Su Qinghan had always felt that she had been abandoned for five years, so when Lin Mu came back, she was filled with hatred, revenge, and indifference, but that man always accepted her completely without any complaints. Little do we know that there are too many unpredictable things in this world, and there are always many hardships between lovers. Fortunately, time flies by and we have not missed it after all.
In fact, in a nutshell, it is a story about protection. The characters should be regarded as a gentle and loyal dog x a proud little white rabbit. The full text is slightly sadistic, but there are no surprises. It should be a short story, guaranteed to be HE.
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It feels a little different from the copywriting. I really like this setting. Come back soon.
The snake ancestor gives birth to a child...
Bser is here.
First of all, there is the issue of the title of the novel. If it is not chosen according to the Jinbang prose routine, ordinary ancient Chinese may attract fewer readers. This needs to be considered by yourself.
Secondly, as for the copywriting, I feel that my wife wants to highlight a story that is suppressed first and then expanded. However, the first three paragraphs are too suppressed and the subsequent descriptions are not detailed enough, which makes people feel unhappy. It is recommended to delete the first three paragraphs and highlight the cute points from the fourth paragraph. It should be more interesting to describe the cunning and cute little liar character of the heroine.
Let's talk about the main text, I can feel that the writing is smooth and the writing is good, but the name can not be so casual... I don't know if Xu Xian will have a role in the future, it is just a foreshadowing. If he is just a soy sauce, it will be a bit awkward to have the same name as the white lady's husband.
Come on, the setting makes people want to read on. It's no problem to insist on writing V.
Then there was no more updates
Moxi Moxi, do you still remember your other articles? Why did you start a trap again without updating qwq
I feel relieved to see that I'm not the only one crying/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
Very touched.
I would like to ask, will there be a Xu Yue extra?
It feels a little different from the copywriting. I really like this setting. Come back soon.
The snake ancestor gives birth to a child...
Bser is here. First of all, there is the issue of the title of the novel. If it is not chosen according to the Jinbang prose routine, ordinary ancient Chinese may attract fewer readers. This needs to be considered by yourself. Secondly, as for the copywriting, I feel that my wife wants to highlight a story that is suppressed first and then expanded. However, the first three paragraphs are too suppressed and the subsequent descriptions are not detailed enough, which makes people feel unhappy. It is recommended to delete the first three paragraphs and highlight the cute points from the fourth paragraph. It should be more interesting to describe the cunning and cute little liar character of the heroine. Let's talk about the main text, I can feel that the writing is smooth and the writing is good, but the name can not be so casual... I don't know if Xu Xian will have a role in the future, it is just a foreshadowing. If he is just a soy sauce, it will be a bit awkward to have the same name as the white lady's husband. Come on, the setting makes people want to read on. It's no problem to insist on writing V.
Then there was no more updates
Moxi Moxi, do you still remember your other articles? Why did you start a trap again without updating qwq
I feel relieved to see that I'm not the only one crying/(ㄒoㄒ)/~~
Very touched. I would like to ask, will there be a Xu Yue extra?