"... Promise me... Something..."
"... What?"
"Forgot... I..."
"No!"
"... I'm begging... You, okay?"
"But... You said you would stay with me forever."
"... Fate plays its tricks, but... There will be people who love you more than me..."
"... No, I only love you..."
"Silly girl, I want to too... But I can't be so selfish..."
"No, I don't want you to die..."
"I'm sorry... Girl... Take good... Care of yourself..."
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Oh my god, thunder
It is indeed a very silly and naive article.
However, although it is an early work and the story is a bit confusing, the style, writing and narrative skills are already evident.
Throw flowers!
继续补~~~``
过来支持一下，亲，你发文时间不算长呀，会有机会的，恩！ 加油呀！ 被埋没也是很平常的事情，恩，也算是冷吧。你要想想，自己的冷虽然有读者的不识货原因，也有自身的原因：更新慢吧？字数少（章节的），而且，情节不是太紧凑。恩……当然，这不是你的毛病，是咱的通病哈。 亲个，加油！ 作者回复： 谢谢，您的中肯意见， 其实原来就想写个没什么情节， 但心理活动超复杂的中篇而已， 大约和晋江筒子们的口味不太合。 长篇对于我来说， 实在有些笔力不逮。
估计还是女人胜出吧。“自古以来，红颜就是祸水，越美丽越危险，越美丽越可怕。”原来美丽真的是一种错，楼主千万不要一错再错！呵呵
难道是因为这只很久没更……已经没人了吗……
我已经记不得是从哪章开始眼泪就不停的流了……这，大概是我来晋江以来看到的最撼动人心的一篇文章了，从昨天开始一口气看到33章，不留下些什么是说不过去的，请阳阳童鞋继续加油吧！另，也祝新年快乐了！^^
Oh my god, thunder It is indeed a very silly and naive article. However, although it is an early work and the story is a bit confusing, the style, writing and narrative skills are already evident. Throw flowers!