You Asked the Demon King to Form a Team of Heroes?

It's good to watch, but it's too rushed, and there's not enough emotional foreshadowing with Shanks. Carefully calculate how many chapters they have to interact with each other. Compared with other male guests, why is he so good that the heroine can accept the marriage? In the whole story, Marco is the most well-described and most like the male protagonist. My personal suggestion is to have a good grasp of the proportion of the article and the characters. It doesn't matter if the male protagonist changes midway, but the purpose of a love story is to allow readers to see the interaction between the two parties and experience the process of the relationship warming up.

I think this article should have no ending, it's very absurd (I don't mean to say bad, I remember this kind of novel writing method in Chinese). I originally came here with the intention of watching sweet love (T＿T). After reading it, I had mixed feelings. The whole novel gave me a feeling like watching the anime Mushishi. When Ji Linfeng came out in the middle, I thought he was another pervert. After reading it, I found out that he is the only person in the novel who is sober and a little bit perverted.

The extra is completely a personal show of Maki Yoshishima

不知道是不是我平常看得都比较冷，我感觉这本数据已经算是我看完的那么多本里靠前的了，总体还是不错的

Show me another chapter, just like feeding the chickens, cluck, cluck, cluck

So pretty! ! ! !

So many people. Jpg

One bottle for you, one bottle for me, the author comes to dominate the screen~[dog head holding roses][dog head holding roses][loving eyes]

Four commemorations.

The first world ends with flowers [Rainbow Fart] Looking at the baby's daily happiness [Red Heart] Don't stop typing, I'm here with nutritional supplements!

I've come to see you with my nutrient solution in my arms. Hand over the manuscript depositor quickly! ! !

You might get caught again later [hug]

May the nutrient solution turn into a galaxy flowing on the author's keyboard!

So pretty

I saved up "Expedited Nutritional Solution" for Da Da. Remember to take a sip when you stay up late typing~

I saved up "Expedited Nutritional Solution" for Da Da. Remember to take a sip when you stay up late typing~

[Purple Sugar]kswl

No motivation to code? Get a bottle of nutrient solution! No inspiration for writing? Get a bottle of nutrient solution! Nutrient solution - my deepest love for the author~

Thank you to heaven, thank you to earth, thank you for your hard work~

码字加油，营养液管够！

Aim! Launch mines! The author greatly captures my deep love for you!

Little bird girl must be extremely happy [poor]

The nutrient solution is filled up and the battery life is strong!

Throw flowers! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! [Jutang][Jutang][Jutang][Jutang] This writing practice is also very well written.

Meow meow meow

Nutrient solution is here~wait for updates~

Gently I left, just as I came gently, I waved my sleeves and dropped a landmine

The author has great brainstorming skills, come and grab a bottle of nutrient solution and continue your brainstorming~

Ask me how deeply I love you, the nutrient solution represents my heart~

I saved up "Expedited Nutritional Solution" for Da Da. Remember to take a sip when you stay up late typing~