The city of Nao is far away from the mainland and is covered in fog.
Ellie came all the way, not to seize the treasure, nor to rescue the beauty.
She just got on a sea ship, anywhere
Who would have thought...
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The dense forest that has been sealed for 5 centuries is revealed again
The mysterious girl Ellie and the blond boy Roland
I got involved and had a green love affair by the way.
Goblins, elves, dwarves, giants and various magical creatures appear
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Newbie writing, please give me some advice
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Keep updating every day or every other day
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Reader comments
The adventure is about to begin. The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work! Collected
The previous chapters have been revised and will continue to be updated.
I'm still not satisfied with the first chapter, and I might change it again in the future.
HhhhhhRuven, the warrior who is afraid of spiders
An angry little hedgehog?
Just follow the rhythm that the author likes! Looking forward to the follow-up~
Although there are more and more mysteries, it doesn't stop me from shouting: Shota is so cute!
Nothing to criticize, I just think it looks good. Hurry up and write, whip up the little whip
As a poor writer, it's hard for me to give writing advice, so I'll share my thoughts on reading.
It feels like the plot begins to slow down after entering the elven realm. However, the protagonist group was seriously injured in the previous battle, so there is no problem in slowing down a bit here. At the same time, we can also learn more about the current life of the elves and their views on non-common people.
As for King Aleus, emmm... His moodiness gives people a sense of incomprehension. What will the past events of the two clans look like from his perspective? This is a bit curious.
That's probably it. The mobile layout is a bit messy, so please don't dislike it.
The adventure is about to begin. The writing is pretty good, keep up the good work! Collected
The previous chapters have been revised and will continue to be updated. I'm still not satisfied with the first chapter, and I might change it again in the future.
HhhhhhRuven, the warrior who is afraid of spiders
An angry little hedgehog?
Just follow the rhythm that the author likes! Looking forward to the follow-up~
Although there are more and more mysteries, it doesn't stop me from shouting: Shota is so cute!
Nothing to criticize, I just think it looks good. Hurry up and write, whip up the little whip
As a poor writer, it's hard for me to give writing advice, so I'll share my thoughts on reading. It feels like the plot begins to slow down after entering the elven realm. However, the protagonist group was seriously injured in the previous battle, so there is no problem in slowing down a bit here. At the same time, we can also learn more about the current life of the elves and their views on non-common people. As for King Aleus, emmm... His moodiness gives people a sense of incomprehension. What will the past events of the two clans look like from his perspective? This is a bit curious. That's probably it. The mobile layout is a bit messy, so please don't dislike it.