The training session is over and updates will resume. I just browsed through the published chapters and am preparing to rewrite and overhaul them. However, the outline remains unchanged and I will try to update it daily.
Literary edition copy:
At that time, she was ignorant and did not know what love was;
That year, he was in his prime, his youthful and arrogant years;
At that time, she did not know the misery and only thought that the so-called future was everything;
That year, his eyes flashed, but he couldn't discern the direction of his heart;
The sun was just right that year, but it was destined to be missed.
Concise copywriting:
This is the story of an extremely orthodox key class in a key middle school, a feast unique to youth.
The heroine of the plot is inspired by real events. It is expected to be BE. This article is pure water. I don't want to get into it by mistake.
This is the author's first time writing, so any advice is welcome. The copywriter is incompetent, so please bear with me.