Xie Qianyan was a demon king of the generation, but he raised a disciple who became an elite of the righteous path.
This incident was firmly covered up by him as black history. However, just when he was holding a wedding ceremony in order to fulfill his benefactor's last wish, his apprentice came to the door...
After Xie Qianyan was reborn into modern society, he embarked on a journey to find his own body. On the way, a little tail followed him.
Little Tail: What if, what if my identity is discovered by the master QAQ
Main attack, master and apprentice year, 1vs1, HE, lazy and gorgeous attack x persistent and loyal dog.
In the first half, due to the blood feud, the apprentices are treated very poorly; in the second half, their strength favors each other; and in the end, the master saves the world day by day (?). Also, the disciple has his own difficulties, and the junior sister is the villain, so please be patient~~
～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～﹡～ Instructions for consumption
1. Adhere to 1vs1 and HE unwaveringly, please rest assured the organization.
2. Some are funny and some are sad.
3. Please collect and support me!
4. The author Jun Sanyuan is very busy, and writing is not easy. If you don't like it, please point it out. You don't need to notify me. I hope you can understand me~~~
Continuation of the pre-released article, main focus, system time travel article: The days of playing the role of a mental patient [System]
Introduction: A story about an upright young man who is forced to play the role of a cute girl with a big dick, an anti-social killer, and an elite mercenary leader. The upright (?) Perverted attack I have been in love with the same person for many years, following him through various worlds.
Completed old article, main attack, interstellar ABO: I am probably a fake Beta [mecha]
Intention:
Reader comments
. . . . . Damn, why! ! ! ! ! ! Why not update it! ! ! ! ! ! Is your heart made of iron? ! ? ! ? ! ?
Really, please, please update the article (-???-???-???-???-???___-???-???-???-???-???)
The writing was full of atmosphere, and the twist at the end made me feel goosebumps, and I was waiting for the follow-up game plot!
This reversal of sacrifice is really unexpected. The gentle heroine has the deepest calculation. I can't wait to see her break the game and fight back!
I really like the words written by the author🥲It's so natural, it seems like I can really see everyone's feeling of living again because of Risa. Naruto's life here has become so good and warm... It's so rare to get an article🥲🥲Will the author update more? I also want to see the story of the two of them in the future🥲
???? Please don't stop
Congratulations to my wife on signing the contract! ! ! ! ! Come on come on come on come on
Finished spreading flowers! This article is one of my favorite articles! I really like this style! I have read all the articles, and I will continue to follow new articles in the future! Come on!
Come on, come on, come on＾0＾~
Dong Gong Xiaofeng, Dong Gong has very few articles, I look forward to it
She is willing to wait for me! ! ! ! She gave me the collection and someone wanted to look at me! ! ! !
"Izuna's little niece" caught a big bug for the author~
Nanoha?
Does this mean that Ning Ning is pure 0? Hahaha, miserable
I'm from the forum, so I just saw this, and here are just a few suggestions based on my personal taste:
First of all, there is the problem of copywriting. The copywriting explains the basic situation of the mainland, but there is relatively little description of the protagonist's setting. The overall setting is also relatively ordinary and has weak appeal to readers.
Secondly, the sentences are not concise enough. Using too many long sentences makes it difficult for readers to read and makes it difficult to grasp the key points. Each dialogue section is also too long and a bit unnatural. The description of the character's appearance also needs to be carefully considered, as it is a bit cliche and takes up a lot of space. Using too many ellipses shows that the author is not strong enough.
Third, don't rush to cram all the settings into the first few chapters, you can slowly add them later.
The author can go to Bishui to learn more, and I believe he will write better. I rarely read this type of subject matter, and the comments are superficial. Please forgive me if I am offended.
I love the heroine so much ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
Sword Spirit Became Bai Yueguang After It Was Offline
. . . . . Damn, why! ! ! ! ! ! Why not update it! ! ! ! ! ! Is your heart made of iron? ! ? ! ? ! ?
Really, please, please update the article (-???-???-???-???-???___-???-???-???-???-???)
The writing was full of atmosphere, and the twist at the end made me feel goosebumps, and I was waiting for the follow-up game plot! This reversal of sacrifice is really unexpected. The gentle heroine has the deepest calculation. I can't wait to see her break the game and fight back!
I really like the words written by the author🥲It's so natural, it seems like I can really see everyone's feeling of living again because of Risa. Naruto's life here has become so good and warm... It's so rare to get an article🥲🥲Will the author update more? I also want to see the story of the two of them in the future🥲
???? Please don't stop
Congratulations to my wife on signing the contract! ! ! ! ! Come on come on come on come on
Finished spreading flowers! This article is one of my favorite articles! I really like this style! I have read all the articles, and I will continue to follow new articles in the future! Come on!
Come on, come on, come on＾0＾~
Dong Gong Xiaofeng, Dong Gong has very few articles, I look forward to it
She is willing to wait for me! ! ! ! She gave me the collection and someone wanted to look at me! ! ! !
"Izuna's little niece" caught a big bug for the author~ Nanoha?
Does this mean that Ning Ning is pure 0? Hahaha, miserable
I'm from the forum, so I just saw this, and here are just a few suggestions based on my personal taste: First of all, there is the problem of copywriting. The copywriting explains the basic situation of the mainland, but there is relatively little description of the protagonist's setting. The overall setting is also relatively ordinary and has weak appeal to readers. Secondly, the sentences are not concise enough. Using too many long sentences makes it difficult for readers to read and makes it difficult to grasp the key points. Each dialogue section is also too long and a bit unnatural. The description of the character's appearance also needs to be carefully considered, as it is a bit cliche and takes up a lot of space. Using too many ellipses shows that the author is not strong enough. Third, don't rush to cram all the settings into the first few chapters, you can slowly add them later. The author can go to Bishui to learn more, and I believe he will write better. I rarely read this type of subject matter, and the comments are superficial. Please forgive me if I am offended.
I love the heroine so much ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh