Tan Yijiang's voice was low as if he was dreaming, "I finally figured it out. The person I love may not be you at all. What I love is just a fantasy character, or the you in my imagination... You must have heard of Pygmalion in Greek mythology before you studied painting. He fell in love with the girl statue he sculpted with his own hands, and later this true love The God of Love moved me and gave life to the statue. But it was wrong from the beginning... At first, I was tempted and wanted to get you by any means, but in fact, I never thought that this kind of love was an illusion from the beginning. I lied to myself and said that as long as I fell in love with you, I would be happy, but in fact, it was wrong from the beginning. "
Anya had never heard more cruel words than these. It turned out that the beautiful fairy tale coming from his mouth was so hurtful.
It turns out that the love he once gave her was even more illusory than a fairy tale
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Su Wen is not guilty, but please pay attention to the lower limit
One point was given. This comment has both likes and dislikes, and there is absolutely no malice in it.
The following is a Naruto fan for 6+ years. But the age of entering the fandom is only two years. So in the process of constantly looking for articles, I found this article below.
Looking through the copy room, first of all, please let me express my utmost respect to the author. After all, the copywriting was only superficial, so I clicked on the article twitchingly. But I'm sorry, because I also owe a lot of mistakes, so I can't finish it.
If the heroine is the night spirit, with blue hair and pink eyes, even if I am studying art design, it is difficult to imagine what kind of effect it will be. Two different colors, even if they look beautiful alone, they are a failure as a combination. However, the only person who could think that this was the image of an angel was Naruto at that time.
For those of you who have not read this article, I do not dare to comment too much on the plot of the story, but please allow me to make some trivial comments on the author's great writing and words. I will be grateful.
I'm just a little scumbag author, so I'm just expressing my opinions.
First of all, I don't think Da Da's writing style is very rigorous. Language, phrasing, etc. Are arbitrary and excessive. It may be to make the writing style relaxed, but a relaxed writing style does not mean that you can use overly casual sentences arbitrarily. Personally, I think that the so-called relaxed writing style is also based on a rigorous foundation. After all, too many casual statements are also a kind of irresponsibility, whether to others or to oneself.
Then we will talk about what the following topic wants to express.
In my opinion, Mary Sue is not a fault. The slightly restrained Su Meizi is actually a subconscious pursuit of the author. It is a manifestation of wanting to be strong, wanting to be perfect, and wanting to be loved by the people you like. There is absolutely nothing wrong with this. In other words, I have unilaterally affirmed Su Wen, because they are the true reflection of the young author's heart.
However, the word "comprehensive" must not have been added before.
Everything has a lower limit, this is the most basic.
In the author's article, the spirit girl has the power to defeat God. I sincerely pray that there are no devout Catholic believers among the people who read this article. Amen. I didn't continue to read it, so I don't know if Sakyamuni and the main god of Tianyu were tamed by Lingmei, I guess not. Even if there is, it doesn't matter. After all, Pluto Tongzi is also despised by Ling Meizi. Besides, Ling Meizi is too arrogant.
In summary, Ling Meizi has replaced Master Bei and become a humanoid life form standing at the top of the food chain. ←What's wrong! .
In addition, although it is summarized, it does not mean that the nonsense below is over.
The following problem seems to be more serious than Mary Sue.
The first thing I want to affirm below is your bold idea, the author. It is not derogatory, it is a sincere affirmation. I also refer to the comments of other readers below to get a rough idea of the author's ideas, and I don't find them annoying. But...
The character is broken and I can't bear it.
While I am a fangirl, I am also a devout Naruto fan. I understand that it is normal for fan authors to experience slight collapse when they are brainstorming. This is nothing, and I understand this deeply. However, the characters under the author's control...
At least from what I see below, Kakashi-senpai's biological parents are more like you, the author, than Masashi Kishimoto. Neither is the third-generation grandfather, nor is the gentle fourth-generation. Well, sir, I would like to ask you, sir, why don't you write an original article and instead attack "NARUTO"? Naruto is okay, at least there is no big problem in what I see below. At least in the first few chapters, it is well reflected that Naruto's desire for attention and care as a child, and his excitement when receiving the love and recognition of others, are very good and worthy of praise.
I didn't see the back part, but I seemed to have discovered that the Akatsuki organization would appear, so I didn't plan to continue watching, because my favorite was Brother Itachi, and I didn't want to see the strange Brother Itachi "intruding".
I'm just an ordinary Naruto fan who is mixed up in the same circle.
In addition, at the end, I would like to express a final point of view. I believe that fan fiction is just something that the author imagined as his favorite work, but happened to be accepted by most people. Everyone starts writing articles out of love for the original work, so even if they are just thinking about it, they should also carefully figure out the heart and personality of the original characters. For example, what would this person do when encountering a certain situation?
Even if the author's unilateral thoughts are brought in, at least it must be ensured that Kakashi is still Kakashi, the third generation is still the third generation, and the fourth generation Minato is still the gentle and great man.
Otherwise, they wouldn't be them anymore, so would they still be considered colleagues?
Hmm... I only know this much. If there is something wrong, please come back and I will accept it all!
Su Wen is not guilty, but please pay attention to the lower limit One point was given. This comment has both likes and dislikes, and there is absolutely no malice in it. The following is a Naruto fan for 6+ years. But the age of entering the fandom is only two years. So in the process of constantly looking for articles, I found this article below. Looking through the copy room, first of all, please let me express my utmost respect to the author. After all, the copywriting was only superficial, so I clicked on the article twitchingly. But I'm sorry, because I also owe a lot of mistakes, so I can't finish it. If the heroine is the night spirit, with blue hair and pink eyes, even if I am studying art design, it is difficult to imagine what kind of effect it will be. Two different colors, even if they look beautiful alone, they are a failure as a combination. However, the only person who could think that this was the image of an angel was Naruto at that time. For those of you who have not read this article, I do not dare to comment too much on the plot of the story, but please allow me to make some trivial comments on the author's great writing and words. I will be grateful. I'm just a little scumbag author, so I'm just expressing my opinions. First of all, I don't think Da Da's writing style is very rigorous. Language, phrasing, etc. Are arbitrary and excessive. It may be to make the writing style relaxed, but a relaxed writing style does not mean that you can use overly casual sentences arbitrarily. Personally, I think that the so-called relaxed writing style is also based on a rigorous foundation. After all, too many casual statements are also a kind of irresponsibility, whether to others or to oneself. Then we will talk about what the following topic wants to express. In my opinion, Mary Sue is not a fault. The slightly restrained Su Meizi is actually a subconscious pursuit of the author. It is a manifestation of wanting to be strong, wanting to be perfect, and wanting to be loved by the people you like. There is absolutely nothing wrong with this. In other words, I have unilaterally affirmed Su Wen, because they are the true reflection of the young author's heart. However, the word "comprehensive" must not have been added before. Everything has a lower limit, this is the most basic. In the author's article, the spirit girl has the power to defeat God. I sincerely pray that there are no devout Catholic believers among the people who read this article. Amen. I didn't continue to read it, so I don't know if Sakyamuni and the main god of Tianyu were tamed by Lingmei, I guess not. Even if there is, it doesn't matter. After all, Pluto Tongzi is also despised by Ling Meizi. Besides, Ling Meizi is too arrogant. In summary, Ling Meizi has replaced Master Bei and become a humanoid life form standing at the top of the food chain. ←What's wrong! . In addition, although it is summarized, it does not mean that the nonsense below is over. The following problem seems to be more serious than Mary Sue. The first thing I want to affirm below is your bold idea, the author. It is not derogatory, it is a sincere affirmation. I also refer to the comments of other readers below to get a rough idea of the author's ideas, and I don't find them annoying. But... The character is broken and I can't bear it. While I am a fangirl, I am also a devout Naruto fan. I understand that it is normal for fan authors to experience slight collapse when they are brainstorming. This is nothing, and I understand this deeply. However, the characters under the author's control... At least from what I see below, Kakashi-senpai's biological parents are more like you, the author, than Masashi Kishimoto. Neither is the third-generation grandfather, nor is the gentle fourth-generation. Well, sir, I would like to ask you, sir, why don't you write an original article and instead attack "NARUTO"? Naruto is okay, at least there is no big problem in what I see below. At least in the first few chapters, it is well reflected that Naruto's desire for attention and care as a child, and his excitement when receiving the love and recognition of others, are very good and worthy of praise. I didn't see the back part, but I seemed to have discovered that the Akatsuki organization would appear, so I didn't plan to continue watching, because my favorite was Brother Itachi, and I didn't want to see the strange Brother Itachi "intruding". I'm just an ordinary Naruto fan who is mixed up in the same circle. In addition, at the end, I would like to express a final point of view. I believe that fan fiction is just something that the author imagined as his favorite work, but happened to be accepted by most people. Everyone starts writing articles out of love for the original work, so even if they are just thinking about it, they should also carefully figure out the heart and personality of the original characters. For example, what would this person do when encountering a certain situation? Even if the author's unilateral thoughts are brought in, at least it must be ensured that Kakashi is still Kakashi, the third generation is still the third generation, and the fourth generation Minato is still the gentle and great man. Otherwise, they wouldn't be them anymore, so would they still be considered colleagues? Hmm... I only know this much. If there is something wrong, please come back and I will accept it all!
Finally updated it a bit~