Am I Afraid of My Wife as an Alpha?

The article is well written, but I still feel that Duan is a selfish person at heart, and I can't fall in love with this character.

In the past year or so since I stopped updating, there have been so many troubles around me that require a lot of endurance to resolve, including health, work, and many... In fact, not all of them have been resolved to this day, but my mentality has begun to change, and I firmly believe that everything will develop in a good direction. Pick up the ink pen again and continue editing. No matter what, no matter what form it takes, I will definitely see you again this year! [Compare your heart]

Because the rating was not high, I didn't fully order it, but after reading it, I think the rating should be 9.0+

Happy New Year, may everything go well in the new year

Good looking! It's so well written in big letters.

The article is generally good, but I feel it still has major flaws. It's just that the wife-chasing line at the back is too bland. This article seems to have a lot of space about chasing the wife, but in fact the crematorium is not that intense. When I watched the first part, I thought it was really good-looking, but later I found that the sadistic attack line had no event nodes at all. It was about being chased by the variety show. This kind of lukewarm crematorium kept me hanging. While I was still looking forward to some big sadistic moments later, they were already preparing to get back together. I feel like the author himself knew that the crematorium at the end of the article was not pleasant at all, so he didn't mention the crematorium in the cool part of the article. A good crematorium author can actually write about the deep regret and heartache in a short space of time. Not only did this article not give me a lot of emotional empathy, but to be honest, when the story line around the variety show was unfolding, I kept mentioning CP fans in a large space. I don't know what other people think. I always feel that even in the crematorium at the end, you can't give too many such hints when chasing your wife. This is a foreshadowing hint that should be given when you are about to catch up. From the beginning, everyone has knocked on their CP, so it's still a waste of time to chase her. The article also writes that Gong didn't care about Shou's feelings at first because Shou wouldn't find another alpha after getting married. This gave Gong a sense of security, but getting married broke this sense of security. So isn't it a disguised form of being married when you're chasing a wife? It implies that these two people will definitely get together, and there will be no sense of crisis in the process of chasing his wife, so I think it's a piece of cake. Facts have also proved that the road behind chasing his wife has indeed been smooth sailing. There is no sad point of attack, no ups and downs of the plot, a straight line is drawn from the beginning to the end. In fact, when I saw the two of them kissing, I wasn't very interested in reading anymore. Is torture really so difficult? It's so difficult that I couldn't write a memory point or a breaking point from more than 20 chapters to more than 80 chapters. The easiest thing is to move the memory of the parallel world of attack to the time when I am chasing my wife. Isn't this a torture? Isn't it purely a reward attack when you think about it after you chase your wife? Sometimes I wonder why this article doesn't want to attack the crematorium, but it also gives a lot of space to the crematorium. Let's talk about the torture in the crematorium, but the plot of the torture is very bland and I chased my wife without any difficulty. I think the foundation of this article is very good. I enjoyed reading the first half of it, but something went wrong at the end. It felt like the author's writing skills couldn't keep up. I still don't like the writing style of attacking the crematorium without the sense of crisis that cannot be pursued. This article is like that. From the reader's point of view, there is no possibility that Gong will not be able to pursue Shou. He has been writing hints from CP fans. If he writes too many of these hints, he may believe them, so he is reluctant to put some obstacles in Gong's path to pursue his wife. The day Gong is farthest from Shou is the day he receives his certificate, and then he steadily advances.

I almost forgot all the previous plot u

Did I say that I can break the [dog head] record tonight (50)

Make a wish I have a wild collection and Santa be nice to me.