Shock? ! The handsome guy on the basketball court, the handsome boy that Wuli fell in love with at first sight, actually appeared in the girls' bathroom!
Demining: Poor writing
First person narrative + third person (it's hard to take turns with both, smile. Jpg.)
Writing without an outline will result in OOC (actually the author has such a bad memory that he will forget the character design as he writes, smile. Jpg.)
The author has a mysterious persistence in attacking Su Su
The most important thing! Not updated on time! Still short!
Intention: OK