I'll Get Angry If I Call You Again [Comprehensive]

Author, your smile makes me a little scared [scared]

The writing is good, please work on it

Does the author have any extra chapters?

My wife wants to keep up the good work, duck

Woo woo woo, I will always love each other and save each other

The author needs to think more about the character of the protagonist and the rationality of the events and the character's reaction. The reason why Sebastian signed the contract with the protagonist is not reasonable. It should be said that he will not sign a contract with someone with the protagonist's personality. The character of the protagonist is not mature enough. Come on~ Your writing style is also good. The character creation still needs a lot of reference and speculation. For example, how other fan novels describe Sebastian's character. Sebastian is different in everyone's mind, so my understanding may be a little biased. Sorry~ You can find the feeling after writing a lot of novels. As a newbie at this time, I can still more or less understand it. It is also difficult for me to grasp the character of the character. Judging from the article you posted a few years ago, I'm afraid your writing style has matured now, so I'm too embarrassed to say anything more. The above is my humble opinion