++Thank you for the advance collection of the article "Various Masters" next door! (This article entered v from Chapter 22 on February 12th, and it was three chapters on the same day. Thank you for your continued support!) This article is also called "Jealous without My CP". An Wuming clearly remembers Tianxian once said: "I hate women, and talk about women." So for many years she kept to herself, fearing that she would offend the gods. She didn't understand the true meaning of this sentence until she was pushed down on the bed later. "Talking about girls, your color changes." The fairy's color changed, which was even more unbearable. [The sinister and arrogant young woman attacks the immortals × licks the dog to support her and makes her feel sentimental]
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There are several questions.
First, some plots are not explained clearly enough. For example, is Long Li reincarnated or just wiped out? If Li Yusi had not returned to his original form, how could he reappear? Have you become a mortal?
Second, the timeline is confusing. The TV series Journey to the East mainly takes place in the Tang Dynasty, and the end of the drama is already in the Song Dynasty. Lu and He traveled back in time to the reign of Xuanzong, the era of the Anshi Rebellion. But at the end of this article, He Xiangu, who has returned to the normal timeline and has been reincarnated and experienced a lot, can actually accept Wu Zetian's edict? Wu Zetian's era was earlier than the Anshi Rebellion! According to the trend of TV series, the end of this article should be the Song and Ming Dynasties.
Now let's talk about the advantages.
It can be seen that the author's ancient style of writing is excellent. The diction of this article is outstanding. Moreover, the plot is not boring, it is very interesting, and can attract people to read it in one breath. Although it is a fairy tale fanfic, it not only relies on the magic and imagination of fairy fantasy to attract people, but also brings some adventure and suspense elements. Therefore, even if the writing is not mentioned, the story alone is very strong. And the story is not thin. Lu He's adventure experience can connect different characters and stories, each with its own sorrow and characteristics, intertwining with each other to create such a fan fiction. Rather than just focusing on realizing Xipi's dream and serving Xipi. Rather, it extends and broadens the overall story of the original play, and constructs such a continuation based on the author's imagination and understanding. Then there is the characterization. Lu Dongbin, He Xiangu, the Eight Immortals, Long San, Peony, Queen Mother, Pangolin and other original drama characters are not as close to the original drama as possible and retain the characteristics of the characters. After reading other Journey to the East fanfics, most of the characters are very out of shape. Only this article is a qualified fanfic, trying to maintain the original style of the characters as much as possible. Because the author does not just serve Xipi, but also extends the overall plot. For example, although the character Peony Fairy/White Peony is not the author's Xipi, she still retains the kind and intelligent character in the play as much as possible and arranges a better marriage. I have seen other Lu Hewen characters, and designed this character to be a scheming green tea villain. This goes against the original intention of the show, and makes Bai Mudan become a villain tool serving the male and female protagonist Xipi. This way of writing is inevitably low-key. This article avoids this problem better. Moreover, the arrangement is appropriate, and this character does not interfere too much with the progress of Xipi, the main plot of this article. As the male and female protagonists, the author is most attentive in shaping He Xiangu and Lu Dongbin. Needless to say, He Xiangu continued the indifference, righteousness and calmness of the original play. And Lu Dongbin's portrayal is also the best among all the fans. This is so rare. Lu Dongbin in other stories is almost out of shape and has become Xipi's tool. However, Lu Dongbin in this article is not Xipi's foil, and still retains his chic and extraordinary style. Then there is the artistic conception. Although there are many story lines and many characters, the forms are scattered and the spirit is not scattered, because the whole text revolves around a clear theme: asking for love. Most of the plot revolves around this love word. Through a series of experiences of the fairy couple, they saw various emotions in the story, other people's emotions as well as their own emotions. This love is mainly love, but it is not just love. It includes the love of all mankind, but also includes family affection, friendship, various emotions, various entanglements and stories caused by various characters gathered because of love... All-encompassing the various faces and styles of sentient beings. A question summed up appropriately. The whole text also echoes the ending. From the beginning, Lu Dongbin went to the world to experience, specifically asked about love, but failed to understand it, to the end, all kinds of right and wrong came to an end, the storyteller and Guishu Xian discussed and summarized love. There are many emotions in the world, including songs and tears, but the most transcendent thing is the great love for the common people. He Xiangu is the embodiment of this great love. At this point, the question of love ends.
The writing, plot, characterization, and artistic depth are all there, and it's an excellent fanfic. There is no doubt that this fan work of Xian Lu Wenqing is the best fan work of Journey to the East. It can be called representative.
The story naturally also has many original characters. All impressive. The biggest villain is naturally Long Li. He is very much like a pangolin, the type who becomes obsessed with love, is very possessive, and wants to get it by any means necessary. However, they do not want to know and cannot understand what their lover wants, their interests and soul. Although this kind of love can be called deep love, it is creating karma and destroying people. Of course, Long Li, like pangolins, also has his own unfortunate life experience and experiences, which has resulted in their extreme personalities. The word "love" is inherently harmless and harmful. In the final analysis, it is still the human heart, character and choice.
Secondly, there are two characters created by the author: Li Yusi and Fairy Qingluo. These two characters are very similar. It is in contrast to Longli and Pangolin. They have affection and love, but the justice of the common people comes first. Even so, even though the gods forbade romance, they still fell in love and had the spirit to disregard heavenly rules for the sake of love. In the end, because of their love and their future as immortals, one was wiped out and the other lost his immortal status. This is a test and a disaster that love brings to them, but for them, love is a gift, something they are unwilling to let go of in the end. They have great righteousness and great plans, but they cannot let go of their feelings. It is impossible to be as aware and self-controlled as Donghua and Lu Dongbin, nor to be as calm as He Xiangu.
There are all kinds of emotions in the article. Like Xian Lu, who sacrifices love for justice and turns love into a free world to protect the common people. In love, they are also close friends. It is difficult to summarize it simply. There are also paranoid and possessive emotions like Long Li and Pangolin. There is Long Li's love for Qing Luo, Pangolin's love for He Xiangu, the love between Qing Luo and Donghua, the love between Dragon King Chunying and Dragon King Liniang, the love between Li Yusi for He Xiangu's silent protection, and the love between Li Yusi and Honglian Bilian. There are complicated and profound feelings, such as Bilian's unrequited love for Li Yusi, Sun Xian'er's unrequited love for Li Yusi, and the ordinary couple's love like Long San, Sun Ying, Bai Mudan and Gu Kuang, who finally get married. In addition to love, there is also the friendship between the Eight Immortals, the family relationship between Queen Mother Qingluo, the family relationship between Long Sanxian'er, Li Yusi and Lu Dongbin's confidant relationship from their initial mismatch to their sincere appreciation later, and the confidant relationship between Han Xiangzi and Li Yusi The love is very similar to that of Long Li and Li Yusi, the kind of friendship where past friends turned against each other... There are various kinds of love, but the most praiseworthy ones are the great love of He Xiangu, Lu Dongbin, Donghua, Li Yusi and others who sacrificed themselves for the sake of the common people.
One clever thing is the handling of Mudan and Donghua's feelings. As a colleague of Lu Hexiang, how should I write the poem "Red Leaves"? How to connect red leaves and peonies? It turns out that the poem "Red Leaves" itself is the work of Peony's previous life, which also led to a romantic relationship. Mudan seems to have accidentally broken into a world that does not belong to her, and mistakenly paid for a relationship that does not belong to her. After experiencing a love disaster, she returned to her world, continued her desired life path, and reunited with her lover from her previous life. This approach is clever and natural.
Great author, please update it soon
You're back! I'm so cold too, my hands and feet are cold.
"You have land" is a big thorn in the side of the author~
There are floor seams [Come on]
Indeed, when you are in a high position, all your good and bad actions will be defended by great scholars.
It made me laugh so hard. I laughed so hard every chapter. The teacher is so awesome! Come update soon!
Check in, check in, check in, check in
Why isn't it updated?
So it's the readers who suffer, right?
Not enough. Not enough. Please update.
Wait, did you agree with Gintoki to send a signal when you find Haruta?
Come on, teacher, I'm going to stock up [crying]
Damn, when will it open? [Changed]
You two haven't had sex for more than a month, and I've been missing you both for more than a month and crying.
Totally not enough! If you keep doing this, I will gain weight.
The leaves have not come out, but the breath of leaves is everywhere. She is everywhere [laughing and crying]
It's a lot like watching the drama of slapping the daughter of the Huo family in the face
It's well written, but I'm a little worried. The heroine won't be a bitch for seven years. I don't want that.
When I read the copy, I was looking forward to Xiao Ning's appearance, and it's finally here!
The ending was unexpected. Hey, Brother Yan didn't drive this time? Rare rare?
There are several questions. First, some plots are not explained clearly enough. For example, is Long Li reincarnated or just wiped out? If Li Yusi had not returned to his original form, how could he reappear? Have you become a mortal? Second, the timeline is confusing. The TV series Journey to the East mainly takes place in the Tang Dynasty, and the end of the drama is already in the Song Dynasty. Lu and He traveled back in time to the reign of Xuanzong, the era of the Anshi Rebellion. But at the end of this article, He Xiangu, who has returned to the normal timeline and has been reincarnated and experienced a lot, can actually accept Wu Zetian's edict? Wu Zetian's era was earlier than the Anshi Rebellion! According to the trend of TV series, the end of this article should be the Song and Ming Dynasties. Now let's talk about the advantages. It can be seen that the author's ancient style of writing is excellent. The diction of this article is outstanding. Moreover, the plot is not boring, it is very interesting, and can attract people to read it in one breath. Although it is a fairy tale fanfic, it not only relies on the magic and imagination of fairy fantasy to attract people, but also brings some adventure and suspense elements. Therefore, even if the writing is not mentioned, the story alone is very strong. And the story is not thin. Lu He's adventure experience can connect different characters and stories, each with its own sorrow and characteristics, intertwining with each other to create such a fan fiction. Rather than just focusing on realizing Xipi's dream and serving Xipi. Rather, it extends and broadens the overall story of the original play, and constructs such a continuation based on the author's imagination and understanding. Then there is the characterization. Lu Dongbin, He Xiangu, the Eight Immortals, Long San, Peony, Queen Mother, Pangolin and other original drama characters are not as close to the original drama as possible and retain the characteristics of the characters. After reading other Journey to the East fanfics, most of the characters are very out of shape. Only this article is a qualified fanfic, trying to maintain the original style of the characters as much as possible. Because the author does not just serve Xipi, but also extends the overall plot. For example, although the character Peony Fairy/White Peony is not the author's Xipi, she still retains the kind and intelligent character in the play as much as possible and arranges a better marriage. I have seen other Lu Hewen characters, and designed this character to be a scheming green tea villain. This goes against the original intention of the show, and makes Bai Mudan become a villain tool serving the male and female protagonist Xipi. This way of writing is inevitably low-key. This article avoids this problem better. Moreover, the arrangement is appropriate, and this character does not interfere too much with the progress of Xipi, the main plot of this article. As the male and female protagonists, the author is most attentive in shaping He Xiangu and Lu Dongbin. Needless to say, He Xiangu continued the indifference, righteousness and calmness of the original play. And Lu Dongbin's portrayal is also the best among all the fans. This is so rare. Lu Dongbin in other stories is almost out of shape and has become Xipi's tool. However, Lu Dongbin in this article is not Xipi's foil, and still retains his chic and extraordinary style. Then there is the artistic conception. Although there are many story lines and many characters, the forms are scattered and the spirit is not scattered, because the whole text revolves around a clear theme: asking for love. Most of the plot revolves around this love word. Through a series of experiences of the fairy couple, they saw various emotions in the story, other people's emotions as well as their own emotions. This love is mainly love, but it is not just love. It includes the love of all mankind, but also includes family affection, friendship, various emotions, various entanglements and stories caused by various characters gathered because of love... All-encompassing the various faces and styles of sentient beings. A question summed up appropriately. The whole text also echoes the ending. From the beginning, Lu Dongbin went to the world to experience, specifically asked about love, but failed to understand it, to the end, all kinds of right and wrong came to an end, the storyteller and Guishu Xian discussed and summarized love. There are many emotions in the world, including songs and tears, but the most transcendent thing is the great love for the common people. He Xiangu is the embodiment of this great love. At this point, the question of love ends. The writing, plot, characterization, and artistic depth are all there, and it's an excellent fanfic. There is no doubt that this fan work of Xian Lu Wenqing is the best fan work of Journey to the East. It can be called representative. The story naturally also has many original characters. All impressive. The biggest villain is naturally Long Li. He is very much like a pangolin, the type who becomes obsessed with love, is very possessive, and wants to get it by any means necessary. However, they do not want to know and cannot understand what their lover wants, their interests and soul. Although this kind of love can be called deep love, it is creating karma and destroying people. Of course, Long Li, like pangolins, also has his own unfortunate life experience and experiences, which has resulted in their extreme personalities. The word "love" is inherently harmless and harmful. In the final analysis, it is still the human heart, character and choice. Secondly, there are two characters created by the author: Li Yusi and Fairy Qingluo. These two characters are very similar. It is in contrast to Longli and Pangolin. They have affection and love, but the justice of the common people comes first. Even so, even though the gods forbade romance, they still fell in love and had the spirit to disregard heavenly rules for the sake of love. In the end, because of their love and their future as immortals, one was wiped out and the other lost his immortal status. This is a test and a disaster that love brings to them, but for them, love is a gift, something they are unwilling to let go of in the end. They have great righteousness and great plans, but they cannot let go of their feelings. It is impossible to be as aware and self-controlled as Donghua and Lu Dongbin, nor to be as calm as He Xiangu. There are all kinds of emotions in the article. Like Xian Lu, who sacrifices love for justice and turns love into a free world to protect the common people. In love, they are also close friends. It is difficult to summarize it simply. There are also paranoid and possessive emotions like Long Li and Pangolin. There is Long Li's love for Qing Luo, Pangolin's love for He Xiangu, the love between Qing Luo and Donghua, the love between Dragon King Chunying and Dragon King Liniang, the love between Li Yusi for He Xiangu's silent protection, and the love between Li Yusi and Honglian Bilian. There are complicated and profound feelings, such as Bilian's unrequited love for Li Yusi, Sun Xian'er's unrequited love for Li Yusi, and the ordinary couple's love like Long San, Sun Ying, Bai Mudan and Gu Kuang, who finally get married. In addition to love, there is also the friendship between the Eight Immortals, the family relationship between Queen Mother Qingluo, the family relationship between Long Sanxian'er, Li Yusi and Lu Dongbin's confidant relationship from their initial mismatch to their sincere appreciation later, and the confidant relationship between Han Xiangzi and Li Yusi The love is very similar to that of Long Li and Li Yusi, the kind of friendship where past friends turned against each other... There are various kinds of love, but the most praiseworthy ones are the great love of He Xiangu, Lu Dongbin, Donghua, Li Yusi and others who sacrificed themselves for the sake of the common people. One clever thing is the handling of Mudan and Donghua's feelings. As a colleague of Lu Hexiang, how should I write the poem "Red Leaves"? How to connect red leaves and peonies? It turns out that the poem "Red Leaves" itself is the work of Peony's previous life, which also led to a romantic relationship. Mudan seems to have accidentally broken into a world that does not belong to her, and mistakenly paid for a relationship that does not belong to her. After experiencing a love disaster, she returned to her world, continued her desired life path, and reunited with her lover from her previous life. This approach is clever and natural.
Great author, please update it soon
You're back! I'm so cold too, my hands and feet are cold.
"You have land" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ There are floor seams [Come on]
Indeed, when you are in a high position, all your good and bad actions will be defended by great scholars.
It made me laugh so hard. I laughed so hard every chapter. The teacher is so awesome! Come update soon!
Check in, check in, check in, check in
Why isn't it updated?
So it's the readers who suffer, right?
Not enough. Not enough. Please update.
Wait, did you agree with Gintoki to send a signal when you find Haruta?
Come on, teacher, I'm going to stock up [crying]
Damn, when will it open? [Changed]
You two haven't had sex for more than a month, and I've been missing you both for more than a month and crying.
Totally not enough! If you keep doing this, I will gain weight.
The leaves have not come out, but the breath of leaves is everywhere. She is everywhere [laughing and crying]
It's a lot like watching the drama of slapping the daughter of the Huo family in the face
It's well written, but I'm a little worried. The heroine won't be a bitch for seven years. I don't want that.
When I read the copy, I was looking forward to Xiao Ning's appearance, and it's finally here!
The ending was unexpected. Hey, Brother Yan didn't drive this time? Rare rare?