
Mortal World
凡尘
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 85k Words
- Chapters
- 11
- Genre
- Danmei (BL)
- Era
- Ancient Era
- Updated
- 5y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
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9.0Score
162Nutrition
18kClicks / chapter
186Comments
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Ancient Style Nonsense
What I mean is, let's all come together to cultivate immortality and be reborn~ (elements include martial arts plotting)
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A very interesting story. My biggest feeling after reading this article is a sentence that I have remembered for many years: "It seems that sweetness only lasts for a moment, but bitterness lasts for many years." Yangge was not Yangge at first. He lived in Shen Yangge's body and became "he should", which has been carried out throughout his life. I read this novel in two days, with more than 500,000 words, but it covers a person's hundred years. It is obvious that the lonely time has long surpassed his happy memories, the one hundred and eighty-sixth year of Youdu, and the reincarnation of August 6th. He lived for many, many years, and he asked many, many times, "If I am not Shen Yangge", "Maybe you have found the wrong person", "What should you do if you find the wrong person?" Each sentence stepped on my heartstrings, and the echoes continued. Is he Shen Yangge? Or Shen Yangge? The title "Missing Youdu" is so amazing. At first, I was confused at the beginning. Does "Not Seeing" mean that I never want to go back to Youdu? From Xiao Ning's perspective, I thought he wanted to be free, he wanted to go out and see himself and perform Yangko. I thought he was a flying bird - but I was wrong. As soon as I turned my pen, I never thought that the following plot was about the "disappearance" of Yangko, about a hundred years of solitude, about the ups and downs of the world, about being home, but not seeming to be home? Everyone looked for the shadow of City Master Shen in him. What a knife. Everything he experienced lasted even longer than the warmth of home. It was really hard but it lasted for many years. I can't forget Shen Yangge's drop of blood and tears... Over and over again, weeping blood every sentence, taking me home with every word... At night, my thoughts entangled me one by one. I want to write a lot, but my words can't cover his majestic but also tragic and majestic two lives... Xql too It's painful, I always wonder why all living beings are always sinister and two-faced, but I continue to look, I see not just the sword pavilion, not just the villain, I see many, Jiang Nan, Sword Lord, Feng Shao Pavilion Master, Xiaoyu, I see Fu Xue turning back to his hand again. I really want to cry, it seems that all living beings are passionate and there is great love in the world. He lived as Shen Yangge, he became Shen Yangge, maybe he has always been him. I still remember that he initially did it for his family, but then the journey was long and he wanted to save more and more people. In the end, the moth flew into the flame, burning up his heart, soul, body, emotions and desires, and his whole life. Destiny, such a doomed and painful word. But I'm still glad that they still have a good ending in the second episode... From now on, Xiaoning and Yangge, and Yangge will be accompanied by Xiaoning for the rest of his life. They still have many centuries to come. Teacher, I like your writing very much. I have seen your tweets in many places before. I am looking forward to more stories from you (wipe away tears). I cried at night. But it's very interesting and I like it very much. JJ is destined to bury many stories, but I am very happy and honored to see the world in your writing. I also look forward to the teacher continuing to write.
Ah yes, this is a sweet fanfic (Sister Yiyi is not allowed to read it)
Let me give you a little motivation, I came here for "The Brilliant Star", The result is here for you. In comparison, you will find that you are much better than many people. Come on, keep at it, you might be able to do it.
Finish spreading flowers Want to see advance payment 1
Update soon. I just wanted to watch the next episode.
However, it's very uncomfortable to be stuck here QAQ
Hey, hey, hey, God, his last stubbornness
The male protagonist must be attracted to her biologically, right?
Ha
Big————When will it be updated [crying] [crying] [crying]
It's been a few months. Can you tell me the truth? Just say it straight away if you give up. It's really unnecessary to keep telling others that you haven't given up.
Lele! My mom, I was so excited, so surprised and surprised that I was moved to tears. I haven't had a lot of time to read articles recently, nor have I been catching up on updates like I did some time ago. I feel guilty after seeing you finish it. I'm really incoherent today. In a word, I will always love you, pen refill! Then I quietly asked what I wanted to do when I downloaded the book. I was looking forward to the balance master (doge).
Come on, come on, collected it
Click on the claws, I still have two weeks to go on vacation [crying]