2022.03: + Orange/Light game has been launched, and the script has been modified by me myself. There will be a lot of new content and extras, which can be regarded as a refined version. Please look forward to it and like it!
I also know that there are many shortcomings here, and I hope everyone can forgive me for writing this article for the first time. However, because of the various typos, I will only catch typos, and new content will not be added here, and I will not change it again. (If you want to know if my writing has improved, go watch Orange/Light haha
Thank you.
*I am not a party-goer, so there are some private creations, and some are inconsistent with the original work. If you don't mind, just click the cross button.
Copywriting one:
When Sirius Black first really noticed Ophelia Sweet, he thought she was about to confess her love to him, but it turned out that she was about to confess her love to his prong, so he was embarrassed. Oh no, it turns out it's not for James either.
The first time Ophelia Sweet truly noticed Sirius Black was his proud and confident moment, and his unabashed praise for her.
Thirteen years later, Big Dog wanted to be adopted, but was ruthlessly exposed, and had to pathetically return to being a human being. A poor man living under someone else's roof.
The female goose no longer wanted to hang around a dog and decided to be the queen.
Copywriting two:
Ophelia's life is not perfect, and she knows that she is not a perfect person either.
Sirius always thought that his life was perfect and every choice he made was flawless.
It wasn't until later that she discovered that no one was perfect, and that everyone had flaws.
**This article is being revised from time to time, so I apologize for any false updates. **
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Sweet text from Fred Next Door! !
"Um... Fred, I've actually liked you for a long time."
"Really? But... I'm George, but it doesn't matter, I like you too! Do you think you can accept me?"
"Uh, what?! Yes, yes... I'm sorry! I'm leaving first!"
Barbara made a bet and watched Fred stammering his confession and then running away unsatisfactorily.
**AU, HE, Voldemort received his lunch box early
Intention: Intention to be added
Reader comments
I am very grateful to the author for this fanfic. I have a lot to say in my heart. This is the first fanfic that I have really read and shed tears, so this first long review is dedicated to ? Flaws flaws?
First of all, this book made up for my missing year at Hogwarts, which was also an important year, graduation. In "Harry Potter", we follow Harry's perspective to find the Horcruxes. We don't know much about the complete school year, there are also exams that have not yet come, and everyone's expectations, tension, and excitement for the future. The beginning of the novel did not start from the first grade, which surprised me. The love at first sight on the carriage basically set the direction of the subsequent development of the story. Leah and Sirius tested each other, expressed their feelings, and had quarrels and misunderstandings. But they all came out, right? The purest love, as Dumbledore said, love is the greatest magic.
Secondly, Rowling didn't depict many of his parents' children. The ending in which no one of his parents survived made me feel very sorry. I always felt that Harry Potter should grow up under the careful care of James and Lily. He would tell his parents everything that happened in school and discuss it with his parents. Regarding what kind of person I should be in the future, I would spend Christmas or summer vacation with my parents, Sirius and Remus. Speaking of Sirius, the boy in the author's works is so lifelike that my heart has always been affected by him. He is so real and detailed that it makes me feel like I have had a very long dream. , Sirius should not fall under that curtain of nothingness, he will always be free; and Remus, Remy's life can be said to be very unfortunate, but fortunately he met the Marauder when he was a boy, joined the Order of the Phoenix as a youth, he met like-minded friends, Voldemort was After being defeated, Lemmy lived a wandering life again until Dumbledore called him back to teach. Even so, he still faced life gently. The world kissed me with pain, but I responded with songs. Lemmy needs a girl who knows him, understands him, and loves him regardless of everything. He is worth it. I believe that Remus and Claire in the parallel world will live happily ever after. The author has made up for all my regrets very well, and I am really touched.
Finally, near the end, Leah met Lily and James in her dream. Just like fourteen years ago, Lily would smile and hug her, and James would joke with her. I really cried when I saw this. Lily really loved Leah and couldn't bear to see this girl living in the past. She personally took Leah out of that haze. Although all of this was brought about by the Resurrection Stone, I believe that with this complete farewell, Leah will be full of hope for the rest of her life. I thought of the ending of a novel I read before, and felt it was very appropriate to use it here: "Maybe you don't remember, but you actually said goodbye to the person you left, on a long night."
Enjoy your new life, a peaceful world without Voldemort, a beautiful and dreamy magical world Harry, Leia, Sirius, Remus, Claire, and the students and professors of Hogwarts
Some of the unspeakable feelings that I had hidden in my heart were finally written out today. Thanks to Tao Jiujiu's fan fiction, it smoothed out some of the wrinkles in my heart.
——Written in the early morning of January 23, 2024
Damn it, I want to review it again, there are so many locks
Watching it again six years later, I still like it very much. . . DT and dogs are a perfect match!
It's true. When I was a child, my grandfather was my primary school teacher, and I was very desperate. Although he didn't teach me, he was very familiar with the math teacher who taught me. It was my nightmare for three years.
How could a mother not recognize her child? Crying. Jpg
I seriously suspect that the reason for the birth of the new extra is that the author recently accidentally ate poisonous mushrooms (dog head. Jpg
The descriptions of the family members in this book are really great. From my wife's words, I can truly feel the friendship between the family members. It's really great. Long live friendship! In particular, the three original characters are well described. The friendship and companionship between the heroine, Levi and Claire are the best form of friendship in my opinion!
I also want to talk about some of the flaws that I feel, such as Sirius hurting the heroine because he didn't defend himself and valued friendship more. The heroine's process of forgiving him in the later period was a bit fast, which made me feel sorry for the heroine. For example, the plot line of the second generation is too fast-paced, and many plots cannot be described in detail, and it feels like it ends in a hurry. But these are acceptable. The whole story is smooth and there are no logical flaws. It is really great that it can be written like this for the first time. Thank you, my wife, for generating love. I look forward to more HP fans! Am I going to go? Watch it again~
Woo woo woo, I really cried. Love, friendship, faith, light, everything is so beautiful.
Finished reading! Wow wow cry! I love Leah's daddy and all the family members so much! ! Earlier, when Sirius cared more about friendship and ignored Leia, he was so angry that he wanted to beat him to death, but Leia and him were worth it. Let them continue to be happy and sweet in this beautiful time and space!
It's not that I'm stuck in the tree house. (Actually, I don't know if there's a problem with the upbringing, but in the end, after graduation, I always went to the Muggle world.
This year's tears were not given to men, but all to HP fanfics. I'm going to forget about crying to death?
This chapter really made me cry to death
Oh my god, my Lily, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, my lily
Great! ! !，，（？），！ !
So pretty? Leah and Sirius want to be happy forever
Hahahahaha I laughed so hard at being exposed to the Rikai prototype hahahahahaha
That's awesome! I like the stories written by the teacher!
I just love happy endings! ! !
Thank you so much. Although I hope it will be, the heroine is really miserable...
Thank you to the author for writing this text, allowing me to see such a real and vivid parallel world, to see their growth and struggle, to see their romance and sadness, thank you! Best wishes!
"Jin Zongni" gave the author a big bug ~
Wow, wow, wow, I've been lacking articles for a long time and finally saw something good!
I actually updated the article, madam, happy Mid-Autumn Festival
Happy National Day, madam! I finished it in one go. It's so beautiful.
Ahhhh happy National Day! I finished this book in one go. It's so detailed and it's not like writing it for the first time! My wife is great! This version of Sirius doesn't feel broken at all! Zhan Li's scenes are also very sweet and I like them very much. Ah, anyway, I confess my love to my wife!
Read it in one sitting! I laughed and cried while watching this. Thank you so much for giving Sirius a hey! ! Love you!
Ah, I read it in one go! So beautiful!
I read it in one sitting, I really like this article! It's been a long time since I've found a good ending by HP. It's really great!
I am very grateful to the author for this fanfic. I have a lot to say in my heart. This is the first fanfic that I have really read and shed tears, so this first long review is dedicated to ? Flaws flaws? First of all, this book made up for my missing year at Hogwarts, which was also an important year, graduation. In "Harry Potter", we follow Harry's perspective to find the Horcruxes. We don't know much about the complete school year, there are also exams that have not yet come, and everyone's expectations, tension, and excitement for the future. The beginning of the novel did not start from the first grade, which surprised me. The love at first sight on the carriage basically set the direction of the subsequent development of the story. Leah and Sirius tested each other, expressed their feelings, and had quarrels and misunderstandings. But they all came out, right? The purest love, as Dumbledore said, love is the greatest magic. Secondly, Rowling didn't depict many of his parents' children. The ending in which no one of his parents survived made me feel very sorry. I always felt that Harry Potter should grow up under the careful care of James and Lily. He would tell his parents everything that happened in school and discuss it with his parents. Regarding what kind of person I should be in the future, I would spend Christmas or summer vacation with my parents, Sirius and Remus. Speaking of Sirius, the boy in the author's works is so lifelike that my heart has always been affected by him. He is so real and detailed that it makes me feel like I have had a very long dream. , Sirius should not fall under that curtain of nothingness, he will always be free; and Remus, Remy's life can be said to be very unfortunate, but fortunately he met the Marauder when he was a boy, joined the Order of the Phoenix as a youth, he met like-minded friends, Voldemort was After being defeated, Lemmy lived a wandering life again until Dumbledore called him back to teach. Even so, he still faced life gently. The world kissed me with pain, but I responded with songs. Lemmy needs a girl who knows him, understands him, and loves him regardless of everything. He is worth it. I believe that Remus and Claire in the parallel world will live happily ever after. The author has made up for all my regrets very well, and I am really touched. Finally, near the end, Leah met Lily and James in her dream. Just like fourteen years ago, Lily would smile and hug her, and James would joke with her. I really cried when I saw this. Lily really loved Leah and couldn't bear to see this girl living in the past. She personally took Leah out of that haze. Although all of this was brought about by the Resurrection Stone, I believe that with this complete farewell, Leah will be full of hope for the rest of her life. I thought of the ending of a novel I read before, and felt it was very appropriate to use it here: "Maybe you don't remember, but you actually said goodbye to the person you left, on a long night." Enjoy your new life, a peaceful world without Voldemort, a beautiful and dreamy magical world Harry, Leia, Sirius, Remus, Claire, and the students and professors of Hogwarts Some of the unspeakable feelings that I had hidden in my heart were finally written out today. Thanks to Tao Jiujiu's fan fiction, it smoothed out some of the wrinkles in my heart. ——Written in the early morning of January 23, 2024
Damn it, I want to review it again, there are so many locks
Watching it again six years later, I still like it very much. . . DT and dogs are a perfect match!
It's true. When I was a child, my grandfather was my primary school teacher, and I was very desperate. Although he didn't teach me, he was very familiar with the math teacher who taught me. It was my nightmare for three years.
How could a mother not recognize her child? Crying. Jpg
I seriously suspect that the reason for the birth of the new extra is that the author recently accidentally ate poisonous mushrooms (dog head. Jpg
The descriptions of the family members in this book are really great. From my wife's words, I can truly feel the friendship between the family members. It's really great. Long live friendship! In particular, the three original characters are well described. The friendship and companionship between the heroine, Levi and Claire are the best form of friendship in my opinion! I also want to talk about some of the flaws that I feel, such as Sirius hurting the heroine because he didn't defend himself and valued friendship more. The heroine's process of forgiving him in the later period was a bit fast, which made me feel sorry for the heroine. For example, the plot line of the second generation is too fast-paced, and many plots cannot be described in detail, and it feels like it ends in a hurry. But these are acceptable. The whole story is smooth and there are no logical flaws. It is really great that it can be written like this for the first time. Thank you, my wife, for generating love. I look forward to more HP fans! Am I going to go? Watch it again~
Woo woo woo, I really cried. Love, friendship, faith, light, everything is so beautiful.
Finished reading! Wow wow cry! I love Leah's daddy and all the family members so much! ! Earlier, when Sirius cared more about friendship and ignored Leia, he was so angry that he wanted to beat him to death, but Leia and him were worth it. Let them continue to be happy and sweet in this beautiful time and space!
It's not that I'm stuck in the tree house. (Actually, I don't know if there's a problem with the upbringing, but in the end, after graduation, I always went to the Muggle world.
This year's tears were not given to men, but all to HP fanfics. I'm going to forget about crying to death?
This chapter really made me cry to death
Oh my god, my Lily, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh, my lily
Great! ! !，，（？），！ !
So pretty? Leah and Sirius want to be happy forever
Hahahahaha I laughed so hard at being exposed to the Rikai prototype hahahahahaha
That's awesome! I like the stories written by the teacher!
I just love happy endings! ! !
Thank you so much. Although I hope it will be, the heroine is really miserable...
Thank you to the author for writing this text, allowing me to see such a real and vivid parallel world, to see their growth and struggle, to see their romance and sadness, thank you! Best wishes!
"Jin Zongni" gave the author a big bug ~
Wow, wow, wow, I've been lacking articles for a long time and finally saw something good!
I actually updated the article, madam, happy Mid-Autumn Festival
Happy National Day, madam! I finished it in one go. It's so beautiful.
Ahhhh happy National Day! I finished this book in one go. It's so detailed and it's not like writing it for the first time! My wife is great! This version of Sirius doesn't feel broken at all! Zhan Li's scenes are also very sweet and I like them very much. Ah, anyway, I confess my love to my wife!
Read it in one sitting! I laughed and cried while watching this. Thank you so much for giving Sirius a hey! ! Love you!
Ah, I read it in one go! So beautiful!
I read it in one sitting, I really like this article! It's been a long time since I've found a good ending by HP. It's really great!
!!!!!! Okay