The Female Partner in Master-Student Love

I read the physical book and it made me so angry. Then I read the online version and found that the online version was quite normal. Then I read the author's words, and if I am lucky enough to publish it, the cp is... I personally don't understand why the two of them are tied up with a child in the physical book. Wow, the setting is really strange. The child doesn't want to stay, but he can't stay. The child was forced by the male protagonist in the dream, but he actually forgave him later, and they live together in the extra story. It's really exaggerated. It's the first time I've written so much, but it really makes me angry. I can only say that everyone's acceptance and understanding are different.

The published version is too vicious, don't buy it. . Seeing that I reunited with Luo Hua and gave birth to a child, I was mentally polluted.

This extra chapter is better, the extra chapter in the physical book is very vicious! ! !

The author's idea of ​​publishing cp Luo Hua is really ridiculous. Saving someone who has let him down is not the so-called self-impression. He is self-righteous and thinks that his regrets and sorrow can be compensated. A qualified predecessor should be dead.

I have never seen such an unlucky novel. Fortunately, I skipped to read it. What the hell, the male and female protagonists have less than one-third of the scenes together, right? I followed the advanced search and found this article. I was told shit. Does the author really have a bachelor's degree? I have never seen such a marginalized male and female protagonist.

If I'm really convinced, I shouldn't buy the physical book. It's so disgusting. It's vicious, vicious, vicious. I really, really like Qingli. Does the physical book not care about his life or death? Originally, I wanted to find Qingli in the online version, but the ending of Qingli in the physical book is really heartbreaking?

I should have listened to others' advice and had enough to eat... I shouldn't have disobeyed advice... Publishing a book is really vicious... I won't talk about the plot and it feels like a dog-eat-dog story... Sisters, don't read it, don't read it, don't read it! ! !

I have to say, it's a bit funny to read the comments. What did the author think at the beginning? Have you been affected by readers' comments? Or can't I write anymore? I temporarily changed the male protagonist, but in the end, no one was pleased. He was not a human being inside and out. Those who liked the new male protagonist had to come back after reading the physical book. Those who wanted to see the classic original male protagonist chasing his wife in the crematorium did not want to buy the physical book anymore and were disgusted. It is true that it is 666

I bought the e-book and was looking forward to it being a physical book, but the physical book changed to a male protagonist, so bye bye. An e-book is enough.

To be honest, I read this book several years ago. I like it very much. It is my top Xianxia book. I have always wanted to buy a physical book, but I couldn't accept it. Luo Hua [angry] [angry] [angry] never bought it, which is also a pity [crying] [crying]

WOC makes me laugh so hard, the author of the physical book made the heroine look like herself

Luo Hua's scenes have to be completely over. After that, Yaoyao and Qingli's scenes should be longer and more detailed. The physical contact and emotional warming must be better than Luo Hua's. Earlier, Luo Hua attacked Yaoyao and spoke cruelly. He was really cruel. Maybe women are at a disadvantage, and it's always difficult to deal with Luo Hua's strength (Luo Hua later regretted taking and imprisoning Yaoyao). Being taken advantage of and torturing Luo Hua wasn't very satisfying. Maybe the heroine's force value is not set that high, which makes it very frustrating to watch.

I like the characters very much. The first part is well written and I enjoyed reading it. I really didn't understand some parts of the second part, but the ending is good hahahaha. I don't know what time I read this. I remember when I read it for the first time, I didn't know that it was a novel about a male protagonist. I always read it as a crematorium for chasing my wife. The more I read, the more strange it became. Later, the heroine was really confused after she got together with Qing Li, and then I changed my mind and read it again. Hahahahaha, this is the first novel I have read that changes the male protagonist. The experience is still very good. Except for some parts that I don't understand, the character design and sweetness are just to my taste. I am looking forward to a new work. By the way, I hope Qingli's character can be used in another book hahahahaha

I really like Qingli's character design. I didn't expect that the ending of the physical book would be with Luo Hua. I cried to death. Can you please publish Qingli's Wuwuwuwu again?

Why don't you make a side story about your married life? I really like Qingli.

The first part is well written, but the second part is really fragmented. The descriptions of the two men are very strange, and the plot also has bugs. I really like the character of the young and paranoid Qing Li who was in love in the early stage. I feel that it would be better if Wei Ran was replaced by the heroine who met and fell in love with him during the early tribulations in the mortal world. Then I could write below: Luo Hua knew that the heroine who had been following him was actually in the mortal world. He was with someone else, so he secretly took her back to the sky, and asked Wei Ran, who looked a bit like the heroine, to marry Qingli in her place. However, Qingli saw through it and thought the heroine didn't love him, so he ran away and found someone to marry him. He was so angry that he suffered a love disaster, and finally ascended to immortality. Only in heaven did he know everything. What he liked was the goddess. However, everyone knew that the goddess liked Luo Hua, so he hid everything that happened with her in the mortal world. No one knew what he thought. On the other side, Luo Hua finally felt a sense of crisis, but not much. He selfishly erased the memory of the heroine and Qingli. After the heroine confessed to him, he entered into a contract with her without hesitation, and he didn't even have time to hold a grand wedding. . . Would it be better if I wrote along this line of thinking?

Although Qingli is very good, I originally came to the crematorium to reunite with my wife. The online version felt that the author's ending was a bit rushed, so I went to buy the physical book. It was complete and

The emotional lines are all so sloppy, between the heroine and Qingli, between the heroine and Luo Hua, between Binglin and Lu Sang, and there are too many characters, and they all feel dispensable. Yes, I am referring to Xin Yang's group of fans, and nothing happened. It's such a big deal, it keeps causing little fights and troubles. The people watching are very unhappy, and the crematorium is also unhappy. Does Luo Hua's rejection of his love still count as a crematorium? It's not as good as the author's other post-abolition abuse article, but that one is a trap, and I'm convinced.

I have read the online version many times and liked Qingli, but I also bought the physical book version today. If you accept the different endings, just read it as a parallel world. The author writes very well, so don't worry about the bad reviews [Compare your heart]

Wow, it's a side story, haha. I skipped all the supporting characters and watched it. After watching it, I thought it was pretty good. I also want to order more side stories by Qing Li Yaoyin. The author is Hung Hung, Fan Fan. As for the exchange of physical books for CPs, I think with Yao Yin's character, forgiveness is impossible, and it will probably become an entangled relationship, and then Luo Hua single arrow. If you think about it that way, Luo Hua will definitely be tortured, but Yaoyin may not be so happy. Damn it, isn't Qingli Shenjun fragrant? Why are you looking for a man in a garbage dump?

Ah, this, the front is fine, but the back is a mess. In fact, I think Luo and Shennu are hot chickens, but alas. And the narration is so urgent that I can't even understand it.

I think it's pretty good, but I feel like it's too late to change the male lead. I want to see more scenes between the female lead and Qingli.

I like this book so much. I have read it more than twenty times. I will read more chapters.

Overall, I still like it very much, and I also like the concept of the book, but there are too few scenes in Qingli. I hope there will be a sequel in the future, which is a bit unfinished. The second male lead is really good. I really hate the master-student love plot in the article. He disregards the world for the sake of their small love. Then the female protagonist is a bit silly and sweet, and she is attracted by his innocence and kindness even though she is a man. Also in the article, the male protagonist violently abuses the female protagonist, and the female protagonist loves the male protagonist very much, and she will die just for one sentence. The master likes me, I guess. When I read this type of master-disciple love story, I was so angry with the female protagonist (there were many similar stories at that time that abused women, and the woman was obsessed with it and only wanted the love of the male protagonist, which made me vomit). Anyway, this article made me vomit. It's refreshing. I heard that the ending of the physical book is disgusting, so I won't support it. I really don't like the disgusting male and female protagonists to reunite. I can't stand just reading the description of the ending of the physical book in the comment area, so I won't blame myself. Author, what do you think, giving such a vicious ending to a physical book, it has to be from the beginning to the end. This enjoyable article must be enjoyable to the end. Writing an article must not only please the readers, but the first person who must please you must be yourself. As long as the three views are not distorted and the persona is not collapsed, how can this kind of enjoyable article be enjoyable? Adopt reasonable opinions, and explain your intentions when encountering disagreements. Don't be too passive, and you must stick to yourself.

This is my favorite fairy tale

After reading this article, I will run away [change][change][change] as soon as I see a male master and a female disciple falling in love.

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