Give Me Glory[esports]

Finish spreading flowers Like this article and author There is a real life, full of regrets but without losing hope Have real humanity, fear, selfishness, courage and sincerity everything is just right As for the uncle and aunt, I think it would be better if the author did not write their ending. They are indeed selfish, but it is also related to the backward environment and low education level they live in. They are a bit hateful, but also pitiful. What will they look like when they grow old? Their son finally gave the book to his brother when he left, which can be regarded as a change in temperament. What about his future? If I keep writing, I might be able to write a lot more, but it feels like it's another story.

The setting is good, but the plot was a bit rushed later on, especially the uncle's attitude which confused me. There are also some problems with the plot. First of all, the game. I felt that there was no sense of graphics and excitement during the game, but I quickly flipped through it after watching it. After watching many professional leagues, I felt that the author did not write about that feeling, as well as the meaning of e-sports and their growth in it (of course, forget it if you had no intention of doing so). It is a pity that the title of the article contains e-sports copywriting and it is basically e-sports content, but the focus of the article is not. Secondly, the bad guys didn't get the punishment they deserved (even though Kang Jia went in, I still didn't feel that he realized his mistakes. Needless to say, the uncle and aunt said that it was best for him to stay away from them, but are there really people who don't have any anger at all? If you take a step back, won't readers feel aggrieved when watching this)? There are also a lot of foreshadowings that were seen at the beginning but fell into place later (for example, the age was reported as two years older, and at the end of the article it was said, "He didn't know how much impact this would have on him later." I thought it was some big foreshadowing, but it seemed to be dropped later? Of course, it may be that I read too quickly), and most of the characters' personality traits are not clear, etc. I don't think it's a slow start in this article. After that, I won a straight winning streak. After two setbacks, I left the team and then won the world championship. It was so fast that I didn't have any real feeling, and my emotional line was also very fast. This article has been on the to-be-read list for a long time. After reading it, it can be regarded as fulfilling a wish. Fortunately, the writing is not bad and it took less than an afternoon to read it all. The more interesting part is probably the live broadcast part. And the content of the last chapter is repeated.

Without a title, there's no motivation to read on [crying]

In fact, there is a lot that can be written about the interaction between the attacker and the receiver in this article, but most of it has not been written.

Do you want to tell a story about grandma and Yueran? Hehe

Great writing, keep it up!

Well written, hey, I still want to eat sweets

A majestic table, you and I fall in love with each other. If you are lucky enough, you will have no regrets for the rest of your life. (I can't sleep at night thinking about it, ahhhhh!)

"He waved them away angrily..."Caught a big bug for the author~ again

Ahhhhh, that's it. It feels like it's not finished. Some things haven't been explained clearly.

I like this article very much. I came here from where I became famous after I confessed my love.

I want to watch the extras, what a pity Brother Lai! ! !

After reading it, I feel so happy and tired. It's time to catch up on math.

I wish Rongrong and Yiyi happiness forever!

I came here after reading another article by Da Da, but found out that I had already collected him????

I've read a lot of books, maybe it's a bit rude to say this. I think DaDa can do a better job in handling some supporting characters. Although a book is mainly about the protagonist, if each supporting character is handled well, then the book will be very good. I'm sorry if it bothers me.

Damn, this chapter was repeated before Haha, I have written a lot of comments, dear author, can you see them? Praise you (me)

I've watched it many times, it's not perfect, but I like it very much