The Protagonist Has Something to Say [Quick Travel]

I want to see a good ending for Qing Baiyi, whether it's reincarnation, reincarnation as an ordinary person, and living an ordinary life, it's so heartbreaking to just disappear like this, QWQ

It's really hard for me to understand your words now (? ? ?? )

! ! ! Is this a confession? [Orange Candy] My horse is too active after eating it! ! ! ! [Love eyes][Love eyes][Love eyes][Bad smile]Ahhhhh

So it was really difficult for people in that era. You said your family loved you and was good for you, but you chose a wrong way that would make you miserable.

Teacher, have you read the plot of the new copy card called "Manhua"? The atmosphere of the article is similar to [Star Eyes]

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I really like the beginning of this chapter, "Dreams seem to be as long as a lifetime." This sentence at the beginning is like a drumstick hitting my head like a bell or an ethereal drum, making a very ethereal tinkling sound. When I read the first chapter, I was amazed by the beautiful ending of the first chapter, but the subsequent plots - out of the need for foreshadowing, were dressed in cliche and boring clothes, just like those clichés that I have seen thousands of times, which made me feel inconsistent and slightly bored - my expectations were once again "failed". I almost left early because of the early pretense of this story and missed its sharp and bright side. Fortunately, I was so bored that I read the story until it lost its disguise. What I would like to give feedback to my wife is that the problem of "reasoning" still exists, and it may be related to the limitation of space. For example, in the later part of the story when the queen is playing in Leith and the queen is pregnant, my personal feeling is that "the character starts to make sense before the inner logic is completed." Why does he feel betrayed? Why do the protagonists think he will be shocked? I know that his love is sincere and passionate, and that people in love always want more and more. But our Maomao's performance in the previous article is clear and brave. He knows the identity of his so-called "lover", knows that they will have no status, and knows that the queen can love him and at the same time rationally suspect and take his life correctly. Of course, it doesn't mean that you won't be sad if you understand the truth, but I personally feel that there is a lack of psychological twist and foreshadowing here. Although there is no explanation as to why, all the characters have determined that "the cat will be affected" will be the result. My final feeling is that the "plot arrangement is to make sense" feels too obvious. I am actually a reader who "if I feel too clearly that the author is outputting ideas, the reading experience will be degraded." But this story didn't make me feel too unhappy. Maybe it's because I agree with what the author narrates. Maybe it's because, instead of "outputting ideas from above," Madam, you are discussing and thinking more equally. You expressed yourself, but very gently. I think you left space for the readers. I personally think that the space left is very important. So, thank you for insisting on writing such works, thank you for bravely pouring your sincerity into your works, and bravely writing what you want to write. While reading, I was so moved that I wanted to cry many times.

[Purple Sugar] kswl really likes this kind of mutual appreciation that comes naturally.

I've thought about what it would be like if Shi Qiang met Luo's daughter, so that's probably what happened in this article.

So sensitive. Hug the poor baby.

I just mentioned my bald head three times! My hair is in great shape now!

Not bad, pretty good-looking

Where should I find immortal products? I feel confused when I look around at the article.

"Words are torture" is a big bug for the author~ So

Thanks for the limited fee! It's so innovative, I want to see it again

Madam, I love you, be good, eat well and sleep well. If you feel that writing is a burden and our urging makes you miserable, then just ignore us. Nothing is more important than yourself. Make yourself happy first and then consider other things. I will wait for you. My wife's writing is really beautiful. I love both Uncle Snake and Brother Ming so much, come on, come on, come on!

Please, can you update 1000 chapters in anger so that I can enjoy watching it?

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Dad, are Xiaoguang going to study nuclear fusion? Update update update…

Here it comes~ The author's writing is great, but there is a blocked word, you can change it to a word with similar meaning [dog head holding rose]

When will it be updated?

"---"It's fun to say he's nice..." This is a big catch for the author~ Before I went to Shanghai, I was like a kitten when I ate at home. The cat-shaped heroine is right.