[Transformers/tfp] Turn Around for a Moment (Mop)

A particularly good article. I first read it when I was a real elementary school student, and now I have been working for two years! The significance of this article has already surpassed that of ordinary fans

I feel that the connection of the article is a bit abrupt, and the beginning of each chapter has nothing to do with the previous chapter. Personally, I feel that the heroine is suddenly taking care of the medicine garden, and then meets the golden generation. Then suddenly I had another dream, but I don't know what it was, which led the heroine to go out alone to experience. Moreover, the article did not clarify the specific age of the heroine. Now it feels like the heroine has just awakened her martial arts spirit, met Nana and the others, and then suddenly wants to go out to practice. Looking at it this way, I don't know how old the heroine is. It would be inappropriate if she was just 6 years old and went out to practice. I think my wife can pay attention to some details when she writes later. For example, please tell me the current age of the heroine and let me know which time period this is. Overall, I really like the setting and content of the author (=^▽^=). I hope that I can write better and better in the future (*^▽^*)