My Husband Is an Actor

Ahhhh I sent it accidentally! Not finished yet! I have a small suggestion, that is, in the climax part, the pulling and psychological activities between the male and female protagonists can be more and better. Every time I read the climax, there is a sudden feeling of stopping, and I still feel unfinished every time. If the climax part is longer, the reading experience will be better (personal opinion!!!)

Take good care of the old man and wait for your return

The first thirty chapters were very good and interesting, but the transition in the middle gave me a premonition of something bad. When I looked at the end, it turned out to be true... I can't say it was a bad ending or anything else. I just felt that the ending was too hasty and not worthy of the two people who amazed me so much at the beginning. The author still needs to continue to work hard. The story is very good, but the characterization is not strong enough. I feel that Shou's character is not very good. With such a description, it is easy to create the feeling that Gong has paid too much and Shou is not worthy of Gong. Although Shou was heartbroken for Gong in the end. Dan, but in the final analysis, this result is his own "evil", and it is obvious that Shou made this choice in order to escape from the problem. He wanted to return to the real world and escape from everything in the so-called novel world. When I saw Gong wake up later and was so sad, I just wanted to say "Tsk". Moreover, it is clearly written that Jiang Huaiyu wants to give up the place to travel through reality, but later in the text it becomes an attack on himself traveling through the small world, which is really inconsistent. The overall feeling is also brought down because the first part is great but the second part is out of tune. Keep up the good work, author. I look forward to writing better stories with more fleshed-out characters:)

Okay, okay, whenever I start to follow the serialization, the author is destined to stop adding more chapters. I know that this is my fate [Cracked]

Why haven't you [biting the handkerchief] for three years? ! ! ! Please update again! Please