It was too scary to stop the watch. The young man's silver hair was scattered randomly on the bed. He didn't pay attention, and just looked at the person in front of him with his big eyes. "As promised, I will be your slave."
Reader comments
It's quite true to its name.
When will you be back?
I come from Douyin. How should I put it? I don't know if I have heard too many good things, so I feel uncomfortable with some comments. I do feel that there is room for improvement. The sentences are not very smooth. The protagonist is awkward to get along with. It makes people confused at the beginning. The writing style is indeed not good. I'd better read my own writing from the beginning and read other people's writing. I also hope to listen to other people's opinions and make some changes.
It's quite true to its name.
When will you be back?
I come from Douyin. How should I put it? I don't know if I have heard too many good things, so I feel uncomfortable with some comments. I do feel that there is room for improvement. The sentences are not very smooth. The protagonist is awkward to get along with. It makes people confused at the beginning. The writing style is indeed not good. I'd better read my own writing from the beginning and read other people's writing. I also hope to listen to other people's opinions and make some changes.
看完了全篇，除了觉得自由那篇主角太作以外，其他的感觉都挺好的
It's great, can't wait for the next chapter!
Looks good. Come on, madam.