I will be revising my essay recently, because I felt that my previous writing was not very mature, so I always wanted to find an opportunity to revise it. Later, because I was stuck, Duangeng still extended my claws to revise my essay. (I locked the first world, let's start with the second world)
The copy of this article has also been revised.
Female protagonist: Mo Qing Male protagonist: There is currently no final male protagonist
Fate updateThriller
Demining: Every time the author writes, there may be some internal or external factors that cause the writing style to be unstable, so the heroine's character may be more or less affected or changed.
Finally, I am an unscrupulous author who controls a female protagonist but especially likes to write be endings (this be is a gag where only the female protagonist dies at the end of the story)
The following is the revised copy:
Mo Qing is a face control person.
When Mo Qing went to various film and television worlds through System 1 developed by her brother, she was still very happy, because she could go in and see them, the worlds that people love, yearn for, and derive from.
Part 1:
System No. 1, Who has no feelings for this new student and has accompanied him in many worlds, begins to awaken to feelings:
"No. 1, Humans all have birthdays. From now on, the day you are born again will be your birthday. I will celebrate your birthday with you."
"If you don't have a name, then take my last name and call me Chaosheng."
Part 2:
In the world of "Hua Qiangu", facing Hua Qiangu who is regarded as ominous and bullied:
"When you become stronger, they won't be able to bully you. By then, you won't be able to do many things that you can't do now."
Facing Penglai Xiandao's pursuit of power, Ni Mantian:
"A strong person is not only strong, but also has a kind heart."
Facing Zhuran's rough life experience in Changliu:
"Xiao Zhuran, what my junior uncle wants to teach you is to never forget your original intention and never regret in the future."
"Humans, sometimes it's really strange. We are clearly told to look forward, but yet we always draw a wall and remain trapped in the past."
I haven't finished writing the copy yet, so I'll put it in the main text, haha (akimbo and swaying)
World:
1. Flower Thousand Bones (Completed) [Locked for revision]
2. The Old Nine Gates (Completed) [Not yet revised]
3. Tomb Robbery Notes (Completed) [Not yet revised]
4. A slight smile is charming (not yet opened)
5. The fragrant honey is as heavy as frost (not yet opened)
6. Midsummer Future (not open yet)
7. Shanhe Order (not yet opened)
8. The Serious Case of Anger (Unopened)
9. Ultimate Notes (Unopened)
When the ninth world is finished, this book will be over, over.
Purpose: How lucky I am to be able to go to their world.
Reader comments
Why did I just read this article now? The whole article is smooth and attractive. The sub-CP is really surprising.
女主性格不好,很难看
Nian, just get stuck like this, run away, go to a place without them
Why can't I always print out the main text? I'm always so angry about preventing theft.
Rolls-Royce, are there any updates? Qwq
Come on! Looking forward to subsequent updates!
Mr. Feng actually knows how to cook! [Like]
I'm looking forward to it. Mommy's food is so fragrant. Woohoo.
Finished spreading flowers! Damn, are there any extras?
Please update and wait for the follow-up!
Come on(? ??_??)?
Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers
Why did I just read this article now? The whole article is smooth and attractive. The sub-CP is really surprising.
女主性格不好,很难看
Nian, just get stuck like this, run away, go to a place without them
Why can't I always print out the main text? I'm always so angry about preventing theft.
Rolls-Royce, are there any updates? Qwq
Come on! Looking forward to subsequent updates!
Mr. Feng actually knows how to cook! [Like]
I'm looking forward to it. Mommy's food is so fragrant. Woohoo.
Finished spreading flowers! Damn, are there any extras?
Please update and wait for the follow-up!
Come on(? ??_??)?
Spread the flowers, spread the flowers, spread the flowers