Reincarnation Tour

The blood is boiling and boiling~~

Come on, spread the flowers~~~~

Now I found out that this article was written by U... Bear hug... It means where can we communicate now... WB?□?

I admit that I am an idiot. I actually lost my password and couldn't find it back. I cried and started trying again~~~

Seeing this, I really can't help but say: What a great article! ! !

I have been seeing the chapters updated by the current author, the data of this article, and some of the author's thoughts. Author, please don't be impatient. Let me try to analyze the pros and cons of this article. In fact, although the author's writing style is not excellent, it is fresh, readable, simple and amiable. There are other advantages as well, but I will focus on the shortcomings of this article. First of all, this article has a big problem - there are too many women in the Shu family. Dear author, you are very confident, but for a new reader, what she wants to read most is a simple and bright theme, rather than being dizzy to understand every lady and girl. Let's not talk about the four great classics. It should be noted that the writing styles of the four great classics, whether they are vigorous, bold, elegant, or smart, can be regarded as the pillars of one party and can withstand refinement and scrutiny. The precision and elegance of the words and the vividness of the descriptions are unparalleled by our generation. Coupled with the cultural heritage they carry, no matter how many characters there are, they can capture the hearts of readers and make them interested in learning about them one by one. None of us can compare to this at the moment, so when you haven't perfected your writing skills, you need to pay special attention to the arrangement of characters. Don't have too many girls of the same generation who often appear or are involved in important plots, otherwise it will be a mess and become charming. If the author wants to revise, I might as well suggest that you try to give a simple character review before each wife or girl of the Shu family appears. This introduction requires a lot of effort in writing and language. It must be short, concise, easy to read, and natural and plain to be successful. To some extent, you can imitate the introduction of "Dream of Red Mansions". Secondly, this article has no obvious cuteness. The author may have different views on the story than I do here, so please be calm and listen to me first: In fact, the author, your choice of material is really not bad. You have already highlighted cuteness and suspense in the first few chapters, giving everyone the impression that this is a novel mixed with various elements such as family fights, heirlooms, court battles, palace fights, etc. These "points" have always been hot spots in online articles. However, the author's focus and angle of description may not be favored by others. I understand that what you, the author, want to write about are only women, girls' affairs, girls' feelings and hearts. But author, I would like to remind you that if you just write about the fate of each woman, without a strong cultural heritage or engaging writing for readers to ponder, what else do you think you can do to attract readers to read on? What's on a girl's mind? This cannot be the focus of writing. This is not a stream of consciousness article. Your article is in an online environment, and not many netizens will have the patience to study the "stream of consciousness" or "chronological account" of an ordinary author. Do you want to show the fate of every girl from the Shu family? This is okay, but don't you realize that you haven't identified the real details of the character? I know that the heroine is Shucai, but the focus of the plot is not assigned to Shucai, especially before and after the prince chooses his concubine. Such a cute point has almost no necessary connection with the main character Shucai. All of a sudden, the article loses points for detail. Later, Shucai's role became more important and he began to perform a one-man show. However, first, the background was changed from the more attractive wealthy mansion to the border market. The author did not have strong writing skills to make up for it. The scene where Shucai was sold was a bit boring. After that, Shucai's true love seemed to appear, but please look at the author, what chapter is this in? Readers who have endured the dazzling drama finally saw the good drama of "palace fighting" and "family fighting". Before even taking a glance or two, the author forced him to go to the market to see the homeless people, and then inexplicably looked back at the deep house compound, and then finally looked forward to the prince charming. Readers probably don't have this patience. Author, your writing skills need to be honed, so you don't have to worry too much about this now. But in terms of your current writing style and cultural heritage, the most important thing you need to pay attention to is the plot of the story-especially the main clue of the story-either to make a surprise or to come up with cute points that attract readers. This does not mean that you will no longer insist on yourself, but you must insist on yourself while taking advantage of the readers. There are many articles that describe women's thoughts and destiny and can well combine the background of family, court and court. The author can make a good reference to high-scoring articles of the same type. Again, the plot of the author's article is a weakness. At first glance, the plot unfolds at a good speed. Basically every chapter can bring out a new story, and it is not a running story. But the author's plot just couldn't bring out the energy. I was actually surprised for a while, but then I figured it out. In addition to the detailed combination of characters and plot mentioned above, there is another problem of three-dimensionality. The author's plot gave me the feeling that it was too straightforward, lacked the twists and turns it should have, and had no eye-catching innovations. The tone is lighter, the story is weaker, and the suspense is gone. Naturally, this will not attract readers to continue reading. To sum up, the author should not be anxious to further improve his writing skills, but should think carefully about how to write a story, how to shape a character, and how to make the plot revolve around this character instead of existing in isolation? If there are multiple characters, how should the details be arranged? How should the plot designed for one of the characters include the other characters? Try not to waste a character, a word, or a plot. At this point, theoretical explanations are actually useless, and ordinary guidance is useless. The key is to have examples. Therefore, the author can search for some good articles in related categories and read more to understand the skills.