Some people call her the city that never sleeps.
Some people call her the Night Paris of the East.
Some call her a paradise for adventure and depravity.
She is like a woman who has lived through the ages. After seeing through the world, she is tired of this noisy and prosperous land.
Reader comments
Grandma Feng, you know a lot of things. Make up for it.
Mr. Liang, Mr. Liang~~~~~~~~~~~｀
Speechless
But I'm so touched that you can come back and continue writing like this.
I advise you not to transform into a martial artist.
The article is good and has potential~!
How can novels capture readers? The history of the development of various types of literature is laid out there. The patterns are basically fixed, and there is not much room for innovation. What can be done is naturally to deepen the characterization, mastery of the plot, and characterization. Insufficient publicity is a big influence! If you want to make a change, add "Penguin: San________" as a friend. Believe me, the quality of your works will definitely improve, and you won't be disappointed! !
I adjust my mentality too quickly, and let go of feelings so easily.
Moreover, the explanation of love with Fan is not clear. What attracts her and why? Why do you think it's appropriate? There is too little description of the psychology of marriage and how the two get along. As the ultimate lovers, the process of the two falling in love still needs more words to render. Compared to Zhe and Qu, Fan is too thin.
I suggest you revise it. It's a good article. Don't let it fail.
In addition, "anniversary" seems to apply to people who have passed away, and children should be "one year old".
Is this the Yang Rebel who writes about martial arts in the martial arts version of Ancient Legends?
Grandma Feng, you know a lot of things. Make up for it.
Mr. Liang, Mr. Liang~~~~~~~~~~~｀ Speechless But I'm so touched that you can come back and continue writing like this. I advise you not to transform into a martial artist.
The article is good and has potential~! How can novels capture readers? The history of the development of various types of literature is laid out there. The patterns are basically fixed, and there is not much room for innovation. What can be done is naturally to deepen the characterization, mastery of the plot, and characterization. Insufficient publicity is a big influence! If you want to make a change, add "Penguin: San________" as a friend. Believe me, the quality of your works will definitely improve, and you won't be disappointed! !
I adjust my mentality too quickly, and let go of feelings so easily. Moreover, the explanation of love with Fan is not clear. What attracts her and why? Why do you think it's appropriate? There is too little description of the psychology of marriage and how the two get along. As the ultimate lovers, the process of the two falling in love still needs more words to render. Compared to Zhe and Qu, Fan is too thin. I suggest you revise it. It's a good article. Don't let it fail. In addition, "anniversary" seems to apply to people who have passed away, and children should be "one year old".
Is this the Yang Rebel who writes about martial arts in the martial arts version of Ancient Legends?