Peach Blossoms Should Be Folded Only to Be Folded

A short story I wrote a year ago should not have been published. At least it should have been revised before being published. But, I still think it should be authentic. No matter what loopholes and flaws there were a year ago, it was still the same person I was a year ago. So, I beg you friends to be merciful when pointing out bugs. Intention: