Can't write copy
Characteristics: Awkward
Iceberg attack (not sure about this)
stand-in
Little abuse
slow heat
Bloody plot
Wait wait wait...
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What if the copywriting were changed to this?
He said: "It turns out that no matter how glorious, powerful or tenacious anything in this world is, it will not last forever."
He said: "If he knew, he would be happy..."
He said: "If he is not dead, if he is alive, if he comes to you, will you... Like him?"
He said: "Some things have passed, and they exist. But they only belong to the past."
He said: "Your Majesty, I used to like you very much. Maybe you know, maybe you don't know, maybe you know but pretend you don't know... But it doesn't matter now."
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The first copy is really ridiculous, although I prefer this way of marking attributes.
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