There is the biggest secret in the Da Yang Dynasty: the jade seal passed down to the country has been lost.
Legend has it that eleven years ago, Emperor Yang took away the power, brotherhood, and position of his brother Emperor Yuan, but the imperial seal disappeared together with Wanyancuo, the son of Emperor Yuan who was the only one to escape the killing.
But in the final analysis, does this have anything to do with my family running a jade shop?
Wait... What? Was the imperial seal carved by my great-grandfather's great-grandfather's great-grandfather? The first beauty in the world? Is it related to the fact that my uncle's family was wiped out?
Coco... But why is the jade seal in the hands of Xiao Yao, the famous general in Jiuzhou?
This article is a story about an unlucky heroine who disguises herself as a man in order to avenge her hatred and steal a jade seal from the country that she has a close relationship with.
1V1, no noobs, there is a plot, light-hearted and a little sadistic, fairies are welcome to join in~
Reader comments
It's been a long time since I've seen an article written in the first person. Come on! !
First person - well written.
But I don't like the first person too much. The writing is good, but the writing is relatively cold, probably because I don't read the first person very much.
I like it and have collected it! Great effort!
Suddenly fell in love with Brother Huoshui_(:зゝ∠)_
It is recommended to refer to Nalan Chexue's "Jinjiang Literature City Special Effects Code", which is very practical and helpful for copywriting 2333
(⊙o⊙) Oh, by the way, regarding the plot measurable issue, you really misunderstood what I said. I explained it below in that comment =w=
This ginger is fine, haha
00 Has been received. The writing style and ideas are all excellent. I haven't seen the key points yet, but looking at the foreshadowing arrangements in the first few chapters, there will definitely be a bloody storm behind it. Keep at it and gold will always shine.
Catching bugs, "Wonderful, wonderful" in paragraph 24 of Chapter 4 is spelled as "second, wonderful". Please be more careful in the future O(∩_∩)O
The writing is very good.
The copy is a bit long, maybe it could be more concise to attract the little angels.
I was so scared that when I read the copy, I thought it was a joke...
Come on ?( ?? ? ? ?)?
Wenwen is good, take it away
It's well written. Maybe many people don't like the first person! So I haven't seen much, so I think it's okay.
It has the feeling of a long flowing stream. I wonder if it's because of the first person perspective, but I feel a little sad for the heroine!
Why hasn't Mr. Bo Yang updated? Come on, Mr. Bo Yang! Haha, look at my waving little claws
I want to fatten up and come to see you. Please don't abandon the pit secretly (*￣3￣)╭?? The little flower will hit you
This is from the forum~Already collected!
Let me simply tell you my opinion. Of course, I am a newcomer, so don't blame me if you say something is not right_(:зゝ∠)_
①The first person should be as natural as possible in terms of psychological description? I don't know how to describe it, but the first person is indeed difficult to grasp, mainly because it can easily appear artificial if you are not careful. The author is fine so far, there is no big problem, it's just that the beginning could be more concise www
② It is best to put double quotation marks in the dialogue. This will make it easier to read, and the paragraphs do not need to be too close. It seems a bit painful to go one sentence at a time ~ it is easy to create the illusion of incoherence.
③ Overall, it's good. Although I've only watched the beginning so far, I can't predict the later stages. It's great for a newcomer to be able to do this. I hope the plot can also be perfect, let's encourage each other!
It's been a long time since I've seen an article written in the first person. Come on! !
First person - well written. But I don't like the first person too much. The writing is good, but the writing is relatively cold, probably because I don't read the first person very much.
I like it and have collected it! Great effort!
Suddenly fell in love with Brother Huoshui_(:зゝ∠)_ It is recommended to refer to Nalan Chexue's "Jinjiang Literature City Special Effects Code", which is very practical and helpful for copywriting 2333 (⊙o⊙) Oh, by the way, regarding the plot measurable issue, you really misunderstood what I said. I explained it below in that comment =w=
This ginger is fine, haha
00 Has been received. The writing style and ideas are all excellent. I haven't seen the key points yet, but looking at the foreshadowing arrangements in the first few chapters, there will definitely be a bloody storm behind it. Keep at it and gold will always shine.
Catching bugs, "Wonderful, wonderful" in paragraph 24 of Chapter 4 is spelled as "second, wonderful". Please be more careful in the future O(∩_∩)O
The writing is very good.
The copy is a bit long, maybe it could be more concise to attract the little angels.
I was so scared that when I read the copy, I thought it was a joke...
Come on ?( ?? ? ? ?)?
Wenwen is good, take it away
It's well written. Maybe many people don't like the first person! So I haven't seen much, so I think it's okay.
It has the feeling of a long flowing stream. I wonder if it's because of the first person perspective, but I feel a little sad for the heroine!
Why hasn't Mr. Bo Yang updated? Come on, Mr. Bo Yang! Haha, look at my waving little claws
I want to fatten up and come to see you. Please don't abandon the pit secretly (*￣3￣)╭?? The little flower will hit you
This is from the forum~Already collected! Let me simply tell you my opinion. Of course, I am a newcomer, so don't blame me if you say something is not right_(:зゝ∠)_ ①The first person should be as natural as possible in terms of psychological description? I don't know how to describe it, but the first person is indeed difficult to grasp, mainly because it can easily appear artificial if you are not careful. The author is fine so far, there is no big problem, it's just that the beginning could be more concise www ② It is best to put double quotation marks in the dialogue. This will make it easier to read, and the paragraphs do not need to be too close. It seems a bit painful to go one sentence at a time ~ it is easy to create the illusion of incoherence. ③ Overall, it's good. Although I've only watched the beginning so far, I can't predict the later stages. It's great for a newcomer to be able to do this. I hope the plot can also be perfect, let's encourage each other!