When Wen Tiantian was fourteen, her half-brother from Beijing came to pick her up.
The elder brother who looks like an old man, the stepmother who dresses in strange clothes, the young brother with short hair, the murderous younger sister, etc., Tiantian who comes to Beijing will meet them one by one, and a wonderful life will unfold.
Foodie Sweet:
At the palace chrysanthemum banquet, Yu immersed himself in eating among the delicate flowers of the noble lady. After a small burp, he sighed with satisfaction: "It's delicious, I'm happy!"
Primitive human reproduction investigation plan launched!
"Touch!" The table in front of the eldest princess was smashed into pieces with her slap.
Good luck and sweetness:
On the street, a girl in pink fled in front of her in embarrassment, followed by a string of fierce thugs.
"How dare you seize the women of our ancestors in broad daylight!"
With his fresh and handsome appearance, his graceful temperament, and his righteous and awe-inspiring actions, the eldest brother, a hero who saves a beauty, is more romantic than anyone else.
Then, the girl in pink was stunned for a moment, then fell in front of Tiantian, "Girl! Help me!"
Being sprayed sweetly:
At the Mid-Autumn Festival family banquet at Prince Ning's Mansion, "When will the bright moon come? Ask the sky with your wine."
Listening to the eldest sister's talented poems, the mooncakes in my mouth seem to be even more delicious.
"Poof!"
A mouthful of tea spurted out in front of her face, directly washing away the mooncake residue at the corner of her mouth.
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Black short fried hahahahahaha so appropriate
Really, I'm talking nonsense seriously. From the first chapter to now, I have been in the coffin without moving. These rescue processes are told over and over again, and they are said repeatedly. Insignificant words between the supporting characters are also mentioned. It takes so much trouble to save a person. How do you describe the subsequent plot? How many words do you want to enter into the main text? I know you want to say, how powerful this coffin is, this protagonist is not sharp because of the protagonist's halo, everything is just natural, but you emphasize it too much! Can you make it simpler? The writing seems pretty good, why is it so wordy? Too thin! Can the process be speeded up? There is too much talk about settings. It is not until chapter 13 that we are still talking about settings, and the whole chapter is about the process of creation. Anyone who has read the novel should be familiar with it, right? There are so many things about Christianity, you can get a rough idea of it with just a few ears, right? You said so much, aren't you just emphasizing the second design? If you don't want us to get confused, then if you make a second statement, wouldn't it be the end of two paradises? Why don't we just explain a little bit about what second heaven is? There's really no need to go into detail! The only interesting thing is the trial, and then you simplify it? No problem. Then when you tell other stories, you tell more than the protagonist's trial? ? ? ? Do you know how boring it looks from a serious outsider's perspective? ! I like Lucifer, but brother, the protagonist of your book is not Lucifer. Why do you talk so much about him and create a character who is very CP? Then there are a bunch of unexplained brief introductions. Look how many words you have written? How many chapters? Why did Lucifer pull out 6? Can't we just deal with this kind of thing in one sentence? After reading about the protagonist for a long time, I went out for a walk. I learned magic and became mature. Just gone? ? ? ? It's just this little thing. How many chapters have you written? Look at the chapters you've written. How much are your settings, foreshadowing, and background information that have nothing to do with plot development? Is the system too verbose? Seriously stealing the spotlight? How much do you want to portray them as innocent? ? However, apart from the cat image, I have no favorable impression. With just such a bunch of settings, you just entered v? You haven't even left the coffin, your life in mainland China hasn't even started, you haven't even officially met, you can't see the plot line at all, it's a bunch of nonsense, and you haven't written anything in 18 chapters, so you entered V? ? ? Brother, if you weren't so verbose, I'd still be very optimistic about your writing. I can only say that it's a pity. 2 Points is an encouragement to hope you can work harder.
I'm so happy that Da Da showed up! My king had a great time eating in this chapter, the card contains a huge amount of information! Girls are so cute~
Black short fried hahahahahaha so appropriate
Really, I'm talking nonsense seriously. From the first chapter to now, I have been in the coffin without moving. These rescue processes are told over and over again, and they are said repeatedly. Insignificant words between the supporting characters are also mentioned. It takes so much trouble to save a person. How do you describe the subsequent plot? How many words do you want to enter into the main text? I know you want to say, how powerful this coffin is, this protagonist is not sharp because of the protagonist's halo, everything is just natural, but you emphasize it too much! Can you make it simpler? The writing seems pretty good, why is it so wordy? Too thin! Can the process be speeded up? There is too much talk about settings. It is not until chapter 13 that we are still talking about settings, and the whole chapter is about the process of creation. Anyone who has read the novel should be familiar with it, right? There are so many things about Christianity, you can get a rough idea of it with just a few ears, right? You said so much, aren't you just emphasizing the second design? If you don't want us to get confused, then if you make a second statement, wouldn't it be the end of two paradises? Why don't we just explain a little bit about what second heaven is? There's really no need to go into detail! The only interesting thing is the trial, and then you simplify it? No problem. Then when you tell other stories, you tell more than the protagonist's trial? ? ? ? Do you know how boring it looks from a serious outsider's perspective? ! I like Lucifer, but brother, the protagonist of your book is not Lucifer. Why do you talk so much about him and create a character who is very CP? Then there are a bunch of unexplained brief introductions. Look how many words you have written? How many chapters? Why did Lucifer pull out 6? Can't we just deal with this kind of thing in one sentence? After reading about the protagonist for a long time, I went out for a walk. I learned magic and became mature. Just gone? ? ? ? It's just this little thing. How many chapters have you written? Look at the chapters you've written. How much are your settings, foreshadowing, and background information that have nothing to do with plot development? Is the system too verbose? Seriously stealing the spotlight? How much do you want to portray them as innocent? ? However, apart from the cat image, I have no favorable impression. With just such a bunch of settings, you just entered v? You haven't even left the coffin, your life in mainland China hasn't even started, you haven't even officially met, you can't see the plot line at all, it's a bunch of nonsense, and you haven't written anything in 18 chapters, so you entered V? ? ? Brother, if you weren't so verbose, I'd still be very optimistic about your writing. I can only say that it's a pity. 2 Points is an encouragement to hope you can work harder.
I'm so happy that Da Da showed up! My king had a great time eating in this chapter, the card contains a huge amount of information! Girls are so cute~