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Lin Zishen, a ninth-level master of the wood system, blew himself up and died. He came to a strange world and took over a human body that was undergoing trials but was abandoned by his teammates.
On the first day, a petite and cute hamster stared at his cherry red fruit with saliva;
The next day, a noble and cool cat snatched away his grilled fish with one paw;
On the third day, a pitiful fox set his sights on his roast;
On the fourth day, a well-behaved and docile rabbit took a fancy to his orange grass;
That afternoon, the trial was over, and the forest was overjoyed that no more creatures would compete with him for food;
The next day, someone scratched the door of his house, and the petite and cute boy said pitifully with watery eyes: "... Master, I'm hungry~"
The next day, the noble and cool young man knocked on the door of his house unceremoniously and said, "Hey, why don't you go cook!"
On the seventh day, the beautiful young man leaned against the door of his house and said shyly: "... I'm so hungry QAQ"
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Later, Lin Zichen sadly discovered that there were different creatures holding on to the door of his house every day!
And he only eats and doesn't work!
This article is also known as "Guide to Raising Fairies", "Conquering the World with Fairies", "How many fairies have come to seek refuge with me today?" ", "Can you let me be an ordinary person? ! The perfect man in the eyes of fairies
Tips: I joined V today (2018.4.16)~ Thank you all for accompanying me all the way, and I hope to continue to love Ni Meng with you for a long time~
1V1, the main character, Su Susu, it's so cool, the hero is a golden man XD~
The author has a fragile heart, please take care of him
No comments, thank you~
The next new article, there are always fairies coming to me (through the book)
There are always goblins who come to me (through the book)
On his first day in this world, Xie Wenhan picked up a monster kid. This monster kid could not do anything else, but he could make wind and rain and still make ends meet;
On the seventh day after traveling into this world, Xie Wenhan was entrusted with a monster cub by a monster couple. The monster cub only wanted to eat, and would even bite you if you were in a hurry;
On the fifteenth day after traveling to this world, Xie Wenhan became a glorious people's teacher.
However——
"Teacher, teacher! What should I do if I can't close my tail??!"
"Teacher, teacher! My wings have changed color! I'm so scared, teacher!"
"Teacher, teacher! Mom and dad don't want me anymore, let me sleep at your house!"
"Teacher, I'm so hungry--!!"
Xie Wenhan: "So, I traveled to this world just to raise a group of monster cubs?"
Monsters: "No! You are obviously here to save our aesthetics and bring beauty to the three realms!"
Intention:
Reader comments
I still liked this article very much. I clicked in after reading the text and read it carefully. But it doesn't feel very appetizing. I originally wanted to put it in the final scoring section, but there were too many words to allow me to post it, so I put it here. First of all, the supporting characters seem to have similar personalities. When faced with problems related to the male protagonist, he seems to become the same person. A more classic example is psychological description: almost all psychological descriptions use pauses and repetitions of this sentence pattern. Similar to "He must, must work hard!" This kind of thing. And the male protagonist's feelings towards his pets are a bit like a harem. Maybe it's because they have intelligence. His attitude towards ordinary pets is actually reasonable, but if the other party has intelligence, it feels a bit scumbag. Moreover, his pets also used his sympathy to frame Gong, which smelled like green tea. Let's talk about passers-by. There are two types of descriptions of passers-by, one is mindless bragging, and the other is sarcastic and then slapped in the face and then turns into mindless bragging... In fact, it stands to reason that it is normal for a cool article to write these things, and I also like the slap-in-the-face plot. But the author spends too much space writing these, which gives people the feeling of bragging for the sake of bragging, and it is repeated many times... Finally, there is the emotional scene. Attacking and receiving have feelings almost from the first chapter, which is not a problem, but almost in the last few chapters, the relationship between attack and attack is just a partner's emotion. In the last few chapters, Gong suddenly confessed his love, and then suddenly got together in the next chapter... It always felt a bit too sudden. Apart from these, I think the writing is very good. The plot in the later stages is a bit rushed, but I think it feels much more streamlined compared to the middle and early stages.
, I can't get enough, I also want to watch the side story QAQ
It's over! I can't see Shen Chen anymore! But there is Hanhan, haha, I am so carefree! Come on Qianhang↖(^ω^)↗What the hell?
Alas, it's over like this
Congratulations on the completion, I feel so sad to leave you.
It's over so soon, so sad
I can't understand this post version extra
Hahaha, congratulations on the completion. I'm late. There's also a big red envelope.
Congratulations on finishing spreading flowers
I finally finished reading. I originally just wanted to read the book in silence, but I still couldn't help but complain. Should the author repeat their names every time he mentions a few cute animals? Is this to make up for the word count?
The last episode was so drunk
, It's over, although it was already finished when I read it... I really pray for more articles of this type, welcome all who come, proud. Jpg
I always feel that the love of pig's feet is too far-fetched
(* ̄3 ̄)╭?? The little flowers will hit you
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh To to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to To to to toe!!!
The ending is too hasty and a bit unfinished
Hurry (oo)`?) Humph
Where's Little Taozi? Who will give birth to them?
Good-looking(??ω??)??
Hahahaha, I realized after reading this novel that it was actually written a long time ago! Very pretty~
Hey, hey, that little Tengteng who accompanies the protagonist has no sense of existence anymore.
I still liked this article very much. I clicked in after reading the text and read it carefully. But it doesn't feel very appetizing. I originally wanted to put it in the final scoring section, but there were too many words to allow me to post it, so I put it here. First of all, the supporting characters seem to have similar personalities. When faced with problems related to the male protagonist, he seems to become the same person. A more classic example is psychological description: almost all psychological descriptions use pauses and repetitions of this sentence pattern. Similar to "He must, must work hard!" This kind of thing. And the male protagonist's feelings towards his pets are a bit like a harem. Maybe it's because they have intelligence. His attitude towards ordinary pets is actually reasonable, but if the other party has intelligence, it feels a bit scumbag. Moreover, his pets also used his sympathy to frame Gong, which smelled like green tea. Let's talk about passers-by. There are two types of descriptions of passers-by, one is mindless bragging, and the other is sarcastic and then slapped in the face and then turns into mindless bragging... In fact, it stands to reason that it is normal for a cool article to write these things, and I also like the slap-in-the-face plot. But the author spends too much space writing these, which gives people the feeling of bragging for the sake of bragging, and it is repeated many times... Finally, there is the emotional scene. Attacking and receiving have feelings almost from the first chapter, which is not a problem, but almost in the last few chapters, the relationship between attack and attack is just a partner's emotion. In the last few chapters, Gong suddenly confessed his love, and then suddenly got together in the next chapter... It always felt a bit too sudden. Apart from these, I think the writing is very good. The plot in the later stages is a bit rushed, but I think it feels much more streamlined compared to the middle and early stages.
, I can't get enough, I also want to watch the side story QAQ
It's over! I can't see Shen Chen anymore! But there is Hanhan, haha, I am so carefree! Come on Qianhang↖(^ω^)↗What the hell?
Alas, it's over like this
Congratulations on the completion, I feel so sad to leave you.
It's over so soon, so sad
I can't understand this post version extra
Hahaha, congratulations on the completion. I'm late. There's also a big red envelope.
Congratulations on finishing spreading flowers
I finally finished reading. I originally just wanted to read the book in silence, but I still couldn't help but complain. Should the author repeat their names every time he mentions a few cute animals? Is this to make up for the word count?
The last episode was so drunk
, It's over, although it was already finished when I read it... I really pray for more articles of this type, welcome all who come, proud. Jpg
I always feel that the love of pig's feet is too far-fetched
(* ̄3 ̄)╭?? The little flowers will hit you
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh To to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to to To to to toe!!!
The ending is too hasty and a bit unfinished
Hurry (oo)`?) Humph
Where's Little Taozi? Who will give birth to them?
Good-looking(??ω??)??
Hahahaha, I realized after reading this novel that it was actually written a long time ago! Very pretty~
Hey, hey, that little Tengteng who accompanies the protagonist has no sense of existence anymore.