The author's writing style is very good, but it feels like the story is too depressing. Although it is about showing the harmful effects of the feudal system, but the whole story only gives people a feeling that the heroine is shy, depressed, sad for spring and autumn. It feels that the author wants to create a sensitive and intelligent type of talented woman a bit like Lin Daiyu. The character design in the early stage is okay, but in the later stage it is a bit pretentious, not to mention that the heroine traveled through time, just for the task, and also brought the system (although It's useless), but such an awesome setting was mixed up like this in the later stage, which is the reason for the heroine. She clearly knows all the plot, knows that the hero is unreliable, and still puts her hope in the hero again and again. It is worse than the original Mo Lan. At least everyone in the Sheng family in the original novel does not like the heroine, so she puts all her efforts into fighting the concubine of the hero. Even if the story is set that the heroine must be the same as in the previous life, the heroine can also change! Let's talk about giving birth to a girl. The original setting is that two boys aborted and gave birth to five golden flowers. The heroine already knows the process. Can't we change it? , Even if it can be changed, why are you obviously unhappy and not making a scene? Anyway, the ending of the story is set. If there is no trouble, why should we accept it? She also loves the concubine and the mistress. It is inexplicable. Even in modern times, no first wife loves the mistress and the concubine. You can argue that it was in ancient times, but the heroine is a modern person? , You can say that the heroine doesn't care, but throughout the whole story, the heroine clearly cares. Maybe the author can say that the heroine knows that she can only have girls, and wants to please the bastard, but this setting means that both parties have a tacit understanding, and there is nothing to feel wronged about.
So after reading it, I felt that the whole novel was inconsistent and very frustrating. The heroine is simply wrong. She is not even abusing herself, because the heroine has no rival in the whole novel, and she cannot be hypocritical and sensitive. It is simply torture for the sake of torture, which gives people a sense of beautiful writing. , But after analysis, I feel incomprehensible, especially since the author also claims to be anti-feudal, and the female protagonist is different from ordinary time-travel novels. However, if you look closely, you can see that the female protagonist is not even comparable to ordinary sadistic novels, because at least they have a vicious female protagonist to bully them.
I write so much not to criticize the author, or to say how this novel is, but because I felt a heart attack after reading it, but the author's writing is obviously very good, so I wanted to tell the author about my feelings after reading it.
This is just my personal opinion, a polite comment.
The real hell may be the human world. The heroine comes from a freer era mentally, and it is inevitable to be unfortunate when she travels to the past, because she is awake and in pain. There should be part of the reason for this in terms of personality, because even in modern times, true freedom is not possible, and there is a lot of pain and restraint.
I feel that she is very conflicted about love. She once had a sincere relationship, but later on, the love line about Liang Han was not sincere enough and did not meet the heroine's requirements for love. It was still entangled.
Sisters, I recommend you to go to Huaben and read a variety film called The Female Counterweight. The first story about Mo Lan is not exciting, it is just a mediocre story without killing everyone. It is really among the top three stories about Mo Lan that I have read, and it only has about 40 chapters.
When reading my wife's articles, I always feel an inescapable sense of fate. Powerless and pathetic, I feel that things in the world are just like that...
I just felt sad after reading it, even sadder than the original work. The heroine traveled through the past and knew the plot. A lot has changed, but nothing seems to have changed. According to the current development of the plot, it feels no different from the ending of the original work Mo Lan. She gave birth to a lot of daughters, kept a lot of concubines, her husband left her, her mother-in-law looked for trouble, and she spent all her dowry. It turns out that Mo Lan still has the courage to fight, although it is only limited to house fighting, but the heroine seems to have lost her temper after getting married, and she has resigned herself to it. Liang Han has treated him like this, and he can really take revenge. The heroine feels that the concubine is innocent and the child was born by a concubine. Although the child is innocent, although it is a problem of the feudal system, Liang Han must not be innocent. The other men in the novel are not like this. The heroine is used to it. She takes care of her concubine and all the children conscientiously. Isn't it more feudal than women in feudal society? The problem of concubines has not been solved from the root. They are still raised with dowry. King Ruofu can quarrel openly, and there are also couples who cannot live together. The heroine has traveled through time, and she is not living a good life.
It's so sad. Can you make her happy? She's really sad.
I saw the author's ending in Princess. The heroine died young, Liang married Widow Ma and entered the house. The rose that the heroine loved most in the mansion was chopped off and replaced by the bride's chrysanthemum. Several children turned away from the heroine and hero. After seeing the ending of the heroine, Yuan Molan realized that she was no longer entangled. .... It really answered the question "It was in vain to just say it at that time"
Reading the whole article, I was really disappointed at that time. When Qi Yuanan died, my heart died. When the first child was born, the person also died. Awesome! You tortured me so badly
I originally thought that Mo Lan and Liang Liu were he, but I didn't expect that Liang Liu was really a shit-eating bastard that a dog can't change.
It's amazing. It's the first time I've seen this kind of article. I'm really in a dilemma in this world. It's impossible to have everything.
Everyone should be mentally prepared before reading this. The whole story is so good that it makes me cry. TT
Come on, author, please update soon (can you write a side story about Mo Lan and Qi Xun after it is finished? If Qi Xun was still alive and saw Liang Han like this, he would feel unwilling to treat Mo Lan like this)
I thought it was the end and I was going to start crying.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, how did you get into this trap! ! I burst into tears when I saw it, I was actually fooled! ! !
I kept crying while watching it from the beginning to the end?, It's so sad, but the fried chicken is so good.
I actually updated so much in one go. I was so moved and brought tears to my eyes.
Woooooooh
finally updated
The last time I saw such a depressing article was when Erlang Shen's life was full of hatred and hatred?
I hope the author will continue writing. I hope to know her story. I like the author's writing style very much.
Is there any follow-up to this article?
Alas, give this guy a song called "Love Business"
I hope you will continue to update, I really like this article written by you! Come on big
Extra, extra, extra
Daily question, has the author updated today?
The heroine commits a crime herself. She is both responsible and upright.
The author's writing style is very good, but it feels like the story is too depressing. Although it is about showing the harmful effects of the feudal system, but the whole story only gives people a feeling that the heroine is shy, depressed, sad for spring and autumn. It feels that the author wants to create a sensitive and intelligent type of talented woman a bit like Lin Daiyu. The character design in the early stage is okay, but in the later stage it is a bit pretentious, not to mention that the heroine traveled through time, just for the task, and also brought the system (although It's useless), but such an awesome setting was mixed up like this in the later stage, which is the reason for the heroine. She clearly knows all the plot, knows that the hero is unreliable, and still puts her hope in the hero again and again. It is worse than the original Mo Lan. At least everyone in the Sheng family in the original novel does not like the heroine, so she puts all her efforts into fighting the concubine of the hero. Even if the story is set that the heroine must be the same as in the previous life, the heroine can also change! Let's talk about giving birth to a girl. The original setting is that two boys aborted and gave birth to five golden flowers. The heroine already knows the process. Can't we change it? , Even if it can be changed, why are you obviously unhappy and not making a scene? Anyway, the ending of the story is set. If there is no trouble, why should we accept it? She also loves the concubine and the mistress. It is inexplicable. Even in modern times, no first wife loves the mistress and the concubine. You can argue that it was in ancient times, but the heroine is a modern person? , You can say that the heroine doesn't care, but throughout the whole story, the heroine clearly cares. Maybe the author can say that the heroine knows that she can only have girls, and wants to please the bastard, but this setting means that both parties have a tacit understanding, and there is nothing to feel wronged about. So after reading it, I felt that the whole novel was inconsistent and very frustrating. The heroine is simply wrong. She is not even abusing herself, because the heroine has no rival in the whole novel, and she cannot be hypocritical and sensitive. It is simply torture for the sake of torture, which gives people a sense of beautiful writing. , But after analysis, I feel incomprehensible, especially since the author also claims to be anti-feudal, and the female protagonist is different from ordinary time-travel novels. However, if you look closely, you can see that the female protagonist is not even comparable to ordinary sadistic novels, because at least they have a vicious female protagonist to bully them. I write so much not to criticize the author, or to say how this novel is, but because I felt a heart attack after reading it, but the author's writing is obviously very good, so I wanted to tell the author about my feelings after reading it. This is just my personal opinion, a polite comment.
The real hell may be the human world. The heroine comes from a freer era mentally, and it is inevitable to be unfortunate when she travels to the past, because she is awake and in pain. There should be part of the reason for this in terms of personality, because even in modern times, true freedom is not possible, and there is a lot of pain and restraint. I feel that she is very conflicted about love. She once had a sincere relationship, but later on, the love line about Liang Han was not sincere enough and did not meet the heroine's requirements for love. It was still entangled.
Sisters, I recommend you to go to Huaben and read a variety film called The Female Counterweight. The first story about Mo Lan is not exciting, it is just a mediocre story without killing everyone. It is really among the top three stories about Mo Lan that I have read, and it only has about 40 chapters.
When reading my wife's articles, I always feel an inescapable sense of fate. Powerless and pathetic, I feel that things in the world are just like that...
I just felt sad after reading it, even sadder than the original work. The heroine traveled through the past and knew the plot. A lot has changed, but nothing seems to have changed. According to the current development of the plot, it feels no different from the ending of the original work Mo Lan. She gave birth to a lot of daughters, kept a lot of concubines, her husband left her, her mother-in-law looked for trouble, and she spent all her dowry. It turns out that Mo Lan still has the courage to fight, although it is only limited to house fighting, but the heroine seems to have lost her temper after getting married, and she has resigned herself to it. Liang Han has treated him like this, and he can really take revenge. The heroine feels that the concubine is innocent and the child was born by a concubine. Although the child is innocent, although it is a problem of the feudal system, Liang Han must not be innocent. The other men in the novel are not like this. The heroine is used to it. She takes care of her concubine and all the children conscientiously. Isn't it more feudal than women in feudal society? The problem of concubines has not been solved from the root. They are still raised with dowry. King Ruofu can quarrel openly, and there are also couples who cannot live together. The heroine has traveled through time, and she is not living a good life.
It's so sad. Can you make her happy? She's really sad.
I saw the author's ending in Princess. The heroine died young, Liang married Widow Ma and entered the house. The rose that the heroine loved most in the mansion was chopped off and replaced by the bride's chrysanthemum. Several children turned away from the heroine and hero. After seeing the ending of the heroine, Yuan Molan realized that she was no longer entangled. .... It really answered the question "It was in vain to just say it at that time"
Reading the whole article, I was really disappointed at that time. When Qi Yuanan died, my heart died. When the first child was born, the person also died. Awesome! You tortured me so badly
I originally thought that Mo Lan and Liang Liu were he, but I didn't expect that Liang Liu was really a shit-eating bastard that a dog can't change.
It's amazing. It's the first time I've seen this kind of article. I'm really in a dilemma in this world. It's impossible to have everything.
Everyone should be mentally prepared before reading this. The whole story is so good that it makes me cry. TT
Come on, author, please update soon (can you write a side story about Mo Lan and Qi Xun after it is finished? If Qi Xun was still alive and saw Liang Han like this, he would feel unwilling to treat Mo Lan like this)
I thought it was the end and I was going to start crying.
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, how did you get into this trap! ! I burst into tears when I saw it, I was actually fooled! ! !
I kept crying while watching it from the beginning to the end?, It's so sad, but the fried chicken is so good.
I actually updated so much in one go. I was so moved and brought tears to my eyes.
Woooooooh finally updated
The last time I saw such a depressing article was when Erlang Shen's life was full of hatred and hatred?
I hope the author will continue writing. I hope to know her story. I like the author's writing style very much.
Is there any follow-up to this article?
Alas, give this guy a song called "Love Business"
I hope you will continue to update, I really like this article written by you! Come on big
Extra, extra, extra
Daily question, has the author updated today?
The heroine commits a crime herself. She is both responsible and upright.
Finally, finally updated
When are you going to fill in the hole, madam?
Big update soon. Very well written.