impression of the leader. . . . Ah la~
Why don't you feel tired? . Why don't you feel tired? . . . Extra. . . . Strong demand for extras. .
Okita is also a short-lived child... Ayao will be merciful... A husband must not be bullied...
After saving her, Shu Chan turned back into a daughter...?
You're so domineering, Captain! Last time she was the queen, this time she's the top one, why are they both so weird?
Xiaomo, I'm here. Already collected?
Dear~ The patriarch of the Miao nationality turned out to be a cute uncle, very cute, but the lady was a bit cruel and left the old man at home... Ouch~ With such loving parents, isn't that child also very loving? By the way, people want to be thirteen, you understand... Gah~
The author's narrative style and some plots are somewhat similar to "Little Cockroach", but the writing is not as clean and neat as "Little Cockroach". It can be seen that the author only intends to write a warm little article. The number of words in each chapter is very small, and the total number of words is probably not many. The author will probably let the dragon transform into a human at the end, or let the mentor reveal his identity to surprise the magician, but the use of Eastern dragons and Western magic in this plot is somewhat wasteful. Because Western magic and Eastern dragons are two very big settings. It can have wild plots and imagination. But in the end, the article only focused on owners and pets, and it felt like watching a famous general enjoying the cool air in his backyard every day. My feeling is, why write about a generation of famous generals enjoying the cool weather? In fact, those who sell tofu and vegetables can also enjoy the coolness at home. Of course, that's not to say it's not possible, I just feel like such a good setting is not used. For example, if you use the fireball technique to defeat a dragon, you can actually defeat it with the soles of slippers. However, there may be a finishing touch in the end. After all, the article is not finished yet, and it is too early to make a final decision now. The ending of a short story is very important, and I look forward to an ending that will make people's eyes shine. I hope the author can delve deeper into the background of Western magic and create a more beautiful world.
I am your very loyal reader. If you don't read pirated articles, just buy V and refresh them regularly. I never think that the author has the obligation to actively update or let readers lead the plot. But I hope that the author can empathize with the readers' expectations and keep his word. Maybe he can't write because of many things, but if you come up and say it, everyone will understand. A few words will not waste the author's time, but it will save people a lot of questions and peace of mind.
So in fact, it was the real Yukino Chisara who became mute, and the original Yukino Orika (clone) has been playing the role of Yukino Chisara... No wonder there is a scene where Chisara (Orika) recalls Heath
Luo Da worked hard. She leaned over and asked for a touch. As a member of the new senior high school party, I came here to be cute and cover my face the day before school started. My moral integrity has been lost. That's why I said = Senior year party members are the most annoying, huh This chapter really hits our cuteness point. Mr. Lailu, you have ruthlessly led your disciple into a trap. For this, I have the highest respect (I collapsed again = =) So the reason for getting married is not so simple! ! ! Luo Da, you tricked me again! ! ! ! I said it before just because my child said it and burst into tears, which made me sad for a while. The result? It's gratifying, it's gratifying. The maternal halo on these two bodies almost blinded me. Is it really okay to be so bright? Then. . . . . I got excited just looking at it. What are these two people going to do? They were so ordinary at first, and then they confessed their feelings to each other and started to shine? OMG I feel like I need to calm down, no way! ! ! So cute! ! ! Miyatan is also super cute. I really want to hug her. I'm excited again. . . . . Speaking of the host of the wedding, didn't the little universe in Teresa's heart explode? I was also very happy to watch the interaction with Di Shen, laughing. (Theresa-sama won't take Claire away, maybe...) Then the two beautiful goddesses had such a pious wedding, scattering flowers (I really didn't want to steal Miyatan's job, really)
The writing is good and the characters are not out of shape.
I want to watch the extra episode I want to watch Xiaojiu's extra episode
I like this light writing style, very comfortable and charming
So um this is The ending? It turns out that you, It sucks
.... I thought the ending would be interesting.
Well, it seems that everyone has the same opinion on this ending. I am speechless. . .
This can't be considered a tail end at all, right? !
Dad, I am a reader of Oogway Dolls. I hope to write the story of Feitan and Xuan in the future. Um... Is it okay? (Star Eyes)
It seems that I saw it a long time ago. I was about to take the college entrance examination and left many of the articles behind. Now let me review it.
I kind of hate Chrollo = = and Pike, although I have never had a good impression of the leader. . . . Ah la~