First edition copy:
In terms of subject matter, it's a bit outrageous because it's about soul travel...
In terms of writing, it's very good, because I'm still a newcomer...
The setting is very unconventional because it resembles Xiaoyan...
Quack... The crow flies by
That's it
Someone who can't write copy…
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Reprint copy:
It's hard to say who cheated whom, it's hard to say who betrayed whom
But life is a big drama
A person who forgets his past from the very beginning
One who had no intention of being honest in the first place
I am a cold-eyed person, but I want to jump into this chaotic world of mortals
It's so sad and pitiful. You need to know that this kind of love must be exchanged for one's life...
(The copywriter is not responsible. If the article does not match the copywriting, eh... I can only say that the copywriting is just a gimmick, ha)
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Thinking about two questions...
First, I changed this article back to its original intention, which is not BL, but BG
Second, change the name of the article to "Green Dog"
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Announcement:
It will be overhauled during the summer vacation and will gradually resume updates.
The tone of the full text will be adjusted (although it is a bit unkind to say that the full text is in this turbulent state...)
The language style will be overhauled and some plots will be deleted.
Abandon the so-called ancient style that is not only unskilled but also poorly used, and use a pseudo-Red Mansion accent
Many plots are completely tasteless; many descriptions are not even considered tasteless... Hiding my face in tears
That's almost it
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