The Ancient Detective Life of Bawanghua

Chicken talks with duck (bushi) Valery: He asked me what color apple I like. He must not be thinking about what kind of apple I like. He must be thinking about the color of the apple bomb. But he asked me what color I like! He is really, really nice. He is not like that bastard my brother at all. I cried to death! How could there be such a normal little angel among us, Sigma, who is so attractive to me? Sigma: What color apple does Valery like? It's really sad, red is a bit ordinary, cyan looks unappetizing, would gold be too vulgar (otherwise, how about a colorful one)? Alas, why are you so worried about raising a younger brother?

The setting is very novel, I also like the secret guard and the emperor haha Another suggestion for you, you can use more spaces to separate paragraphs. Crowding a large paragraph together will cause dizziness and make it difficult to concentrate on reading. Compare your heart~

What's going on? I just haven't watched the group for a few days and the group is gone. O_o

2020年了嘤嘤嘤

Heartbroken, I thought it was an update

Suddenly it occurred to me that there should be surveillance at home [question mark]. I don't believe that Tim doesn't look at the monitor.

To be honest, I really want to read it all before writing a review. After all, the full text is not long, but I doubt whether I can finish it later, so I will write down some of my feelings after reading it, hoping to help the author in his future writing. Of course, I haven't read it all, so there may be misunderstandings. This is just my personal perspective as a reader. There is absolutely no purpose for causing trouble, calm down! Let's get back to the topic. Logically speaking, I can't stand some parts of Lily A. It's because the a's are written in a too masculine way, making it look like it's actually a romance between a man and a woman covered in lily skin. After all, abo's world view is quite special, so it is quite difficult to express the beauty of femininity in both parties. But self-compulsory hypnosis said that two beautiful ladies posted this type of ao Lily, and I have seen it a lot. But the author's article is quite different, not because it resembles a romance between a man and a woman but a romance between the opposite sex. If you think this is strange, that's right. That's how I feel now. I don't know if I can accurately express the tangled feeling I felt when reading the article. After excluding the ao setting, I understand what I am saying below from the perspective of the three-dimensional reality: I am obviously watching two young ladies falling in love, but people around me say that they are of the opposite sex and think that homosexuality is weird. Do you feel confused? There is a conflict between abo and 3D, so it is rare for ao articles to talk about opposite and same-sex orientations, but focus on the characters themselves. Male, female, and male and female are the main dishes. Abo's settings are ingredients, just like letting the other half wear cat ears and tails to add interest, but it will not make people misunderstand adults, beasts, and love. But this article magically makes abo the main dish, so when I read it, I would have the same entangled feeling as the above example. I always felt that when I read a heterosexual novel, even the sub-CP emphasizing that they are of the same sex highlights the feeling that the main CP is the opposite sex, constantly tearing apart the concept of two women being of the same sex. The setting in the book is in fierce conflict with the concept of 3D, so why do I feel such a conflict in this one when I read other books that are fine. Because even in the abo worldview, the character's own attributes are still highlighted, followed by the abo attributes. This clearly weakens the conflicting sense of gender definitions between different worldviews. In this way, during the reading process, you will naturally ignore the supposedly contradictory issues, so even if you know that it is a female A female O, it still defaults to a female female lily instead of an AO heterosexual novel. On the contrary, this novel first emphasizes the ao attributes and then the character attributes, so the focus becomes that the protagonists are of the opposite sex and love each other, and then the conflict arises that women and girls are not equal to the same sex. What about Lily? It's better to say it's a romance than a lily novel. I watch Lily and Danmei, and what I watch are stories between women and men, and between men. If you insist on emphasizing the concept of gender, then I admit that you have to watch the same-sex stories, abo or sentinel guide type. These are flavor-enhancing auxiliary materials. On the basis of same-sex themes, aa, ab, ao, oo, bo, etc. Increase flexibility. On the contrary, it will become very narrow. It won't have any impact on readers who are used to reading romance, but it's very confusing for someone like me who specializes in a certain category. I am very interested in the subject matter and setting of this article. The author's writing style has no big problems so far. Generally speaking, it is very good. It is just that it emphasizes ao too much and weakens the concept of women too much. I would like to write more about the characteristics of the ladies and highlight the femininity if possible (ps: a The character of the series should not be too masculine. In fact, the special nature of a naturally adds a layer of manly buff to the character, so some neutral words make the character become a man for some reason. However, sometimes it is quite interesting to see the protagonist a in the abo article being sometimes male and sometimes female) Sorry for the long comment, I really didn't mean to attack anyone, it was just my thoughts while reading. It is helpless to turn this into a long comment, because if you don't explain it in detail, people will always suspect it is malicious. It is really not true. Even so, if it still causes discomfort to some friends, I would like to say sorry in advance. In addition, for friends who are passing by and want to read the article, don't be influenced. Everyone's preferences and standards are different. Let's read the article first. As I said before, in general, it is ok. The author worked hard to write the article. I believe that there are points in the ABO series that can be complained about. There is no way to change them. What I read before made me particularly speechless. I was pregnant and asked if it was a boy or a girl? I just want to say that with my poor biological knowledge, differentiation is the setting. After all, it is not impossible for any gene to mutate, but if four x's produce one with y, then this is not a mutation, but a mutation. So you see, author, it's easy to complain. Don't pay too much attention to comments. If you think it's useful to you, just ignore it if it's not. Don't be angry and hurt yourself. Everyone is unique, so be kind to yourself.

Haven't seen you for a long time! Is Lian the kind of person who has unrequited love?

Great writing in big letters, very funny

"Ahhh, I'm really looking forward to the follow-up!"

Come on, author, your writing is very good. Please write more articles.

Looking forward to the following plot! ! Come on!